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kiwy

Oct. 19, 2021

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Exhausted

I'm exhausted today.
I went to the cleaning zone in the morning, the boys are cleaning. There were some administrators in the city cented would come here foring guiding, so it was quite busy for the students to clean. I was a little stressful because they didn't do it well while the school's administrators told me that I need to be more carefully of the cleaning work.
Then I went to classroom, it was still dirty. Sooner, I got a call from the dormitory keeper that my students didn't clean their room. I got angry soon. What's worse, a chief asked me to look after my class so that he could have a rest. I was very hugery, and I would have class in 10 minutes.
The students performed badly, they didn't take the lesson seriously. I felt like I was bomb that I would explode any seconds. But I had no time to do that because I need to attend a public lesson and a semonar after that. Yep, I was quite busy.
My neighbour is building a new house, it was very noisy today. I went to office early in the afternoon. I put on my earphone and got peace for a while. Ms. Liu told me that there was a girl in her class who had CHD, was very fragile. Last Friday, she girl told her that she wanted to die because of her illness. I was astonished. I always thoght that class 1 was the best class in grade 8. I was quite regjoiced now. Though the boys were naughty, they were tough. Long time ago, I received a massage from a network friend, she told me that she wanted to die. I was so shocked and worried for a long time that she would really did as she had said.
I finished some parper work as well. I also corrected the homework. When I thought I would have a good time to relax, the chief asked me to look after my class at night. He called my father, and my father made a promise. I always think that my father is stupid.
I'm exhausted. I have never gotten any happiness from the job.

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Exhausted

I'm exhausted today.

I went to the cleaning zonearea in the morning, and the boys awere cleaning already.

There were some administrators infrom the city centedr whould comeing here foring guiding, so it was quite busy for the students to inspection, so the students were quite busy cleaning.

I was a little stressfuled because they didn't do it well while, and the school's administrators had told me that I need to be more carefully ofthorough in checking their cleaning work.

Then I went to classroom, after, and it was still dirty.

Soon after, I got a call from the dormitory keeper that my students dihadn't cleaned their rooms.

I got angry soonquickly.

What's worse, a chief asked me to look after my class so that he could have a rest.

Chief 可以解释一下吗

I was very hungery, and I wouldas going to have class in 10 minutes.

The students performbehaved badly, and they didn't take the lesson seriously.

表现 can be translated as behavior or performance depending on the situation, but here it's behavior.

I felt like I wasa bomb that I wcould explode at any seconds.

My edit is a relatively common saying.

ButDespite this, I had no time to do thatrelax, because I needed to attend a public lesson and a semoinar after that.

YepIndeed, I was quite busy.

My neighbour is building a new house, itoday construction was very noisy today.

I went to office early in the afternoon.

I put oin my earphones and got some peace for a little while.

Earphones/earbuds go in your ears, headphones can go in or on.

Ms. Liu told me that there was a girl in her class who had CHD, wand is very fragile.

Last Friday, sthe girl told her that she wanted to die because of her illness.

I was astonished.

I always thoght that class 1 was the best class in grade 8.

I was quite regjoicedjoyful now.

I only say joyful because I think you meant to type "rejoiced," but I don't see why that would be a happy occurrence.

Though the boys were naughty, they were tough.

Long time ago, I received a maessage from a network friend,; she told me that she wanted to die.

I was so shocked, and worried for a long time that she would really did as she had saidgo through with it.

Anyways, I finished some parper work as well.

I also corrected the homework from this week/today/whatever.

When I thought I would have a goodfinally had some time to relax, the chief all of a sudden asked me to look after my class at tonight.

He called my father, and my father made a promised that I would.

I've always thinkought that my father is stupidnot so smart.

I'm exhausted.

I have never gotten any happiness from theis job.

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kiwy

Oct. 20, 2021

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What's worse, a chief asked me to look after my class so that he could have a rest.

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kiwy

Oct. 20, 2021

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The students performbehaved badly, and they didn't take the lesson seriously.

performance is more like optimistic? while behavior is the opposite?

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kiwy

Oct. 20, 2021

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I was quite regjoicedjoyful now.

Because if the girl were in my class and told me she wanted to die, I would be much more stressed than I am.

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kiwy

Oct. 20, 2021

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Thank you.

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sivanc

Oct. 20, 2021

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performance is more like optimistic? while behavior is the opposite?

