Dec. 7, 2020
Exercises (4)
1. Bristled with rage, he broke into a commodious house, plundering everything he saw.
2. I don't like unexpected events, because they always intrude on my day.
3, I did not know why he intruded into the party. He just spoiled all our mood.
4, No one wants to become an ineffectual leader when they are in charge.
5, Having heard about his sales bonanza, I had an emotion oddly compounded of vicarious pleasure and great emptiness.
6, The thief easily broke through the lax security but failed to take anything away.
7, He was incensed by their treachery.
Exercises (4)
1. Bristled with rage, he broke into a commodious house, plundering everything he saw.
2. I don't like unexpected events, because they always intrude ondisrupt my day.
I don't believe it's wrong the way you wrote it, just sounds better to me this way.
3, I did not know why he intruded into the party.
He just spoiled all our mood.
Sounds better this way in my opinion. Here's another suggestion:
"He just spoiled all the fun."
4, No one wants to become an ineffectual leader when they are in charge.
5, Having heard about his sales bonanza, I had an emotion oddly compounded of vicarious pleasure and great emptiness.
6, The thief easily broke through the lax security but failed to take anything away.
7, He was incensed by their treachery.
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Well done! I myself couldn't come up with a sentence like 5 lol
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Exercises (4) This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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1. Bristled with rage, he broke into a commodious house, plundering everything he saw. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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2. I don't like unexpected events, because they always intrude on my day. 2. I don't like unexpected events, because they always I don't believe it's wrong the way you wrote it, just sounds better to me this way. |
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3, I did not know why he intruded into the party. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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He just spoiled all our mood. He just spoiled Sounds better this way in my opinion. Here's another suggestion: "He just spoiled all the fun." |
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4, No one wants to become an ineffectual leader when they are in charge. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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5, Having heard about his sales bonanza, I had an emotion oddly compounded of vicarious pleasure and great emptiness. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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6, The thief easily broke through the lax security but failed to take anything away. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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7, He was incensed by their treachery. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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