Everythings Takes Its Time

Alt: All Things Take Time

Sometimes I think the people musthave to take advantage for theof certain opportunities, however sometimes. Sometimes, however, these opportunities are not goodn't worthwhile.

"not good" is very generic - I would try to find an adjective that explains why it's not good, e.g. "not rewarding," "lack purpose," "provide little money" or a combination of them.

"However, sometimes" is ok, but "Sometimes, however" sounds more natural to me in this case.

Today I received a call to onefrom a friend, and he offered me a position of manager in themanagement position at his company.

You could use "the position of" construction if it's a very specific title or type of manager.

Alt: Today I got a call from a friend and he offered me the position of Sr. Operations Manager at his company.

After to assess all ing everythings that position entails, I decided to say NO.

Alt: After assessing all the details, I decided to reject his offer.

Many times, it's necessary to sacrifice the economic factor ovebenefits for peace of mind.

I think "Often" would sound more natural here. "factors" could be used here, but it's neutral and you probably want to highlight that the economic factors are good.

Alt: It's often necessary to sacrifice financial advantages for peace of mind.

PDS: I would thanks'd appreciate if someone tocould explain to me the difference between "many times" and "a lot of time" ¶
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God bless you

"God bless you" is ok, but "God bless" is a lot more idiomatic.

They're roughly equivalent, but "many times" is more formal. You wouldn't really use it in casual speech.

EverytAll Things Takes Its Time

Sometimes, I think the people musthave to take advantage for theof every opportunities, hy. However, sometimes these opportunities are not goodn't worthwhile.

A more formal way to write the last sentence, without contractions :

"However, not all opportunities are worthwhile."

Today, I received a call to onefrom a friend, and he offered me a manager position of manager in thein his company.

After to assessing all of the things that position entails, I decided to say NO.

After assessing the details, I decided to refuse the position.

Many times, it's necessary to sacrifice the economic factor oa higher income in order to haver peace of mind.

If you want to use the word "over" in this sentence, the thing that you want has to be mentioned first, because you're putting it above whatever is mentioned next.

"He values his peace of mind over having a higher income." = > He values his peace more than having more money

"They value their appearance over their health." = > They value their appearance more than their health

PDS: I would thanksbe grateful if someone could to explain me the difference between "many times" and "a lot of the time" ¶
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Thank you ¶
God bless you

They basically mean the same thing thing, but saying "many times" is more formal than saying "a lot of the time".

You can use "a lot of times" when you're speaking casually, but I wouldn't use it when writing.

FORMAL = "many times"
CASUAL = "a lot of the time"
CASUAL (Spoken only) = "a lot of times"