Nov. 3, 2020
Just reading my friend’s post.
About a Japanese single father living in Paris for 15 years.
But still struggle with daily life problems with the locals.
I lived in UK for 7 years as students.
Even that consider was long a period of time.
But as a student I don’t have to dealing with many problems.
Like paying tax, working stress…
Having said that just like my friend’s experience.
In UK many rules, system… I found that difficult to understand.
Later I realize because I always use my mother country to compare.
In fact, I should put that aside first.
Therefore that makes me feel better.
JI was just reading my friend’s post....
A... about a Japanese single father living in Paris for the past 15 years.
ButHe is still struggle withing daily, life problems withving amongst the locals.
I lived in the UK for 7 years as a students.
EI even that consider was long a period ofthat to be a long time.
But aAs a student, I doidn’t have to dealing with many problems such as ....
Like ...paying taxes, working stress…, etc.
Having said that just like, I can still relate to my friend’s experience.
In UK many rules, system… I found thatthe UK, it was difficult for me to understand. their rules and systems.
Later, I realized that it's because I always usecompare the UK with my mother country to compare.
In factTherefor, I should put that aside first.stop doing that.
Therefore thatIt will makes me feel better.
Expat life
JustI just finished reading my friend’s post about a single Japanese father who has lived in Paris for 15 years but stills struggles daily with the locals.
This sentence, along with the following 2 should all be combined into the same sentence.
About a Japanese single father livingsingle Japanese father who has lived in Paris for 15 years.
But still struggles with daily life problems with the locals.
I lived in the UK for 7 years as a students.
Even that is consider wased a long a period of time.
But as a student I don’idn't have to dealing with as many problems.
Like paying tax, working stress…
Having said that, just like my friend’s experience in the UK there are many rules and systems that I found were difficult to understand.
This sentence as well as the following sentence should be combined.
In UKthe UK there are many rules, and system…s that I found that difficult to understand.
LI later I realized that it was because I always used to compare it with my mother country to compare.
In fact, I should put that aside first.
I think that this is grammatically correct but it makes no sense in this context. I think what you meant to say was, "I should put aside my bias", or something along those lines.
Therefore that makes meI would feel better.
Feedback
Great Job! Just a few corrections!
Expat life
JI just reading my friend’s post.
I'm just reading my friend’s post. (present tense, you're currently doing it)
I just read my friend’s post. (past tense, you were reading the post, but now you're finished)
AIt was about a Japanese single father living in Paris for 15 years.
But he still struggles with daily life problems with the locals in his life.
There are daily problems and life problems, but it seems strange to put them together as daily life problems.
I lived in UK for 7 years as a students.
Even that is consider wased a long a period of time.
But as a student I don’t have to dealing with many problems.
Normally you use to + verb or just the verb +ing.
I like to swim. I like swimming.
I have to read a book.
She taught me to sing. She taught me singing.
Like paying tax, working stress…
This is can be added to the previous sentence.
Having said that just like my friend’s experience, In the UK there are many rules and systems… I found that difficult to understand.
In UKthe UK there are many rules, and systems… I found that difficult to understand.
This is can be added to the previous sentence.
Later I realize becaused I always use my mother country toas a compare.ison.
In fact, I should put that aside first.
Therefore that makes me feel better.
Feedback
I thought that your post was really relatable! I liked how your sentences were clear and had a clear train of thought.
Expat life This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Just reading my friend’s post.
I'm just reading my friend’s post. (present tense, you're currently doing it) I just read my friend’s post. (past tense, you were reading the post, but now you're finished)
This sentence, along with the following 2 should all be combined into the same sentence.
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About a Japanese single father living in Paris for 15 years.
About a
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But still struggle with daily life problems with the locals. But he still struggles with daily There are daily problems and life problems, but it seems strange to put them together as daily life problems. But still struggles with daily
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I lived in UK for 7 years as students. I lived in UK for 7 years as a student I lived in the UK for 7 years as a student I lived in the UK for 7 years as a student |
Even that consider was long a period of time. Even that is consider Even that is consider
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But as a student I don’t have to dealing with many problems. But as a student I don’t have to deal Normally you use to + verb or just the verb +ing. I like to swim. I like swimming. I have to read a book. She taught me to sing. She taught me singing. But as a student I d
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Like paying tax, working stress… Like paying tax, working stress… This is can be added to the previous sentence. Like paying tax, work
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Having said that just like my friend’s experience. Having said that just like my friend’s experience, In the UK there are many rules and systems… I found that difficult to understand. Having said that, just like my friend’s experience in the UK there are many rules and systems that I found were difficult to understand. This sentence as well as the following sentence should be combined. Having said that |
In UK many rules, system… I found that difficult to understand. In This is can be added to the previous sentence. In In |
Later I realize because I always use my mother country to compare. Later I realize
Later, I realized that it's because I always |
In fact, I should put that aside first. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In fact, I should put that aside first. I think that this is grammatically correct but it makes no sense in this context. I think what you meant to say was, "I should put aside my bias", or something along those lines.
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Therefore that makes me feel better. This sentence has been marked as perfect! Therefore
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