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kiwy

Aug. 25, 2021

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My friend invited me to run tonight. It had been a month since my last run, and my feet felt a little uncomfortable, I thought I wouldn't run more than 1.5 km. To my surprise, I ran 2.18 km in the end, which was the longest distance during the summer vacation. I couldn't remember what I was thinking about when I was running. Maybe thinking nothing helped me manage to run farther.
Besides, my feet didn't feel uncomfortable during and after my running, while my shoulder felt a little sore when I had run 2 km. But it felt better soon after I stopped.
I am going to swim tomorrow, which makes me feel free, so it is my favourite sport. After doing some high strength sports, such as runninng, playing basketball and swimming, I will become sleepy soon. Riding a bike can't make me feel tired amd sleepy, but it can make me feel pleasant because of the connection with nature. Hence, riding my bike more like an emotion exercise than a physical one. Therefore, we should do different kinds of exercise alternately.

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Exercise

My friend invited me to rungo running tonight.

It had been a month since my last run, and my feet felt a little uncomfortable, so I thought I wouldn't run more than 1.5 km.

To my surprise, I ran 2.18 km in the end, which was the longest distance I've run during the summer vacation.

I couldan't remember what I was thinking about when I was running.

Maybe thinking nothing helped me manage to run farther.

Besides, mMy feet didn't feel uncomfortable during andor after my running, while my shoulder felt a little sore when I had run 2 km.

But it felt better soon after I stopped.

I am going to go swimming tomorrow, which. It makes me feel free, so it is my favourite sport.

After doing some high strength sports, such as runninng, playing basketball and swimming, I will become sleepy soon.

Riding a bike cadoesn't make me feel tired amdor sleepy, but it candoes make me feel (pleasant/happy) because of the connection with nature.

Hence, riding my bike is more like an emotional exercise than a physical one.

Therefore, we should do different kinds of exercise alternately.

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kiwy

Aug. 26, 2021

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Thank you.

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My friend invited me to run tonight.


My friend invited me to rungo running tonight.

It had been a month since my last run, and my feet felt a little uncomfortable, I thought I wouldn't run more than 1.5 km.


It had been a month since my last run, and my feet felt a little uncomfortable, so I thought I wouldn't run more than 1.5 km.

To my surprise, I ran 2.18 km in the end, which was the longest distance during the summer vacation.


To my surprise, I ran 2.18 km in the end, which was the longest distance I've run during the summer vacation.

I couldn't remember what I was thinking about when I was running.


I couldan't remember what I was thinking about when I was running.

Maybe thinking nothing helped me manage to run farther.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Besides, my feet didn't feel uncomfortable during and after my running, while my shoulder felt a little sore when I had run 2 km.


Besides, mMy feet didn't feel uncomfortable during andor after my running, while my shoulder felt a little sore when I had run 2 km.

But it felt better soon after I stopped.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I am going to swim tomorrow, which makes me feel free, so it is my favourite sport.


I am going to go swimming tomorrow, which. It makes me feel free, so it is my favourite sport.

After doing some high strength sports, such as runninng, playing basketball and swimming, I will become sleepy soon.


After doing some high strength sports, such as runninng, playing basketball and swimming, I will become sleepy soon.

Riding a bike can't make me feel tired amd sleepy, but it can make me feel pleasant because of the connection with nature.


Riding a bike cadoesn't make me feel tired amdor sleepy, but it candoes make me feel (pleasant/happy) because of the connection with nature.

Hence, riding my bike more like an emotion exercise than a physical one.


Hence, riding my bike is more like an emotional exercise than a physical one.

Therefore, we should do different kinds of exercise alternately.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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