Feb. 26, 2021
Lesson(s) 73,87,89
Lesson 73 The way to King Street
Mrs. Mills wanted to go King Street but she didn't know London very well. She lost her way. She said to herself that she can ask a man when she saw him. She asked him that how there went but the man couldn't understand English because he was a tourist. Until the man take out his phrasebook.
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Why did Mrs. Mills ask a man that how to go King Street?
She lost her way and she didn't know London very well.
Why didn't Mrs. Mills know the man is a tourist?
His wearing hadn't tourist proof at firstly. Until the man take out his phrasebook.
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Lesson 87 A car crash
Mr.Wood had a crash three days ago. He had driven his car into lamp-post. He went to the garage to ask the attendant if his car ready yet. The attendant said the mechanics still try to repair it. The attendant suggested him had to buy new one.
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Could The mechanics repair Mr.Wood's car?
No. Because after three days the mechanics still repair it.
Why did the attendant suggest him to buy new one?
It was because the attendant thought his car had a serious crash.
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Lesson 89 For sale
Nigel saw a house on "for sale" broad. He went to the house and Ian welcome him. Ian wanted to buy a small house in the country to retired. Ian hoped to sell it with £68,500. Nigel thought it was expensive so he had to call his wife to see house.
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Why did Nigel give his wife to has the last word?
Nigel thought £68,500 were expensive so he hoped his wife could decide.
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Lesson(s)s 73, 87, and 89
Lessons 73, 87, and 89
Lesson 73 : "The wWay to King Street"
Lesson 73: "The Way to King Street"
In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.
Mrs. Mills wanted to go King Street, but she didn't know London very well. Mrs. Mills wanted to go King Street, but she didn't know London very well.
She lost her way.
She said to herself that she canould ask a man when she saw him.
She said to herself that she could ask a man when she saw him.
This is technically grammatically correct but very confusing for the reader. It would most likely be stated, "When she saw a man, she said to herself, "I can ask him"".
She asked him that how there wenthow to get there, but the man couldn't understand English because he was a tourist.
She asked him how to get there, but the man couldn't understand English because he was a tourist.
UThat was, until the man takeook out his phrasebook.
That was, until the man took out his phrasebook.
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Why did Mrs. Mills ask athe man that how to go King Street?
Why did Mrs. Mills ask the man how to go King Street?
She lost her way and she didn't know London very well.
Why didn't Mrs. Mills know that the man iwas a tourist?
Why didn't Mrs. Mills know that the man was a tourist?
Hise wasn't wearing hadn't tourist proof at firstlanything touristy.
He wasn't wearing anything touristy.
UThat was, until the man takeook out his phrasebook.
That was, until the man took out his phrasebook.
You would have to provide some context for this sentence.
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Lesson 87 : "A cCar cCrash"
Lesson 87: "A Car Crash"
In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.
Mr. Wood had a crash three days ago. Mr. Wood had a crash three days ago.
He had driven his car into lamp-post.
He had driven his car into lamppost.
"He had" can also be written/said as "He'd".
He went to the garage to ask the attendant if his car was ready yet. He went to the garage to ask the attendant if his car was ready yet.
The attendant said the mechanics were still trying to repair it. The attendant said the mechanics were still trying to repair it.
The attendant suggested to him thadt he may have to buy new one.
The attendant suggested to him that he may have to buy new one.
"Suggested" and "have to" sound kind of like oxymorons.
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Could Tthe mechanics repair Mr.Wood's car?
Could the mechanics repair Mr.Wood's car?
No.
BNo, because after three days the mechanics stilly were still trying to repair it.
No, because after three days they were still trying to repair it.
"Repairing" something is to say that that object is being fixed.
Why did the attendant suggest him tothat he buy a new one?
Why did the attendant suggest that he buy a new one?
It was because the attendant thought his car had abeen seriously damaged in the crash.
It was because the attendant thought his car had been seriously damaged in the crash.
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Lesson 89 : "For sSale"
Lesson 89: "For Sale"
In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title.
Nigel saw a house on "for sale" broad.
Nigel saw a house for sale.
I don't know what you mean by "broad".
He went to the house and Ian welcome him.
