My day is always so first alike this: I wake up at 5´clock, then I go to brush a tooth and wash me in the tub and switchbrush my teeth and take a shower. I change my clothes befor the school, then I make myself a breakfast: an egg and a toast with bread. My day is always like this: I wake up at 5´clock, then I brush my teeth and take a shower. I change my clothes before school, then I make myself a breakfast: an egg and a toast.

MEvery day is always so first aI wake up at 5´ o'clock t. Then I go to brush a tooth andbrush my teeth, wash me in the tub, and switchchange into my clothes for the school t. Then I make my breakfast a eggs and toast withfor breadkfast. Every day I wake up at 5 o'clock. Then I brush my teeth, wash in the tub, and change into my clothes for school. Then I make eggs and toast for breakfast.

Instead of "wash in the tub" it would be more normal to say "take a shower". "I brush my teeth, take a shower, then get dressed".

I was playing on my computer until 7´it's 7 o'clock . I play on my computer until it's 7 o'clock .

I take off my jacket, packages my bag with everything my father gives me done the money for my lunch and a go with the, take some lunch money and then I take a subway to themy school. I take off my jacket, pack my bag with everything my father gives me, take some lunch money and then I take a subway to my school.

I take off my jacket, packages my bag with everything my father gives me done the, get money for my lunch and a go withfrom my father, then take the subway to the school. I take off my jacket, pack my bag, get money for lunch from my father, then take the subway to school.

TheAfter school ends in then at afternoon, I bought me anyuy me something gto theeat and go home s. Sometimes I also go to the library. After school ends in the afternoon, I buy me something to eat and go home. Sometimes I also go to the library.

TheAfter school ends in then at afternoon I bought me anything go theusually go home, sometimes I also go to the library. After school ends in the afternoon I usually go home, sometimes I go to the library.

I'm not certain what you're trying to say with 'bought' here. Maybe you're trying to say: "After school ends in the afternoon, I buy some things from the store and then go home. Sometimes I go to the library before going home."

When I am home, I eat the food frmom my momade for me and nextthen I do my homework. When I am home, I eat the food mom made for me and then I do my homework.

When I am home I eat the food from my mom and nextmade, and then I do my homework. When I am home I eat the food my mom made, and then I do my homework.

Rephrased to make it sound more natural. "When I am home I eat the food my mom left for me" "When I am home I eat the food my mom made for me" would also be more natural ways of saying this.

The rest of the day I read my books or I hearlisten to music ofn my phone and wait until either my father caor mother come back from the work or my momwork. The rest of the day I read books or I listen to music on my phone and wait until either my father or mother come back from work.

The rest of the day I read my book or I hearlisten to music ofn my phone and wait until my father caor mother comes back from the work or my mom. The rest of the day I read my book or I listen to music on my phone and wait until my father or mother comes back from work.

Normally you say "listen to music", "I'm listening to music on my phone", "I like listening to music". I would say "I read a book or listen to music on my phone".

Whemn we a're all therehome, we eat dinner together. When we're all home, we eat dinner together.

Whem we are all thern everyone is home we eat dinner. When everyone is home we eat dinner.

Could say "when we are all home we eat dinner together", or "when everyone gets home we have dinner together"