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Acky

March 8, 2021

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Everything On My Terms

When I was a mere child, I sometimes pushed my luck a bit too far. Even now I remember the scenes, I really feel ashamed of what I did. Since then, I have always refrained from cheeky behavior. I guess it may have caused me to have a passive personality. Frankly speaking, I always kind of think I am arrogant on my mind. They say an arrogant person like me is not always approved. An arrogant person or a person who pushes luck too far is not respectable in Japan. So I had better pretend to be an introvert person. Modesty seems to be a very important matter in Japan. To push my luck too far is backfiring, and people don't want to pull any punches on me. In terms of me, something is not sitting right. I want everything on my own terms.

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Everything On My Terms

When I was a mere child, I sometimes pushed my luck a bit too far.

Even now I remember the scenes,. I really feel ashamed of what I did.

Since then, I have always refrained from cheeky behavior.

"I have" is often said/written as "I've".

I guess it may have caused me to have a passive personality.

Frankly speaking, I always kind of think I am arrogant oin my mind.

"I am" is often said/written as "I'm".

They say an arrogant person like me is not always approveciated.

"Is not" is often said/written as "isn't".

An arrogant person or a person who pushes luck too far is not respectable in Japan.

"Is not" is often said/written as "isn't".

So I had bettermust pretend to be an introverted person.

Modesty seems to be a very important matter in Japan.

To push my luck too far is backfiring, and people don't want to pull any punches on me.

In terms of me, something is not sitting right.

"Is not" is often said/written as "isn't".

I want everything on my own terms.

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Everything On My Terms


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When I was a mere child, I sometimes pushed my luck a bit too far.


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Even now I remember the scenes, I really feel ashamed of what I did.


Even now I remember the scenes,. I really feel ashamed of what I did.

Since then, I have always refrained from cheeky behavior.


Since then, I have always refrained from cheeky behavior.

"I have" is often said/written as "I've".

I guess it may have caused me to have a passive personality.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Frankly speaking, I always kind of think I am arrogant on my mind.


Frankly speaking, I always kind of think I am arrogant oin my mind.

"I am" is often said/written as "I'm".

They say an arrogant person like me is not always approved.


They say an arrogant person like me is not always approveciated.

"Is not" is often said/written as "isn't".

An arrogant person or a person who pushes luck too far is not respectable in Japan.


An arrogant person or a person who pushes luck too far is not respectable in Japan.

"Is not" is often said/written as "isn't".

So I had better pretend to be an introvert person.


So I had bettermust pretend to be an introverted person.

Modesty seems to be a very important matter in Japan.


Modesty seems to be a very important matter in Japan.

To push my luck too far is backfiring, and people don't want to pull any punches on me.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

In terms of me, something is not sitting right.


In terms of me, something is not sitting right.

"Is not" is often said/written as "isn't".

I want everything on my own terms.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

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