One day at night, Ahai and I drank at a bar while listening to some soft music. One night, Ahai and I drank at a bar while listening to some soft music.

One day at night, Ahai and I drank at a bar while listening to some soft music. One night, Ahai and I drank at a bar while listening to some soft music.

"One day at night" sounds kind of strange.

One day at night, Ahai and I drank at a bar whilewent to get drinks and listening to some soft music at a bar. One night, Ahai and I went to get drinks and listen to some soft music at a bar.

He mMaybe wantedout of a desire to show off his experience or because he regarded me as hisa friend, he volunteered to say to me, "My sister hwas leftaway for onea week, she. She just came back from my hometown." Maybe out of a desire to show off his experience or because he regarded me as a friend, he volunteered to me, "My sister was away for a week. She just came back from my hometown."

He maybeprobably wanted to show off his experience or regarded me as his friend, so he volunteeentured to say to me, "My sister has left for one week, s. She came back from myour hometown." He probably wanted to show off his experience or regarded me as his friend so he ventured to say to me, "My sister has left for one week. She came back from our hometown."

He maybPerhaps he wanted to show offbrag about his experience, or he just regarded me as hisa good friend, so he volunteered to say to me, "My sister has left for one week, she came back from my hometown." Perhaps he wanted to brag about his experience, or he just regarded me as a good friend, so he volunteered to say to me, "My sister has left for one week, she came back from my hometown."

"wWhy not stay more time with your family?" "Why not stay more time with your family?"

"wWhy not staypend more time with your family?" "Why not spend more time with your family?"

"wI replied asking him, "Why not stay to spend more time with your family?" I replied asking him, "Why not stay to spend more time with your family?"

"One of her friends [recommended] some children to her, they who wanted to go to Hongkong. "One of her friends [recommended] some children to her who wanted to go to Hongkong.

“Recommended” sounds odd. Maybe “introduced”?

"One of her friends recommended some children to her, t. They wanted to go to Hongk Kong. "One of her friends recommended some children to her. They wanted to go to Hong Kong.

He said, "One of her friends recommended that she go visit some children to her, t. They wanted to goher to take them to Hongkong." He said, "One of her friends recommended that she go visit some children. They wanted her to take them to Hongkong."

Their parents were smuggled there last year and livedare living well, so they wanted their children toin Hongkong, too.” Their parents were smuggled there last year and are living well, so they wanted their children in Hongkong, too.”

Their parents were smuggled there last year and lived well, so now they wanted their children to be with them in Hongk Kong, too. Their parents were smuggled there last year and lived well so now they wanted their children to be with them in Hong Kong, too.

Their parents smuggled therem into the country last year and livedwere living well, t. They wanted their children to go to Hongkong, too. Their parents smuggled them into the country last year and were living well. They wanted their children to go to Hongkong, too.

His words refreshed me a lotwoke me up and made me excited. His words woke me up and made me excited.

I’m not sure what you mean by “refreshed me a lot,” so I’ve guessed.

HThis wordas refreshed me a loting to hear and it made me feel excited. This was refreshing to hear and it made me feel excited.

I felt he will tellas going to tell (me) some exciting stories. I felt he was going to tell (me) some exciting stories.

I felt he willas if he were about to tell some exciting stories. I felt as if he were about to tell some exciting stories.

I felt he willthat he was going to tell me some exciting stories. I felt that he was going to tell me some exciting stories.

"rReally? "Really?

"rReally? "Really?

only sentJust the children, h? How dare their parents, d? Didn't they care about their kids' safety? " Just the children? How dare their parents? Didn't they care about their kids' safety?"

You should stop inserting a space between the period/question mark and the parenthesis mark. Right: …safety?” Wrong: …safety? ”

only sentThey only wanted to have their children, h sent? How dare theirose parents, why didn't they care about the kids' safety? " They only wanted to have their children sent? How dare those parents, why didn't they care about the kids' safety? "

only sentBut I then I thought, "Only the children, h? How dare their parents send them alone, didn't they care about their kids' safety? " But I then I thought, "Only the children? How dare their parents send them alone, didn't they care about their kids' safety?"

