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Examination

Time is so fast.
Today's examination was finish.
Looking back, I feel like I didn't accomplish anything this year.
I feel like vast and hazy.
I vaguely feel some growth within me, emitting a faint glow.

Corrections

Time is so fast.flies.¶
I agree with @JoeTofu

Today's examination was finishis over.

We often speak of something being "over" when it is finished or done. It works well here, I think. It conveys the feeling that the exam is behind you now and part of the past.

I feel likeMy impression of the year is vast and hazy.

I'm guessing that you mean that the year seems vast and hazy as you look back. I suggest "impression" to reflect this is how it seems.
(Other people have interpreted this sentence differently, and I wanted to offer another interpretation.)

Feedback

The last line is really well written.
Also, excellent word choices: "vast, hazy, accomplished"
Keep up the good work.

Examination

Time is so fast.

Suggestions:
Time passes very quickly.
Time flies.

Today's examination was finish.ed.

Looking back, I feel like I didn't accomplish anything this year.

I feel likeEverything feels vast and hazy.

I’m guessing this is what you mean.

I vaguely feel some growth within me, emitting a faint glow.

Examination

Time is so fast.

Today's examination whas finishbeen completed.

Looking back, I feel like I didn't accomplish anything this year.

IMy feel likings are vast and hazy.

Not quite sure of the sentence

I vaguely feel some growth within me, emitting a faint glow.

Examination

Time is so fast.

Today's examination was finished.

Looking back, I feel like I didn't accomplish anything this year.

I feel likeEverything seems vast and hazy.

I vaguely feel some growth within me, emitting a faint glow.

Examination


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Time is so fast.


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Time is so fast.

Suggestions: Time passes very quickly. Time flies.

Time is so fast.flies.¶
I agree with @JoeTofu

Today's examination was finish.


Today's examination was finished.

Today's examination whas finishbeen completed.

Today's examination was finish.ed.

Today's examination was finishis over.

We often speak of something being "over" when it is finished or done. It works well here, I think. It conveys the feeling that the exam is behind you now and part of the past.

Looking back, I feel like I didn't accomplish anything this year.


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I feel like vast and hazy.


I feel likeEverything seems vast and hazy.

IMy feel likings are vast and hazy.

Not quite sure of the sentence

I feel likeEverything feels vast and hazy.

I’m guessing this is what you mean.

I feel likeMy impression of the year is vast and hazy.

I'm guessing that you mean that the year seems vast and hazy as you look back. I suggest "impression" to reflect this is how it seems. (Other people have interpreted this sentence differently, and I wanted to offer another interpretation.)

I vaguely feel some growth within me, emitting a faint glow.


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