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Aug. 25, 2022

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Rains In Summer Are Beautiful

I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninstorms. After the rain, plants are greener than ever and its leafs shine in pretty green and yellow tones. Rain refresh the summer like an ice cream. When the day is cloudy you can walk in the street without too much heat. A lot o people relate a cloudy day to sadness but I think that rain is more related to nostalgy.

Haiku:
After the rainstorm
shining with the summer sunlight
plants become greener

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Rains In Summer Are Beautiful

After the rain, plants are greener than ever and its leafs shine in pretty green and yellow tones.

When the day is cloudy you can walk in the street without too much heat.

Haiku:

After the rainstorm

shining with the summer sunlight

plants become greener

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Fernanhaiku

Aug. 26, 2022

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Haiku:

After the rainstorm

shining with the summer sunlight

plants become greener

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Aug. 26, 2022

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When the day is cloudy you can walk in the street without too much heat.

Haiku:

After the rainstorm

shining with the summer sunlight

plants become greener

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Fernanhaiku

Aug. 26, 2022

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Rains In Summer Are Beautiful


Rains In Summer Are Beautiful Rains In Summer Are Beautiful

It is poetic as written, but the more common phrasing would be "Rain in the Summer is Beautiful".

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I understand how figuring out which words should be capitalized can be difficult. Hang in there!

Rains I in Summer Areis Beautiful Rain in Summer is Beautiful

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I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninstorms.


I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninthunderstorms. I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and thunderstorms.

'Rainstorm' would work too.

I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninstorms. I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain.

I do, too! I wasn't sure what you meant by, "raninstorms," so I deleted it.

I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninstorms. I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and storms.

I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and raninthe storms. I think that the most beautiful part of summer is the rain and the storms.

After the rain, plants are greener than ever and its leafs shine in pretty green and yellow tones.


After the rain, plants are greener than ever and itstheir leafves shine in pretty green and yellow tones. After the rain, plants are greener than ever and their leaves shine in pretty green and yellow tones.

Plural, to match plant_s_.

After the rain, plants are greener than ever and itsthe leafves shine in pretty green and yellow tones. After the rain, plants are greener than ever and the leaves shine in pretty green and yellow tones.

This is a beautiful sentence!

After the rain, the plants (are/return) greener than ever and itstheir leafves shine in pretty green and yellow tones. After the rain, the plants (are/return) greener than ever and their leaves shine in pretty green and yellow tones.

Really lovely sentence here! Just a stylistic suggestion.

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Rain refresh the summer like an ice cream.


Rain refreshes the summer like an ice cream. Rain refreshes the summer like ice cream.

Ice cream is usually uncountable, e.g: I had lots of ice cream. The store offers many kinds of ice cream. How much ice cream did you buy?

Rain refresh thes summer like an ice cream does. Rain refreshes summer like ice cream does.

Rain refreshes the summer like, just ans ice cream does. Rain refreshes the summer, just as ice cream does.

Rain refreshes the summerair/the earth like an ice cream. Rain refreshes the air/the earth like an ice cream.

When the day is cloudy you can walk in the street without too much heat.


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When the day is cloudy, you can walk inalong the streets without too much heafeeling too hot. When the day is cloudy, you can walk along the streets without feeling too hot.

When the day is cloudy, you can walk in the street without too much heat. When the day is cloudy, you can walk in the street without too much heat.

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A lot o people relate a cloudy day to sadness but I think that rain is more related to nostalgy.


A lot of people (relate/compare) a cloudy day to sadness, but I think that rain is more related to nostalgyia. A lot of people (relate/compare) a cloudy day to sadness, but I think that rain is more related to nostalgia.

A lot of people relatethink a cloudy day is related to sadness but I think that rain is more related to nostalgyia. A lot of people think a cloudy day is related to sadness but I think that rain is more related to nostalgia.

What a terrific observation!

A lot of people relate a cloudy day to sadness, but I think that rain is more related to nostalgyia. A lot of people relate a cloudy day to sadness, but I think that rain is more related to nostalgia.

A lot of people relate a cloudy day to sadness but I think that rain is more closely related to nostalgyia. A lot of people relate a cloudy day to sadness but I think that rain is more closely related to nostalgia.

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After the rainstorm


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shining with the summer sunlight


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plants become greener


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