Ian wanted to buy a small house in the country to retired.
Ian wanted to buy a small house in the country to retire.
Ian hoped to sell it withat £68,500.
Ian hoped to sell it at £68,500.
Nigel thought it was expensive, so he had to call his wife to see house. Nigel thought it was expensive, so he had to call his wife to see house.
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Why did Nigel givelet his wife to has the last wordhave the final say?
Why did Nigel let his wife have the final say?
I think this is what you were trying to say.
Nigel thought £68,500 wereas expensive, so he hoped his wife could decide.
Nigel thought £68,500 was expensive, so he hoped his wife could decide.
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Great Job! Just a few corrections!
Feb. 28, 2021
Hise wasn't wearing hadn't tourist proof at firstlanything touristy.
“He wasn’t wearing anything tourist.”
Is this correct grammar?
Feb. 28, 2021
He had driven his car into lamp-post.
"He had" can also be written/said as "He'd".
lamppost?
Feb. 28, 2021
BNo, because after three days the mechanics stilly were still trying to repair it.
"Repairing" something is to say that that object is being fixed.
Why did the “mechanics” have to be deleted? Can you edit it again? I see the correction is messing.
Feb. 28, 2021
Nigel saw a house on "for sale" broad.
I don't know what you mean by "broad".
A broad, was written, “for sale” near the house.
Feb. 28, 2021
Why did Nigel givelet his wife to has the last wordhave the final say?
I think this is what you were trying to say.
It was idiom....
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/learner-english/have-the-last-word
I am not sure if you need edit it again.
Feb. 28, 2021
“He wasn’t wearing anything tourist.” Is this correct grammar?
This unfortunately isn't correct grammar. "Tourist" is a noun while "touristy" is an adjetive.
Feb. 28, 2021
lamppost?
I actually had to look this one up for spelling, but it's "lamppost".
Feb. 28, 2021
Why did the “mechanics” have to be deleted? Can you edit it again? I see the correction is messing.
Technically, "the mechanics" didn't have to be deleted, but this way it sounds more natural and less repetitive, as "the mechanics" was used in the previous sentence.
Feb. 28, 2021
A broad, was written, “for sale” near the house.
Is it possible that you mean "a board"? I don't think "broad" is a noun, although it's an adjetive.
Feb. 28, 2021
It was idiom.... https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/learner-english/have-the-last-word I am not sure if you need edit it again.
I've honestly never heard of this before, but it might be from another region. The only expressions that I can think of like this would be "to have the last laugh (non-applicable here)" and "to have the final say".
March 1, 2021
This unfortunately isn't correct grammar. "Tourist" is a noun while "touristy" is an adjetive.
Please you re-correct you correction, because you sentence was show this incorrect sentence.
And, I think you have to read your all correct sentences...
March 1, 2021
Is it possible that you mean "a board"? I don't think "broad" is a noun, although it's an adjetive.
It is a noun...
plx see the pic
https://i.ibb.co/pLtbjF2/A28-BE720-663-B-4-C6-B-B700-65-A1674-F5-B9-C.jpg
March 1, 2021
I double-checked and "He wasn't wearing anything touristy" is grammatically correct, but if you wanted to include the word tourist you could say, "He wasn't wearing anything that made him look like a tourist".
A "board" could be used to describe the object in the picture, but it's more commonly referred to as a "sign" or a "for-sale sign" (in this case).
March 3, 2021
UThat was, until the man takeook out his phrasebook.
What is "that was until"?
March 3, 2021
Nigel saw a house on "for sale" broad.
I don't know what you mean by "broad".
Now you know it was a sign, so do this correction need to edit?
ps. do you use US English?
March 3, 2021
Yes, the correction would still need to be edited, as the sentence wasn't grammatically correct. Moreover, you would need to say either, "a board with "for sale" written on it" or "a for-sale sign". I did notice that you keep writing "broad" instead of "board", which will cause confusion as "broad" means large or wide, while "board" is a synonym for plank.
I do speak Eastern New England English, though it shouldn't be a problem here if you were looking for a different dialect, as I mostly corrected grammatical concepts, which are pretty much standard throughout (as we all learn "Standard English" in school).
