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Why didn’t you post moments before, and now you suddenly post them frequently and that's all in English?
The reason is that my former department requires us to be extremely strict in all aspects and I am afraid I will make some mistakes in doing that, but my current department’s characteristics are not the same as the former’s, so I don’t need to worry about those things too much. As to why I posted all the moments in English, the answer is that I just want to practice my English. Different people have different hobbies and some like to drink, some like to eat, some like to play cards and so on. I used to train myself to get used to fishing, but in the end I found I am not a fishing lover. After I finished my job I usually felt bored and didn’t know what to do. That was a bad feeling. Learning English can’t bring me fame or money (I also don’t think these kinds of things are very important to me) and it can't even bring me joy, but it indeed helps me to kill time and boredom. As an old-man who doesn’t live in an English speaking country and has no native English speakers around me, it’s definitely impossible to learn English well. So, again, the purpose of doing so is just to kill boredom and it turns out that it is really useful. So no matter what you think of me, please forgive me for not paying much attention to your thinking.

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Why didn’t you post moments before, and now youare suddenly post theming minutes frequently, and that's all in English, when you didn’t post them before?

The reason is that my former department requiresd us to be extremely strict in all aspectsevery way, and I amwas afraid I willould make some mistakes in doing that, but my current department’s characteristics are not the same as the former’sf I posted minutes in English. However, my current department is different, so I don’t need to worry about those things too muchs much about making errors.

As to why I posted all the momentinutes in English, the answer is that I just want to practice my English.

Different people have different hobbies and some like to drink, some like to eat, some like to play cards and so on.

I used to try to train myself to get used to fishing, but in the end I found I am not a fishing lover.

After I finished my job I usually felt bored and didn’t know what to do.

That was a bad feeling.

Learning English can’t bring me fame or money (I also don’t think these kinds ofthough such things are not very important to me) and it can't even bring me joy, but it indeed helps me to kill time and combat boredom.

You'd be better off leaving out the parenthetical expression "(though such things are not very important to me)".

As an old- man who doesn’t live in an English speaking country and has no native English speakers around me, it’s definitely impossible to learn English well without creating my own opportunities to practice it.

So, again, the purpose ofAlthough I started doing so isit just to killfight boredom and, it turns out that it is really useful.

So no matter what you think of me, please forgive me for not paying much attention to your thinking.

I don't understand what you mean here. As it is, the sentence says something similar to "I know you don't like it when I talk with my mouth full, but please forgive me for not caring what you think." Telling someone you don't care what they think is aggressive (even if it's disguised as passive-aggressive). Telling someone you care, but you're going to go ahead with your actions anyway for some well-defined reason, is a little less aggressive. But the best approach is to stop doing the actions that annoy them, modify them to be less annoying, or explain why your actions should actually not be a problem for them. So a sentence like this would be better:

Even if my posting minutes in English caught me by surprise, I hope that now that you understand why I'm doing it, you will approve.

But let me ask you: Are you posting minutes in English in a company where everyone speaks Chinese well, but not everyone is good at understanding English? If so, I can see why this could be a problem.

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Your English is actually quite good.

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Sept. 12, 2020

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你最后一段推测是对的。谢谢你的修改!

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Why didn’t you post moments before, and now you suddenly post them frequently and that's all in Englishsuddenly start posting in English when you were not posting at all before?

Don’t know exactly what you mean here.

The reason is that myour former department requires us to be extremely strict in all aspects of [...], and I am afraid I will make some mistakes in doing that, but. However, my current department’s characteristics are is not the same as the former’slast, so I don’t need to worry about ithose things too much.

All aspects of what? Our work?

In my opinion, “I am afraid I will make some mistakes in doing that” feels awkward, but it’s not incorrect. You have to specify what exactly is the “that”.

As to why I posted all the moments in English, the answer is thatit in English, I just want to practice my English.

Too long winded. I also don’t know if “moments” is referring to something called “moments” or it’s the actual use of the real word.

Different people have different hobbies and s. Some like to drink, some like to eat, some like to play cards and so on.

I used to train myself to get usedtaught myself how to fishing, but in the end I found I am not aout I don’t really like fishing lover.

After I finished my job, I usually felt bored and didn’t know what to do.

That was a bad feeling.

Learning English cawon’t bring me fame or, money, (I also don’t think these kinds of things are very important to me) and it can't even bring methough I don’t prioritize these things either way) or joy, but it does indeed helps me to kill time and not be boredom.

As an old-man who doesn’t live in an English speaking country and has no native English speakers around me, it’s definitely impossible to learn English well.

So, again, the purpose of doing thiso is just tso I can kill boredom and, but it turns out that it is really useful.

“Kill boredom” is not a phrase, “Kill time” is. You may see people who say “kill boredom” but this is not how people usually speak about boredom. However, if you said this, people would understand you still.

So no matter what you think of me, please forgive me for not paybeing much attention to your thinkingtactful.

