June 12, 2026
I moved to new accommodation and I start to explore a new district around.
The situation with cafes in the area turned out to be much better than I expected.
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast arounded green rice fields.
Then I would just riding thought the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
The buildings are spread out in the area, so you could see a lot of green around the road.
I have a bot that sends me sunset quality updates every day and depending on them I would go to the shore.
There I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot).
I also sent the pictures to my closest people in Russia to share the emotions with them and tease them a bit.
I have been feeling really good at some background level for the last few weeks. And don't definitely understand why.
I guess the answer is in all the little things above.
Flow of Thoughts flow
Flow of Thoughts
I moved to new accommodation and I started to explore athe new district around there.
I moved to new accommodation and I started to explore the new district around there.
There's one specific district around your accommodation, so it's better to use "the"
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast arounded green rice fields.
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast around green rice fields.
Then I would just ridinge thought the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
Then I would just ride though the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
There I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching onthe waves and after-sunset sky reflectionthe reflection of the sunset in the sky, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot).
There I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching the waves and the reflection of the sunset in the sky, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot).
I also sent the pictures to my closest peoplefriends in Russia to share the emotions with them and tease them a bit.
I also sent the pictures to my closest friends in Russia to share the emotions with them and tease them a bit.
And I don't definitely understand why. And I don't definitely understand why.
Thoughts flow
I moved in to new accommodation and I start toed exploreing a new district around.
I moved in to new accommodation and started exploring a new district.
The situation with cafes in the area turned out to be much better than I expected.
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast asurrounded by green rice fields.
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast surrounded by green rice fields.
Then I would just ridinge throught the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
Then I would just ride through the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
The buildings are spread out in the area, so you could see a lot of greenery around the road. The buildings are spread out in the area, so you could see a lot of greenery around the road.
I have a bot that sends me sunset quality updates every day and depending on them I would go to the shore.
There, I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot). There, I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot).
I also sent the pictures to my closest people in Russia to share the emotions with them and tease them a bit.
I have been feeling really good at some background level for the lpast few weeks, and I don't exactly understand why.
I have been feeling really good at some background level for the past few weeks, and I don't exactly understand why.
And don't definitely understand why.(combined with previous)
(combined with previous)
I guess the answer is in all the little things above.
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Very good, just some minor edits to make it sound more natural. I'm glad you're settling in well at your new place, and taking time to appreciate nature.
I moved to a new accommodationplace and I started to explore a newthe district around it.
I moved to a new place and started to explore the district around it.
1) "Accommodation" is extremely formal when using it for the place you live. Usually, one would say "house," "apartment," "place," etc.. "Place" is the most generic, so I picked that.
2) You've introduced us to a place you live with "a new place," so we know we're talking about a location already. "A district" could mean the district you live in or a district that's nearby, so you should single out one option with "the". "My district" would also be ok.
The situation with cafes in the area turned out to be much better than I expected.
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast asurrounded by green rice fields.
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast surrounded by green rice fields.
Then I would justgo riding throught the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
Then I go riding through the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
The bBuildings here are spread out in the area, so you couldan see a lot of greenery around the road.
Buildings here are spread out, so you can see a lot of greenery around the road.
1) The first clause edit is just a suggestion that sounds more natural.
2) "could" puts this clause in the past.
I have a bot that sends me sunset quality updates every day and depending on them, I wouldmight go to the shore.
I have a bot that sends me sunset quality updates every day and depending on them, I might go to the shore.
"would" in this context makes it sound like you might have gone there in the past, not the general present.
There, I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and the after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours, which I do a lot).
There, I experience a gentle dopamine boost from watching waves and the after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours, which I do a lot).
I also sent the pictures to my closest people in Russia to share the emotions of it with them and tease them a bit.
I also sent the pictures to my closest people in Russia to share the emotion of it with them and tease them a bit.
"the emotions" sounds awkward. I made it a bit more specific.
I have been feeling really good at some background level for the last few weeks.,
I have been feeling really good at some background level for the last few weeks,
Combined this sentence with the one after.
Aand don't definitefully understand why.
and don't fully understand why.
"Definitely" is used more for situations where you're arguing against doubt. It kind of works here, but "fully", "completely," or the more formal "definitively" would be better.
I guess the answer is in all the little things above.
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Well done. Wherever you are, this sounds like a lovely day to have!
With some sentences after the first 3, I can't tell if you're doing them regularly or whether you've just done them once in the past. I've made corrections assuming that you might do all of these things regularly after moving to your new place.
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I also sent the pictures to my closest people in Russia to share the emoions with them and tease them a bit. |
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I have been feeling really good at some background level for the last few weeks.
I have been feeling really good at some background level for the
I have been feeling really good at some background level for the last few weeks Combined this sentence with the one after. |
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And don't definitely understand why.
"Definitely" is used more for situations where you're arguing against doubt. It kind of works here, but "fully", "completely," or the more formal "definitively" would be better. And I don't definitely understand why. And I don't definitely understand why. |
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I guess the answer is in all the little things above. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I moved to new accommodation and I start to explore a new district around.
I moved in to new accommodation and
I moved to a new 1) "Accommodation" is extremely formal when using it for the place you live. Usually, one would say "house," "apartment," "place," etc.. "Place" is the most generic, so I picked that. 2) You've introduced us to a place you live with "a new place," so we know we're talking about a location already. "A district" could mean the district you live in or a district that's nearby, so you should single out one option with "the". "My district" would also be ok.
I moved to new accommodation and I started to explore There's one specific district around your accommodation, so it's better to use "the" |
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The situation with cafes in the area turned out to be much better than I expected. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast arounded green rice fields.
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast
Lately, I have been waking up early and going to breakfast
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Then I would just riding thought the small streets on my motorbike, because the air is still cool.
Then I would just rid
Then I
Then I would just rid |
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The buildings are spread out in the area, so you could see a lot of green around the road. The buildings are spread out in the area, so you could see a lot of greenery around the road. The buildings are spread out in the area, so you could see a lot of greenery around the road.
1) The first clause edit is just a suggestion that sounds more natural. 2) "could" puts this clause in the past. |
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I have a bot that sends me sunset quality updates every day and depending on them I would go to the shore. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I have a bot that sends me sunset quality updates every day and depending on them, I "would" in this context makes it sound like you might have gone there in the past, not the general present. |
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There I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot). There, I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot). There, I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours which I do a lot).
There, I experience
There I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching |
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I also sent the pictures to my closest people in Russia to share the emotions with them and tease them a bit. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I also sent the pictures to my closest people in Russia to share the emotion "the emotions" sounds awkward. I made it a bit more specific.
I also sent the pictures to my closest |
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I moved to new accomodation and I start to explore a new district around. |
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There I experienced a gentle dopamine boost from watching on waves and after-sunset sky reflection, listening to music and walking (and it's awesome compared to sitting at a PC for hours whitch I do a lot). |
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