March 4, 2021
May I ask what "That was,until...." is?
March 4, 2021
1) May I ask what "That was,until...." is?
2)I am very confused.
You have corrected my topic name that "Lessons", but someone corrected my topic name that "Lesson(s)", so which is correct?????
I am very confuse.
March 5, 2021
UThat was, until the man takeook out his phrasebook.
1) May I ask what "That was,until...." is?
2)I am very confused.
You have corrected my topic name that "Lessons", but someone corrected my topic name that "Lesson(s)", so which is correct?????
March 5, 2021
It should be "Lessons" as you are referring to more than one lesson. As for "that was, until...", I can't really explain the grammar behind it, but it just sounded natural to me for this sentence. You needed some sort of transition, so this construction seemed to fit. I've found some other example sentences with it and listed them below.
1. That was, until a new contender appeared on the scene.
2. That was, until two days ago, when she called me out of the blue.
3. That was, until real life came looking for me.
I hope these help!
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Lesson(s) 73,87,89
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Lesson 73 The way to King Street
Lesson 73 In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title. |
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Mrs. Mills wanted to go King Street but she didn't know London very well. Mrs. Mills wanted to go King Street, but she didn't know London very well. Mrs. Mills wanted to go King Street, but she didn't know London very well. |
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She lost her way. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She said to herself that she can ask a man when she saw him.
She said to herself that she c This is technically grammatically correct but very confusing for the reader. It would most likely be stated, "When she saw a man, she said to herself, "I can ask him"". |
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She asked him that how There went but the man couldn't understand English because he was a tourist. |
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Until the man take out his phrasebook.
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- This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why did Mrs. Mills ask a man that how to go King Street?
Why did Mrs. Mills ask |
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She lost her way and she didn't know London very well. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why didn't Mrs. Mills know the man is a tourist?
Why didn't Mrs. Mills know that the man |
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His wearing hadn't tourist proof at firstly.
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Until the man take out his phrasebook.
You would have to provide some context for this sentence. |
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Lesson 87 A car crash
Lesson 87 In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title. |
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Mr.Wood had a crash three days ago. Mr. Wood had a crash three days ago. Mr. Wood had a crash three days ago. |
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He had driven his car into lamp-post.
He had driven his car into lamp "He had" can also be written/said as "He'd". |
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He went to the garage to ask the attendant if his car ready yet. He went to the garage to ask the attendant if his car was ready yet. He went to the garage to ask the attendant if his car was ready yet. |
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The attendant said the mechanics still try to repair it. The attendant said the mechanics were still trying to repair it. The attendant said the mechanics were still trying to repair it. |
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The attendant suggested him had to buy new one.
The attendant suggested to him tha "Suggested" and "have to" sound kind of like oxymorons. |
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Could The mechanics repair Mr.Wood's car?
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No.
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Because after three days the mechanics still repair it.
"Repairing" something is to say that that object is being fixed. |
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Why did the attendant suggest him to buy new one?
Why did the attendant suggest |
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It was because the attendant thought his car had a serious crash.
It was because the attendant thought his car had |
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Lesson 89 For sale
Lesson 89 In English, the first letter of all nouns, verbs, adjectives, adverbs, etc., is capitalized in the title. |
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Nigel saw a house on" for sale" broad. |
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He went to the house and Ian welcome him. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Ian wanted to buy a small house in the country to retired.
Ian wanted to buy a small house in the country to retire |
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Ian hoped To sell it with £68,500. |
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Nigel thought it was expensive so he had to call his wife to see house. Nigel thought it was expensive, so he had to call his wife to see house. Nigel thought it was expensive, so he had to call his wife to see house. |
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- This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Why did Nigel give his wife to has the last word?
Why did Nigel I think this is what you were trying to say. |
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Nigel thought £68,500 were expensive so he hoped his wife could decide.
Nigel thought £68,500 w |
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She asked him that how there went but the man couldn't understand English because he was a tourist.
She asked him |
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Nigel saw a house on "for sale" broad.
Nigel saw a house I don't know what you mean by "broad". |
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Ian hoped to sell it with £68,500.
Ian hoped to sell it |
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