So I asked him with a surprised look. So I asked him with a surprised look.

He replied, "You don't know. what it's like there." He replied, "You don't know what it's like there."

Some people earned money and lived well in Hongkong, but they have no legal ID card, however. Some people earn money and live well in Hongkong, but they have no legal ID card.

Some people earned money and lived well in Hongk Kong, but they have no legal ID card, however. Some people earn money and live well in Hong Kong but they have no legal ID card.

Some people earned money and lived well in Hongkong. However, they have no legal ID card, however. Some people earn money and live well in Hongkong. However, they have no legal ID card.

So they are willing to pay double or triple the price than normal price to smuggle their kids there. So they are willing to pay double or triple the normal price to smuggle their kids there.

So they are willing to pay double or triple the price than normalusual price to smuggle their kids there. So they are willing to pay double or triple the usual price to smuggle their kids there.

So they are willing to pay double or triple the price than normal price to smuggle their kids in there. So they are willing to pay double or triple the normal price to smuggle their kids in there.

Their only demand iss are safety and preparing a comfortable place on the ship for their kids. Their only demands are safety and a comfortable place on the ship for their kids.

Their only demand iss are safety and preparing a comfortable place on the ship for their kids. Their only demands are safety and a comfortable place on the ship for their kids.

Their only demand is safe and preparingrequest is that they are kept safe and that there is a comfortable place on the ship forto send their kids. Their only request is that they are kept safe and that there is a comfortable place to send their kids.

My sister said everything was done without any troubles." My sister said everything was done without any trouble."

My sister said everything was done without any tproublems. My sister said everything was done without any problems.

My sister said that everything was donehandled without any troubles. My sister said that everything was handled without any trouble.

I didn't care about his sister's activities; however, she was Director Chen's lover, however, yet he was the commanding officer of the ports. I didn't care about his sister's activities; she was Director Chen's lover, however, yet he was the commanding officer of the ports.

I didn't care about his sister's activities;, however, s. She was Director Chen's lover, yet h. He was the commanding officer of the ports. I didn't care about his sister's activities, however. She was Director Chen's lover. He was the commanding officer of the ports.

He was responsible tofor catching smugglers and stowaways around the area. He was responsible for catching smugglers and stowaways around the area.

He was responsible tofor catching smugglers and stowaways around the area. He was responsible for catching smugglers and stowaways around the area.

HeIt was responsiblehis job to catch smugglers and stowaways around the area. It was his job to catch smugglers and stowaways around the area.

Now, it's not difficult to guess what Director Chen has done during that period though I have no (pieces of) evidence. Now, it's not difficult to guess what Director Chen has done during that period though I have no (pieces of) evidence.

“Pieces of” is unnecessary and unnatural.

Now, it's not difficult to guess what Director Chen hwas doneing during that period though I have no pieces of evidence. Now, it's not difficult to guess what Director Chen was doing during that period though I have no pieces of evidence.

Now, it's not difficult to guess what Director Chen has done during that period t. Though I have no pieces of evidence against him. Now, it's not difficult to guess what Director Chen has done during that period. Though I have no pieces of evidence against him.

I strongly suspect that Chaen knew what his girlfriend had done,was doing, and he was protecting and behsupportindg her. I strongly suspect that Chen knew what his girlfriend was doing, and he was protecting and supporting her.

I strongly suspect that Chaen knew what his girlfriend had done,was doing and he was protecting and behsupportindg her. I strongly suspect that Chen knew what his girlfriend was doing and he was protecting and supporting her.

I strongly suspect that Chan knew what his girlfriend had done, h. He was protecting and behsupportindg her. I strongly suspect that Chan knew what his girlfriend had done. He was protecting and supporting her.