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chameleon

Jan. 18, 2023

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Expressing myself through words

Well, the first thing I'm going to do next week is probably going to music class, since I'm learning music theory, which I'm pretty scared about, it'll take a lot of time until I finally get the hang of it. I'll be hanging out with a friend too, I don't know which day we'll choose though, both of us are frequently busy. We'll have lunch together. And as always, I'll be studying my target language and practicing my writing skills. By the way, this is my first time using Langcorrect, I'm really nervous because I've been unable to express myself properly these days, I would say that I'm a bit out of practice since the day I've got vacation, I feel like I'm starting to forget everything I've learned, it's terrifying knowing how much time and effort I've put into it. Hope I can get better some day.

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Expressing myself through words

Well, the first thing I'm going to do next week is probably going to music class, since I'm learning music theory, which I'm pretty scared about, it'll take a lot of time until I finally get the hang of it.

Consider splitting up into multiple sentences.

I'll be hanging out with a friend too, I don't know which day we'll choose though, b. Both of us are frequentusually busy.

By the way, this is my first time using Langcorrect, I'm really nervous because I've been unable to express myself properly these days,. I would say that I'm a bit out of practice since the day I've got back from vacation,. I feel like I'm starting to forget everything I've learned, i. It's terrifying knowing how much time and effort I've put into it.

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You're doing great! I would use periods instead of commas in a lot of these sentences, but other than that, reads very natural.

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chameleon

Jan. 21, 2023

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Thank you so much! I really appreciate your corrections, I think I've got a problem with commas haha. I'll work on that! :)

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chameleon

Jan. 21, 2023

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Well, the first thing I'm going to do next week is probably going to music class, since I'm learning music theory, which I'm pretty scared about, it'll take a lot of time until I finally get the hang of it.

Thank you! I'll keep it in mind!

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chameleon

Jan. 21, 2023

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I'll be hanging out with a friend too, I don't know which day we'll choose though, b. Both of us are frequentusually busy.

May I ask you a question? Which is the difference between 'frequently' and 'usually'? It seems pretty confusing haha

Expressing mMyself tThrough wWords

Usually, most words are captalized in a title. There are some exceptions though.

Well, the first thing I'm going to do will probably be doing next week is probably going to music class, since I'm learning/studying music theory, which. I'm pretty scared about, it since it'll take a lot of time until I finally get the hang of it.

Somce comma splicing and overall long sentence, so I split it up.

I've also studied music theory before. It's not as bad as you think! Good luck!

I'll be hanging out with a friend too, though I don't know which day we'll choose though,since both of us are frequently busy.

We'll have lunch together.

And as always, I'll be studying my target language and practicing my writing skills.

By the way, this is my first time using Langcorrect, and I'm really nervous becausabout this post since I've been unable to properly express myself properly(using English) these days,. I would say that I'm a bit out of practice since the day I've got vacation,vacation started. I feel like I'm starting to forget everything I've learned, it's which is so terrifying knowing how much time and effort I've put into it.

Again, comma splicing.

HI hope I can get better some dayto improve in the future.

The original is fine, but I like this wording more.

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I had no problems understanding your post, so I'd say you are able to convey your thoughts well! There is comma splicing though, so make sure you don't abuse that comma too much.

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chameleon

Jan. 21, 2023

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Well, the first thing I'm going to do will probably be doing next week is probably going to music class, since I'm learning/studying music theory, which. I'm pretty scared about, it since it'll take a lot of time until I finally get the hang of it.

Thank you so much! I think I'm starting to like it :)

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chameleon

Jan. 21, 2023

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By the way, this is my first time using Langcorrect, and I'm really nervous becausabout this post since I've been unable to properly express myself properly(using English) these days,. I would say that I'm a bit out of practice since the day I've got vacation,vacation started. I feel like I'm starting to forget everything I've learned, it's which is so terrifying knowing how much time and effort I've put into it.

Thanks! I've always been pretty bad at using commas. I think it's time for me to work on that! :)

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chameleon

Jan. 21, 2023

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HI hope I can get better some dayto improve in the future.

I appreciate it! I'm really interested in choosing better words, so this helps a lot!

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chameleon

Jan. 21, 2023

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I'm glad to know that! Thank you so much for your corrections. I'll work on commas from now on! :)

Expressing myself through words


Expressing mMyself tThrough wWords

Usually, most words are captalized in a title. There are some exceptions though.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Well, the first thing I'm going to do next week is probably going to music class, since I'm learning music theory, which I'm pretty scared about, it'll take a lot of time until I finally get the hang of it.


Well, the first thing I'm going to do will probably be doing next week is probably going to music class, since I'm learning/studying music theory, which. I'm pretty scared about, it since it'll take a lot of time until I finally get the hang of it.

Somce comma splicing and overall long sentence, so I split it up. I've also studied music theory before. It's not as bad as you think! Good luck!

Well, the first thing I'm going to do next week is probably going to music class, since I'm learning music theory, which I'm pretty scared about, it'll take a lot of time until I finally get the hang of it.

Consider splitting up into multiple sentences.

I'll be hanging out with a friend too, I don't know which day we'll choose though, both of us are frequently busy.


I'll be hanging out with a friend too, though I don't know which day we'll choose though,since both of us are frequently busy.

I'll be hanging out with a friend too, I don't know which day we'll choose though, b. Both of us are frequentusually busy.

We'll have lunch together.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And as always, I'll be studying my target language and practicing my writing skills.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

By the way, this is my first time using Langcorrect, I'm really nervous because I've been unable to express myself properly these days, I would say that I'm a bit out of practice since the day I've got vacation, I feel like I'm starting to forget everything I've learned, it's terrifying knowing how much time and effort I've put into it.


By the way, this is my first time using Langcorrect, and I'm really nervous becausabout this post since I've been unable to properly express myself properly(using English) these days,. I would say that I'm a bit out of practice since the day I've got vacation,vacation started. I feel like I'm starting to forget everything I've learned, it's which is so terrifying knowing how much time and effort I've put into it.

Again, comma splicing.

By the way, this is my first time using Langcorrect, I'm really nervous because I've been unable to express myself properly these days,. I would say that I'm a bit out of practice since the day I've got back from vacation,. I feel like I'm starting to forget everything I've learned, i. It's terrifying knowing how much time and effort I've put into it.

Hope I can get better some day.


HI hope I can get better some dayto improve in the future.

The original is fine, but I like this wording more.

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