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Feburary 1st
The other day, I went to my high school reunion party.
I met up with my friend at the station, then we walked to the hall together.
There were more than 200 people ( that was surprising), and we enjoyed talking with our old friends, especially our classmates.
Some of our homeroom teachers also came. I was shocked to hear that my homeroom teacher had already quit her job to take care of her baby.
Of course, it is wonderful that she got married and had a child, but she was the most popular teacher during our school days, so it seems sad that no more students will be taught by her.
Anyway, it was a special time that I met old friends and remembered our nostalgic days.
How often do you get such a chance to gather with your classmates after graduation?
Feburary 1st
The other day, I went to my high school reunion party.
I met up with my friend at the station, then we walked to the hall together.
There were more than 200 people ( that was surprising), and we enjoyed talking with our old friends, especially our classmates.
Some of our old homeroom teachers also came.
Adding "old" here makes it clear that they are not still your homeroom teachers
I was shocked to hear that my homeroom teacher had already quit her job to take care of her baby.
Of course, it is wonderful that she got married and had a child, but she was the most popular teacher during our school days, so it seems sad that no more students will be taught by her.
AnywayIn any case, it was a special time that- I met up with my old friends and we remembered our nostalgicinisced on our high school days.
I have tried to make this both a bit more natural and a bit more advanced for you
How often do you get such athe chance to gather with your classmates after graduation?
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The other day, I went to my high school reunion party. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I met up with my friend at the station, then we walked to the hall together. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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There were more than 200 people ( that was surprising), and we enjoyed talking with our old friends, especially our classmates. There were more than 200 people ( |
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Some of our homeroom teachers also came. Some of our old homeroom teachers also came. Adding "old" here makes it clear that they are not still your homeroom teachers |
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I was shocked to hear that my homeroom teacher had already quit her job to take care of her baby. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Of course, it is wonderful that she got married and had a child, but she was the most popular teacher during our school days, so it seems sad that no more students will be taught by her. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Anyway, it was a special time that I met old friends and remembered our nostalgic days.
I have tried to make this both a bit more natural and a bit more advanced for you |
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How often do you get such a chance to gather with your classmates after graduation? How often do you get |
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