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Flan_girl

Dec. 7, 2020

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When I was a little girl, my hair was very long (it reached my hips). I used to cut my hair, just the ends, once a year. When I grew up, I got tired of it, because it was heavy (I have a lot of hair) and it hurt to wear it in a ponytail. I started gradually cutting it more and more. First, up to my waist. Then, up to my chest. Later, a bit below my shoulders. Finally, I got a bob cut (a bit longer than chin length). My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer. They are just joking, they like my hair like this.
Now, I want to cut my hair even shorter! I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut" (I don't think haircuts should have a gender). I know it's going to look terrible on me, but I still want to do it because I think it'll be comfortable. I always tie my hair because it bothers me, so this should fix it. And if I regret it, it'll grow back. Haircuts are not that big of a deal, I don't get why people think it's life altering. Like, yeah, I may not like it for a while, but I'll just have to deal with it until it grows.
If you want to cut your hair a certain way but you don't dare, I encourage you to do it. Life is one and hair grows.

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When I was a little girl, my hair was very long (it reached my hips).

When I grew up, I got tired of it, because it was heavy (I have a lot of hair) and it hurt to wear it in a ponytail.

First, up to my waist.

Then, up to my chest.

Later, a bit below my shoulders.

Finally, I got a bob cut (a bit longer than chin length).

Now, I want to cut my hair even shorter!

I know it's going to look terrible on me, but I still want to do it because I think it'll be comfortable.

I always tie my hair because it bothers me, so this should fix it.

And if I regret it, it'll grow back.

Like, yeah, I may not like it for a while, but I'll just have to deal with it until it grows.

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Flan_girl

Dec. 8, 2020

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Now, I want to cut my hair even shorter!

I know it's going to look terrible on me, but I still want to do it because I think it'll be comfortable.

I always tie my hair because it bothers me, so this should fix it.

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Flan_girl

Dec. 7, 2020

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And if I regret it, it'll grow back.


And if I regret it, it'll always grow back. And if I regret it, it'll always grow back.

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Haircuts are not that big of a deal, I don't get why people think it's life altering.


Haircuts are not that big of a deal,. I don't get why people think it's life altering. Haircuts are not that big of a deal. I don't get why people think it's life altering.

Haircuts are not that big of a deal, so I don't get why people think it's life altering. Haircuts are not that big of a deal, so I don't get why people think it's life altering.

The sentence was correct without this but I think it flows more naturally this way

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When I was a little girl, my hair was very long (it reached my hips).


When I was a little girl, my hair was very long (and it reached my hips). When I was a little girl, my hair was very long and it reached my hips.

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I used to cut my hair, just the ends, once a year.


I used to cut my hair, just the ends,trim the ends of my hair once a year. I used to trim the ends of my hair once a year.

I used to cut my hair, justtrim the ends, once a year. I used to trim the ends once a year.

I understand what you mean from the original sentence but this is more natural in my opinion

When I grew up, I got tired of it, because it was heavy (I have a lot of hair) and it hurt to wear it in a ponytail.


WBut when I grew up, I got tired of it,my long hair because it was heavy (I have a lot of hair)and thick and it hurt to wear it in a ponytail. But when I grew up, I got tired of my long hair because it was heavy and thick and it hurt to wear it in a ponytail.

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I started gradually cutting it more and more.


So I started to gradually cutting it more and more it. So I started to gradually cut it.

I started gradually cutting it more and morto cut it little by little. I started to cut it little by little.

First, up to my waist.


First, I cut it up to my waist. First, I cut it up to my waist.

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Then, up to my chest.


Then, I cut it up to my chest. Then, I cut it up to my chest.

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Later, a bit below my shoulders.


Later, a biI cut it just below my shoulders. Later, I cut it just below my shoulders.

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Finally, I got a bob cut (a bit longer than chin length).


Finally, I got a bob cut (that is a bit longer than chin length). Finally, I got a bob that is a bit longer than chin length.

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My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer.


My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer, but they .... My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer, but they ....

My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer., but My family mocks me and says I look like Dora the Explorer, but

They are just joking, they like my hair like this.


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I recommend combining these two sentences

Now, I want to cut my hair even shorter!


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I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut" (I don't think haircuts should have a gender).


I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut", although (I don't think haircuts should have a gender). I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut", although I don't think haircuts should have a gender.

I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut" (though I don't think haircuts should have a gender). I want to get a pixie cut, sort of like a "boy hair cut" (though I don't think haircuts should have a gender).

I know it's going to look terrible on me, but I still want to do it because I think it'll be comfortable.


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I always tie my hair because it bothers me, so this should fix it.


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Like, yeah, I may not like it for a while, but I'll just have to deal with it until it grows.


Like, yeah, I may not like it for a while, but I'll just have to deal with it until it grows back. I may not like it for a while, but I'll just have to deal with it until it grows back.

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If you want to cut your hair a certain way but you don't dare, I encourage you to do it.


ISo, if you want to cut your hair a certain way but you don't dare, I encourage you to dotry it. So, if you want to cut your hair but you don't dare, I encourage you to try it.

If you want to cut your hair a certain way but you don't dareare afraid to/hesitating/second guessing yourself, I encourage you to do it. If you want to cut your hair a certain way but you are afraid to/hesitating/second guessing yourself, I encourage you to do it.

Life is one and hair grows.


Life isAfter all, you only live once and hair growswill always grow back. After all, you only live once and hair will always grow back.

Life is oneshort and hair grows. Life is short and hair grows.

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