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zanyzoe

Nov. 12, 2025

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Exercise

-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-

When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!
His aloofness made him frankly thoughtless.
In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.
Some people thought he had hatred for them because he spoke with no one.
He is wasted his time to wander on his garden and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springing and uttered strange noises.

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Exercise

-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-

When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!

His aloofness made him frankly thoughtless.

In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.

Some people thought he had hatred for them because he spoke with no one.

He is wasted his time to wander oing in his garden, and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springisprang and uttered strange noises.

double check your tenses

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this is brilliant! well done :)

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zanyzoe

Nov. 13, 2025

6

Ooooh thank you !!!

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-Create a story with the following words: aloofness, utter, deceive, to wander, hatred, franckly, to waste, seek, thoughtless, spring, indolent and rather.-


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I was younger, I met an lonely and indolent man!


His aloofness made him frankly thoughtless.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In reality, he was rather shy but his behaviour deceived us.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Some people thought he had hatred for them because he spoke with no one.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

He is wasted his time to wander on his garden and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springing and uttered strange noises.


He is wasted his time to wander oing in his garden, and if someone tried to talk to him, he was springisprang and uttered strange noises.

double check your tenses

When I was younger, I met a lonely and indolent man!


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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