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Jack

Sept. 12, 2020

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Why didn’t you post moments before, and now you suddenly post them frequently and that's all in Englishsuddenly start posting in English when you were not posting at all before?

为什么你以前不发朋友圈,现在突然天天发,而且全部是英文?

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Jack

Sept. 12, 2020

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谢谢你的修改,谢谢你。

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Why didn’t you post moments before, and now you suddenly post them frequently and that's all in English?


Why didn’t you post moments before, and now you suddenly post them frequently and that's all in Englishsuddenly start posting in English when you were not posting at all before?

Don’t know exactly what you mean here.

Why didn’t you post moments before, and now youare suddenly post theming minutes frequently, and that's all in English, when you didn’t post them before?

The reason is that my former department requires us to be extremely strict in all aspects and I am afraid I will make some mistakes in doing that, but my current department’s characteristics are not the same as the former’s, so I don’t need to worry about those things too much.


The reason is that myour former department requires us to be extremely strict in all aspects of [...], and I am afraid I will make some mistakes in doing that, but. However, my current department’s characteristics are is not the same as the former’slast, so I don’t need to worry about ithose things too much.

All aspects of what? Our work? In my opinion, “I am afraid I will make some mistakes in doing that” feels awkward, but it’s not incorrect. You have to specify what exactly is the “that”.

The reason is that my former department requiresd us to be extremely strict in all aspectsevery way, and I amwas afraid I willould make some mistakes in doing that, but my current department’s characteristics are not the same as the former’sf I posted minutes in English. However, my current department is different, so I don’t need to worry about those things too muchs much about making errors.

As to why I posted all the moments in English, the answer is that I just want to practice my English.


As to why I posted all the moments in English, the answer is thatit in English, I just want to practice my English.

Too long winded. I also don’t know if “moments” is referring to something called “moments” or it’s the actual use of the real word.

As to why I posted all the momentinutes in English, the answer is that I just want to practice my English.

Different people have different hobbies and some like to drink, some like to eat, some like to play cards and so on.


Different people have different hobbies and s. Some like to drink, some like to eat, some like to play cards and so on.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I used to train myself to get used to fishing, but in the end I found I am not a fishing lover.


I used to train myself to get usedtaught myself how to fishing, but in the end I found I am not aout I don’t really like fishing lover.

I used to try to train myself to get used to fishing, but in the end I found I am not a fishing lover.

After I finished my job I usually felt bored and didn’t know what to do.


After I finished my job, I usually felt bored and didn’t know what to do.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

That was a bad feeling.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Learning English can’t bring me fame or money (I also don’t think these kinds of things are very important to me) and it can't even bring me joy, but it indeed helps me to kill time and boredom.


Learning English cawon’t bring me fame or, money, (I also don’t think these kinds of things are very important to me) and it can't even bring methough I don’t prioritize these things either way) or joy, but it does indeed helps me to kill time and not be boredom.

Learning English can’t bring me fame or money (I also don’t think these kinds ofthough such things are not very important to me) and it can't even bring me joy, but it indeed helps me to kill time and combat boredom.

You'd be better off leaving out the parenthetical expression "(though such things are not very important to me)".

As an old-man who doesn’t live in an English speaking country and has no native English speakers around me, it’s definitely impossible to learn English well.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

As an old- man who doesn’t live in an English speaking country and has no native English speakers around me, it’s definitely impossible to learn English well without creating my own opportunities to practice it.

So, again, the purpose of doing so is just to kill boredom and it turns out that it is really useful.


So, again, the purpose of doing thiso is just tso I can kill boredom and, but it turns out that it is really useful.

“Kill boredom” is not a phrase, “Kill time” is. You may see people who say “kill boredom” but this is not how people usually speak about boredom. However, if you said this, people would understand you still.

So, again, the purpose ofAlthough I started doing so isit just to killfight boredom and, it turns out that it is really useful.

So no matter what you think of me, please forgive me for not paying much attention to your thinking.


So no matter what you think of me, please forgive me for not paybeing much attention to your thinkingtactful.

So no matter what you think of me, please forgive me for not paying much attention to your thinking.

I don't understand what you mean here. As it is, the sentence says something similar to "I know you don't like it when I talk with my mouth full, but please forgive me for not caring what you think." Telling someone you don't care what they think is aggressive (even if it's disguised as passive-aggressive). Telling someone you care, but you're going to go ahead with your actions anyway for some well-defined reason, is a little less aggressive. But the best approach is to stop doing the actions that annoy them, modify them to be less annoying, or explain why your actions should actually not be a problem for them. So a sentence like this would be better: Even if my posting minutes in English caught me by surprise, I hope that now that you understand why I'm doing it, you will approve. But let me ask you: Are you posting minutes in English in a company where everyone speaks Chinese well, but not everyone is good at understanding English? If so, I can see why this could be a problem.

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