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I wanted to sleep 10 hours while my body considered 7 was enough. When I woke up in the morning, it was cool and dry. I liked it so much. I stayed in bed, which was so warm. I felt quite delightful.
I read a novel, learnt German, played drums in the daytime. I have class from 7 to 9 at night. A parent came to talk about his naughty son, who broke a window last Friday. I told him the boy had broken many rules so far, such as brought his phone to school, too noisy in class, always absent in cleaning, etc.
There were some boys chatting in class, so I punished them to stand in rear classroom.
The boy sitting in front of the teacher's desk told me that it was so easy to me to be a teacher. I felt like "are you kidding me?" But I couldn't tell him that I wanted to quit every day.
A boy speak loudly that he wouldn't go to clean tomorrow. I told him what his father had promised, he said that he would never be afraid of that. I told him that if he did what he had said, he would be asked to stay at home for a week. He was so annoyed, so I dislike him a lot.
When I was back home, I felt exhausted. The expiration of my work energy couldn't last for more than 2 hours.

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Expiration

I wanted to sleep for 10 hours while, though my body consideredthought 7 was enough.

When I woke up in the morning, it was cool and dry.

I liked it sovery much.

I stayed in my bed, which was sovery warm.

It felt quite delightful.

I read some of a novel, learntstudied German, and played drums during the daytime.

I have class from 7 to 9 at night.

A parent came to talk about his naughty son, who broke a window last Friday.

I told him the boy had broken many rules so far, such as broughty bringing his phone to school, being too noisy in class, always being absent during cleaning, etc.

There were some boys chatting in class, so I punishedmade them to stand in rearthe rear of the classroom.

The boy sitting in front of the teacher's desk told me that it wasmust be so easy tofor me to be a teacher.

I felt likethought, "are you kidding me?"

But I couldn't tell him that I wanted to quit every day.

A boy speakoke loudly that he wouldn't go to cleaning tomorrow.

I told him what his father had promised, he said that he would never be afraid of that.

I told him that if he did what he had said he would, he would be asked to stay at home for a week.

He was so annoyed, soing, I dislike him a lot.

When I wascame back home, I felt exhausted.

The expiration of my work energyMy patience for work couldn't last for more than 2 hours.

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I wanted to sleep 10 hours while my body considered 7 was enough.


I wanted to sleep for 10 hours while, though my body consideredthought 7 was enough.

When I woke up in the morning, it was cool and dry.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I liked it so much.


I liked it sovery much.

I stayed in bed, which was so warm.


I stayed in my bed, which was sovery warm.

I felt quite delightful.


It felt quite delightful.

I read a novel, learnt German, played drums in the daytime.


I read some of a novel, learntstudied German, and played drums during the daytime.

I have class from 7 to 9 at night.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A parent came to talk about his naughty son, who broke a window last Friday.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I told him the boy had broken many rules so far, such as brought his phone to school, too noisy in class, always absent in cleaning, etc.


I told him the boy had broken many rules so far, such as broughty bringing his phone to school, being too noisy in class, always being absent during cleaning, etc.

There were some boys chatting in class, so I punished them to stand in rear classroom.


There were some boys chatting in class, so I punishedmade them to stand in rearthe rear of the classroom.

The boy sitting in front of the teacher's desk told me that it was so easy to me to be a teacher.


The boy sitting in front of the teacher's desk told me that it wasmust be so easy tofor me to be a teacher.

I felt like "are you kidding me?"


I felt likethought, "are you kidding me?"

But I couldn't tell him that I wanted to quit every day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

A boy speak loudly that he wouldn't go to clean tomorrow.


A boy speakoke loudly that he wouldn't go to cleaning tomorrow.

I told him what his father had promised, he said that he would never be afraid of that.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I told him that if he did what he had said, he would be asked to stay at home for a week.


I told him that if he did what he had said he would, he would be asked to stay at home for a week.

He was so annoyed, so I dislike him a lot.


He was so annoyed, soing, I dislike him a lot.

When I was back home, I felt exhausted.


When I wascame back home, I felt exhausted.

The expiration of my work energy couldn't last for more than 2 hours.


The expiration of my work energyMy patience for work couldn't last for more than 2 hours.

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