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thinkmore

Feb. 8, 2021

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I bought bread at a grocery. I got home and then noticed that the package of the bread was torn. I thought I broke it on my way, but the bread already became dry and hard, so I figured out the package was torn before I bought it. I forgot to buy milk, so I went back to the grocery and had it exchanged for a new one and bought milk. I'll make sure if packages are ok before buying.

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Exchangeing Bread

I bought bread at a grocery store.

You can also say 'supermarket' or 'grocers' although grocers is a slightly old word nowadays, also grocery store is American English.

I got home and then noticed that the package ofing for the bread was torn.

I thought I broke it on my way home, but the bread had already becaome dry and hard, so I figured out the packageing was torn before I bought it.

I forgot to buy milk too, so I went back to the grocery store and had ithe bread exchanged for a new one and bought milk.

Since 'milk' is the last noun you referred to, at first it sounded to me like you were exchanging milk and not bread. After re-reading I understood, but its easier to read with my correction.

I'll make sure if the packages areing is ok before buying it.

Usually we use 'package' for a small item to be posted in the mail, packaging is the plastic around a product.

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Fine overall! Just a few small mistakes that I still understood quite easily.

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thinkmore

Feb. 8, 2021

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Wow, thank you for the correlations and the explanations!😄They helped me a lot.🌟

Exchange bread


I bought bread at a grocery.


I bought bread at a grocery store.

You can also say 'supermarket' or 'grocers' although grocers is a slightly old word nowadays, also grocery store is American English.

I got home and then noticed that the package of the bread was torn.


I got home and then noticed that the package ofing for the bread was torn.

I thought I broke it on my way, but the bread already became dry and hard, so I figured out the package was torn before I bought it.


I thought I broke it on my way home, but the bread had already becaome dry and hard, so I figured out the packageing was torn before I bought it.

I forgot to buy milk, so I went back to the grocery and exchanged it for a new one and bought milk.


I'll make sure if packages are ok before buying.


I'll make sure if the packages areing is ok before buying it.

Usually we use 'package' for a small item to be posted in the mail, packaging is the plastic around a product.

Exchange Bread


Exchangeing Bread

I forgot to buy milk, so I went back to the grocery and had it exchanged for a new one and bought milk.


I forgot to buy milk too, so I went back to the grocery store and had ithe bread exchanged for a new one and bought milk.

Since 'milk' is the last noun you referred to, at first it sounded to me like you were exchanging milk and not bread. After re-reading I understood, but its easier to read with my correction.

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