Challenge,d Day 05 Challenge, Day 05

Challenge, day 05 Challenge, day 05

Remember to leave a spacing after punctuation.

I also want to thank someone forthe person (or people) who helping ed and correctinged me. I also want to thank the person (or people) who helped and corrected me.

When you say someone, it sounds like you're going to go on the street and thank someone, anyone, for helping you, even if they're not the same person who helped you.

I also want to thank someoneyou for helping and correcting me. I want to thank you for helping and correcting me.

Also is not needed in this case.

After I came back at home, I prepared the lunch. After I came back home, I prepared lunch.

After I came back at home, I prepared the lunch. After I came home, I prepared lunch.

Then, I started to study three English lessons and two Spanish lessons.. Then, I started to study three English lessons and two Spanish lessons.

I continued to listen to a part of the book " Diary kid of wa Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it out loud. I continued to listen to part of the book "Diary of a Wimpy Kid" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it out loud.

I continue tod listening to a part of the book " Diary kid of wimpy" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it out loud. I continued listening to a part of the book " Diary kid of wimpy" by Jeff Kinney, and I read it out loud.

I was so happy to understand of this a partpart of the book. I was so happy to understand of part of the book.

I was so happy to understand of this ae part I am reading. I was so happy to understand of the part I am reading.

I feel so good I did not feel noany pain. I feel so good I did not feel any pain.

This sounds like you felt physical pain in your body, and your pain was healed by understanding the book. I think you mean to say you felt better about your life or something like that.

I feel so good I did not feel no pain/happy, it was not a painful process. I feel so good/happy, it was not a painful process.

Confusing usage of pain here. What is painful here? Learning English?

Thanks to God! Thank God!

TMany thanks to God! Many thanks to God!

I made a promise to a poor woman to help her, therefore,so tomorrow I will drop off her to aat the doctor; s. She is ill and I am going to pay athe doctor and buy her medeicine. I made a promise to a poor woman to help her, so tomorrow I will drop off her at the doctor. She is ill and I am going to pay the doctor and buy her medicine.

"Therefore" is too formal for this essay.

I made a promise to a poor woman to help her, therefore,. So tomorrow I will drop off her ato a doctor; s. She is ill and I am going towill pay athe doctor and buy her medeicine on her behalf. I made a promise to a poor woman to help her. So tomorrow I will drop off her at a doctor. She is ill and I will pay the doctor and buy medicine on her behalf.

Use more punctuation in English.