Feb. 28, 2022
Exercising For My Health
I have tried exercising as often as I can to stay healthy.
But it isn't easy to do because of COVID-19.
Before the pandemic, I went to the gym after work, sometimes I went to the swimming pool.
I also walked around my office building or climbed the stairs of my house.
When the holidays, I used to ride my bicycle over than 60 km.
Except climbing the stairs, I can't do other things now.
I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.
Exercising For My Health
I have tried to exercisinge as often as I can to stay healthy.
But it isn't easy to do because of COVID-19.
Before the pandemic, I usually went to the gym after work, and sometimes I went to the swimming pool.
I also walked around my office building or climbed the stairs of my house.
WhenDuring the holidays, I used to ride my bicycle overmore than 60 km.
ExceptAside from climbing the stairs, I can't do those other things now.
I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.
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잘 쓰셨습니다! 저도 코로나 전염병이 빨리 끝났으면 좋겠어요.
March 2, 2022
고맙습니다. 빨리 끝났으면 좋겠어요. 많이 지치네요.
Exercising For My Health
I have tried exercisinge as often as I can to stay healthy.
Before the pandemic, I went to the gym after work, sometimes I went to the swimming pool.
"Swimming pool" wouldn't be wrong, but you can just say "pool"
I also walked around my office building or climbed the stairs of my house.
When there were holidays, I used towould ride my bicycle over than 60 km.
Except for climbing the stairs, I can't do the other things now.
I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.
March 1, 2022
Thank you very much.
Exercising For My Health
I have triedtry to exercisinge as often as I can to stay healthy.
I presume you are writing in the present tense so it would be "I try"
But it isn't easy to do because of COVID-19.
Before the pandemic, I went to the gym after work, and sometimes I went to the swimming pool.
I also walked around my office building or climbed the stairs of my house.
WhenDuring the holidays, I used to ride my bicycle over than 60 km.
Except climbing the stairs, I can't do other thingsanything else now.
I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.
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Good writing :)
March 1, 2022
Thank you very much.
Exercising For My Health
I have tried exercising as often as I can, in order to stay healthy.
Your sentence is perfect. This correction is purely stylistic.
But it isn't easy to do because of COVID-19.
Before the pandemic, I went to the gym after work, and sometimes I went to the swimming pool.
Again, a purely stylistic suggestion.
I also walked around my office building or climbed the stairs of my house.
WhenDuring the holidays, I used to ride my bicycle over than 60 km.
"During" is essential.
You can choose either, "ride my bicycle more than 60km." or, more naturally, "ride my bicycle over 60km."
Except climbing the stairs, I can't do other things now.
I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.
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I sincerely hope so too. In the past 2 years, I have almost developed agoraphobia. I only go shopping for food every 10 days. Other than that, I hardly ever go anywhere. It's challenging!
March 1, 2022
Thanks for your corrections. And you are right, it is very hard to go around.
Exercising For My Health
I have triedam trying to exercisinge as often as I can to stay healthy, but it isn't easy to do because of COVID-19.
But it isn't easy to do because of COVID-19.
연결사인 "but"으로 문장을 시작하는 게 좀 어색한 거 같아요 (문법적으로 틀린 거 아닌데 구어적인 표현에 가까운 거 같아요)!
Before the pandemic, I went to the gym after work, and sometimes I went to the swimming pool.
I also walked around my office building orand climbed the stairs of my house.
WhenDuring the holidays, I used to ride my bicycle over thanand cycle over 60 km.
Except climbing the stairs,The only thing I can't do other things nownow is climb the stairs.
I hope the pandemic comes to an end soon.
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잘 쓰셨어요! 화이팅하세요 :)
March 1, 2022
너무 고맙습니다!!
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When the holidays, I used to ride my bicycle over than 60 km.
"During" is essential. You can choose either, "ride my bicycle more than 60km." or, more naturally, "ride my bicycle over 60km."
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