Performance is something that you have with regard to a specific task. Performance on a test, evaluation, in a meeting, as a teacher, etc. Behavior refers more broadly to how you conduct yourself. Are you polite, do you have good manners, stuff like that, and it's not tied to a particular thing. If the students behaved badly in class they were loud, rude, distracted, not respecting the teacher, etc. The students could be behaving well, but performing poorly, or they could be behaving badly but performing well. Hope that helps, it's a tough distinction!

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sivanc

Oct. 20, 2021

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I was quite regjoicedjoyful now.

Maybe then "relieved," and more specifically, "I was relieved that I didn't have to be the one to help her," or something

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sivanc

Oct. 20, 2021

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词典推荐director, head, chairman. In a school setting this could be a principal/vice principal or something like that? Maybe there's just not an analogous position here.

Exhausted


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I'm exhausted today.


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I went to the cleaning zone in the morning, the boys are cleaning.


I went to the cleaning zonearea in the morning, and the boys awere cleaning already.

There were some administrators in the city cented would come here foring guiding, so it was quite busy for the students to clean.


There were some administrators infrom the city centedr whould comeing here foring guiding, so it was quite busy for the students to inspection, so the students were quite busy cleaning.

I was a little stressful because they didn't do it well while the school's administrators told me that I need to be more carefully of the cleaning work.


I was a little stressfuled because they didn't do it well while, and the school's administrators had told me that I need to be more carefully ofthorough in checking their cleaning work.

Then I went to classroom, it was still dirty.


Then I went to classroom, after, and it was still dirty.

Sooner, I got a call from the dormitory keeper that my students didn't clean their room.


Soon after, I got a call from the dormitory keeper that my students dihadn't cleaned their rooms.

I got angry soon.


I got angry soonquickly.

What's worse, a chief asked me to look after my class so that he could have a rest.


What's worse, a chief asked me to look after my class so that he could have a rest.

Chief 可以解释一下吗

I was very hugery, and I would have class in 10 minutes.


I was very hungery, and I wouldas going to have class in 10 minutes.

The students performed badly, they didn't take the lesson seriously.


The students performbehaved badly, and they didn't take the lesson seriously.

表现 can be translated as behavior or performance depending on the situation, but here it's behavior.

I felt like I was bomb that I would explode any seconds.


I felt like I wasa bomb that I wcould explode at any seconds.

My edit is a relatively common saying.

But I had no time to do that because I need to attend a public lesson and a semonar after that.


ButDespite this, I had no time to do thatrelax, because I needed to attend a public lesson and a semoinar after that.

Yep, I was quite busy.


YepIndeed, I was quite busy.

My neighbour is building a new house, it was very noisy today.


My neighbour is building a new house, itoday construction was very noisy today.

I went to office early in the afternoon.


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I put on my earphone and got peace for a while.


I put oin my earphones and got some peace for a little while.

Earphones/earbuds go in your ears, headphones can go in or on.

Ms. Liu told me that there was a girl in her class who had CHD, was very fragile.


Ms. Liu told me that there was a girl in her class who had CHD, wand is very fragile.

Last Friday, she girl told her that she wanted to die because of her illness.


Last Friday, sthe girl told her that she wanted to die because of her illness.

I was astonished.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I always thoght that class 1 was the best class in grade 8.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was quite regjoiced now.


I was quite regjoicedjoyful now.

I only say joyful because I think you meant to type "rejoiced," but I don't see why that would be a happy occurrence.

Though the boys were naughty, they were tough.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Long time ago, I received a massage from a network friend, she told me that she wanted to die.


Long time ago, I received a maessage from a network friend,; she told me that she wanted to die.

I was so shocked and worried for a long time that she would really did as she had said.


I was so shocked, and worried for a long time that she would really did as she had saidgo through with it.

I finished some parper work as well.


Anyways, I finished some parper work as well.

I also corrected the homework.


I also corrected the homework from this week/today/whatever.

When I thought I would have a good time to relax, the chief asked me to look after my class at night.


When I thought I would have a goodfinally had some time to relax, the chief all of a sudden asked me to look after my class at tonight.

He called my father, and my father made a promise.


He called my father, and my father made a promised that I would.

I always think that my father is stupid.


I've always thinkought that my father is stupidnot so smart.

I'm exhausted.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have never gotten any happiness from the job.


I have never gotten any happiness from theis job.

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