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Aug. 14, 2025

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Extreme Temperatures

Todays weather was extremely harsh in my town. We had like 38 degrees Celsius and a really humid air. Because of that, many schools were closed today, but not ours. We had to go to school as usual, with the slight advantage, that out 90minute lessons were shortened to 60 minutes. I mean, don't get me wrong, it's nice to get some more freetime, but today was still a long day for me. Normally I always have to be at school till 4pm on Thursdays. This time it was like 3pm when I left school. That's still a really long time, considering, you are sitting with at least 20 other people in one big room, without airconditioning, and the sun is shining in your classroom. After that i had to run to my schoolbus, wich also had no AC and every seat was taken. If it wasn't for the extreme temperatures, this wouldn't be an issiue, but the 40 minute drive home felt like another 2 hours at school.

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Today's weather was extremely harsh in my town.

The apostrophe here marks a possessive function (e.g. "tomorrow's earnings").

We hadwere at, like, 38 degrees Celsius and ahad really humid air.

Temperature in terms of weather isn't necessarily something that you own, but rather a state of being that can affect other things (e.g. people, plants, and animals). Also, I assume you used "like" as a filler word or qualifier, so that's why I surrounded it with commas.

We had to go to school as usual, with the slight advantage, that outr 90-minute lessons were shortened to 60 minutes.

If you're using a period of time as an adjective, it's best to hyphenate it like I did. Also, I assumed that "out" was a typo for "our," so that's why I rewrote it.

I mean, don't get me wrong, i. It's nice to get some more free time, but today was still a long day for me.

For simplicity's sake, I think it'd be best to split up long sentences like this into shorter ones.

Normally, I always have to be at school till 4pm:00 P.M. on Thursdays.

Either "4pm" or my correction can work for this.

This time, it was, like, 3pm:00 P.M. when I left school.

Same goes for "3pm" or my correction here.

That's still a really long time, considering, that you are sitting with at least 20 other people in one big room, without air conditioning, and the sun is shining in your classroom.

I think you figured that "air conditioning" was all one word in English, like "Klimaanlage" in German. Be sure to split up compound words like this going forward.

After that i, I had to run to my school bus, which also had no AC and e. Every seat was taken.

Same goes for "school bus" in English compared to "Schulbus" in German.

If it wasn't for the extreme temperatures, this wouldn't be an issiue, but the 40 -minute drive home felt like another 2 hours at school.

You could also split this up into two sentences by deleting "but" and capitalizing the second "the," but I won't make any more corrections here because this is a coherent thought with a logical connection to it.

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Screw the heat!

Extreme Temperatures

Today's weather was extremely harsh in my town.

We had likeIt was 38 degrees Celsius and athe air was really humid air.

Because of that, many schools were closed today, but not ours.

We had to go to school as usual, with the slight advantage, that outr 90 minute lessons were shortened to 60 minutes.

I mean, don't get me wrong, it's nice to get some more freetime, but today was still a long day for me.

Normally I always have to be at school till 4pm on Thursdays.

This time it was like 3pm when I left school.

That's still a really long time, considering, you are sitting with at least 20 other people in one big room, without air conditioning, and the sun is shining in your classroom.

After that i, I had to run to my school bus, which also had no AC and every seat was taken.

If it wasn't for the extreme temperatures, this wouldn't be an issiue, but the 40 minute drive home felt like another 2 hours at school.

Today's weather was extremely harsh in my town.

We had like 38 degrees Celsius and a really humid air.

Because of that, many schools were closed today, but not ours.

We had to go to school as usual, with the slight advantage, that outr 90 minute lessons were shortened to 60 minutes.

I mean, don't get me wrong, it's nice to get some more freetime, but today was still a long day for me.

Normally I always have to be at school till 4pm on Thursdays.

This time it was like 3pm when I left school.

That's still a really long time, considering, you are sitting with at least 20 other people in one big room, without airconditioning, and the sun is shining in your classroom.

After that iI had to run to my school bus, which also had no AC and every seat was taken.

If it wasn't for the extreme temperatures, this wouldn't be an issiue, but the 40 minute drive home felt like another 2 hours at school.

Extreme Temperatures


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Todays weather was extremely harsh in my town.


Today's weather was extremely harsh in my town.

Today's weather was extremely harsh in my town.

Today's weather was extremely harsh in my town.

The apostrophe here marks a possessive function (e.g. "tomorrow's earnings").

We had like 38 degrees Celsius and a really humid air.


We had like 38 degrees Celsius and a really humid air.

We had likeIt was 38 degrees Celsius and athe air was really humid air.

We hadwere at, like, 38 degrees Celsius and ahad really humid air.

Temperature in terms of weather isn't necessarily something that you own, but rather a state of being that can affect other things (e.g. people, plants, and animals). Also, I assume you used "like" as a filler word or qualifier, so that's why I surrounded it with commas.

Because of that, many schools were closed today, but not ours.


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We had to go to school as usual, with the slight advantage, that out 90minute lessons were shortened to 60 minutes.


We had to go to school as usual, with the slight advantage, that outr 90 minute lessons were shortened to 60 minutes.

We had to go to school as usual, with the slight advantage, that outr 90 minute lessons were shortened to 60 minutes.

We had to go to school as usual, with the slight advantage, that outr 90-minute lessons were shortened to 60 minutes.

If you're using a period of time as an adjective, it's best to hyphenate it like I did. Also, I assumed that "out" was a typo for "our," so that's why I rewrote it.

Normally I always have to be at school till 4pm on Thursdays.


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Normally, I always have to be at school till 4pm:00 P.M. on Thursdays.

Either "4pm" or my correction can work for this.

This time it was like 3pm when I left school.


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This time, it was, like, 3pm:00 P.M. when I left school.

Same goes for "3pm" or my correction here.

That's still a really long time, considering, you are sitting with at least 20 other people in one big room, without airconditioning, and the sun is shining in your classroom.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That's still a really long time, considering, you are sitting with at least 20 other people in one big room, without air conditioning, and the sun is shining in your classroom.

That's still a really long time, considering, that you are sitting with at least 20 other people in one big room, without air conditioning, and the sun is shining in your classroom.

I think you figured that "air conditioning" was all one word in English, like "Klimaanlage" in German. Be sure to split up compound words like this going forward.

After that i had to run to my schoolbus, wich also had no AC and every seat was taken.


After that iI had to run to my school bus, which also had no AC and every seat was taken.

After that i, I had to run to my school bus, which also had no AC and every seat was taken.

After that i, I had to run to my school bus, which also had no AC and e. Every seat was taken.

Same goes for "school bus" in English compared to "Schulbus" in German.

If it wasn't for the extreme temperatures, this wouldn't be an issiue, but the 40 minute drive home felt like another 2 hours at school.


If it wasn't for the extreme temperatures, this wouldn't be an issiue, but the 40 minute drive home felt like another 2 hours at school.

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If it wasn't for the extreme temperatures, this wouldn't be an issiue, but the 40 -minute drive home felt like another 2 hours at school.

You could also split this up into two sentences by deleting "but" and capitalizing the second "the," but I won't make any more corrections here because this is a coherent thought with a logical connection to it.

I mean, don't get me wrong, it's nice to get some more freetime, but today was still a long day for me.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I mean, don't get me wrong, i. It's nice to get some more free time, but today was still a long day for me.

For simplicity's sake, I think it'd be best to split up long sentences like this into shorter ones.

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