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ryoh

Aug. 3, 2020

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Exam day

When came here this morning, I went through the famous red gate called "Akamon." I have never been here, so this was the first time I have ever seen it. When I saw it, I felt like I was welcomed by this university. I imagined many fun things I might experience when Iam in university, but now I need to concentrate on the exams.

Corrections

When came here this morning, I went through the famous red gate called "Akamon."

I haved never been here, so this was the first time I haved ever seen it.

'Have' is present tense; both uses should be 'had.'
'Was' is past tense and is correct!

Past tense is correct! But if you had wanted present tense it would be: "I have never been here, so this is my first time ever seeing it."

You are telling us this story in past tense, so past tense is correct.

When I saw it, I felt like I was welcomed by this university.

I imagined many fun things I might experience when Iam in university, but now I need to concentrate on the exams.

Feedback

You wrote an entry that handled past, present, and future tenses well!

Good luck on your exams.

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ryoh

Aug. 3, 2020

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Thank you!!

Exam day


When came here this morning, I went through the famous red gate called "Akamon."


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I have never been here, so this was the first time I have ever seen it.


I haved never been here, so this was the first time I haved ever seen it.

'Have' is present tense; both uses should be 'had.' 'Was' is past tense and is correct! Past tense is correct! But if you had wanted present tense it would be: "I have never been here, so this is my first time ever seeing it." You are telling us this story in past tense, so past tense is correct.

When I saw it, I felt like I was welcomed by this university.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I imagined many fun things I might experience when Iam in university, but now I need to concentrate on the exams.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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