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LeahLeah

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Even though I'm still learning English… 😑

Even though I'm still learning English…,
I want to try to study Spanish too.
However I'm struggling to create English sentences and I can’t also speak English.

But!!!!! I’ll do my best.

So I downloaded an app and gave it a shot.
This app starts with simple sentences, not words like "morning" or "water", so I’m not sure which word is which part of speech unless I check.

First of all, I’m going to memorize there phrases and I’ll keep studying it little by little.

I’ve been told that if you get stuck with your English studies, you should try learning another language.
I don’t remember who told me. lol


英語はまだ勉強中ですが…スペイン語も勉強してみたいです。
しかし、英語の文章を作るのに苦労しており、英語も話せない状態です。
でも!!!! 頑張ります。

なので、アプリをダウンロードして、やってみた。
このアプリは「朝」や「水」といった単語ではなく、簡単な文章から始まるので、確認しないとどの単語がどの品詞なのかわかりません。

とりあえず、フレーズを覚えて、少しずつ勉強を続けてみようと思います。

英語の勉強に行き詰まったら、他の言語を学んだらいいよって言われた事があります。
誰が私に言ったのか覚えていません。(笑)

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Even though I'm still learning English, I want to study Spanish too.

I want to try to study Spanish too.

It would be better to make this one sentence.

However, I'm struggling to create English sentences and I can’t alsoalso can't speak English.

But!!!!!

But I’ll do my best.

This app starts with simple sentences, not words like "morning" or "water"," so I’m not sure which word is which part of speech unless I check.

First of all, I’m going to memorize there phrases and I’ll keep studying it little by little.

Feedback

I understand! It's still hard for me to write Japanese without a lot of mistakes, and speaking Japanese is very hard for me. But I will work hard and you can, too! Good luck to both of us!

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LeahLeah

today

11

Thank you so much 😊
Let's both continue to do our best!

Even though I'm still learning English… 😑

Even though I'm still learning English…,

I want to try to study Spanish too.

However I'm struggling to create English sentences and I can’t also speak English.

But!!!!!

I’ll do my best.

So I downloaded an app and gave it a shot.

This app starts with simple sentences, not words like "morning" or "water", so I’m not sure which word is which part of speech unless I check.

First of all, I’m going to memorize theire phrases and I’ll keep studying it little by little.

I’ve been told that if you get stuck with your English studies, you should try learning another language.

I don’t remember who told me. lol

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LeahLeah

today

11

Thank you so much 😊

Even though I'm still learning English… 😑

Even though I'm still learning English,

An ellipsis is generally only used at the end of a sentence. It can sometimes be used in the middle for the effect of making it look like you're pausing, but it is never used with another piece of punctuation.

I want to try to study Spanish too.

However I'm struggling to create English sentences and also I can’t also speak English.

The position of "also" here is a little hard to explain but if you say you "can't also do something" then it gives the impression that you can't do that something at the same time as something else.
For example: "If I'm running, I can't also sing." - this tells the reader that the writer cannot both sing and run at the same time. They might be able to sing if they're not running, but they can't do both together.

But!!!!!

This isn't strictly grammatical but it does feel natural for a more casual piece of writing so I won't write any correction

I’ll do my best.

This is grammatical, but in English this feels like the sort of thing you'd say at the end, rather than in the middle of your writing.

So I downloaded an app and gave it a shot.

This app starts with simple sentences, not words like "morning" or "water", so I’m not sure which word is which part of speech unless I check.

First of all, I’m going to memorize there phrases and I’ll keep studying it little by little.

It's possible you wanted to say "their" instead of "there". These are commonly mixed up. I'd say here "the" feels the most natural, however. You've referred to the phrases in the previous sentence, so it's clear which ones you mean.

I’ve been told that if you get stuck with your English studies, you should try learning another language.

I don’t remember who told me. lol

Feedback

Good luck!

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LeahLeah

today

11

Thank you for correcting me.
It's difficult to express things in English.
I’ll keep doing my best 💪

Even though I'm still learning English,

'...' and ',' are both fine there, they both signal a pause in speech (the nuance is that ... is a longer kind of pause)---the only thing to avoid is having both of them there at the same time.

I want to try to study Spanish too.

However, I'm struggling to not only create English sentences and I can’but also speak English.

"not only..." helps when you're introducing more than one negative thing at the same time, the "not only" signals to the listener there's something else to hear from you.

But!!!!!

I’ll do my best.

So I downloaded an app and gave it a shot.

This app starts with simple sentences, not words like "morning" or "water", so I’m not sure which word is which part of speech unless I check.

First of all, I’m going to memorize theire phrases and I’ll keep studying ithem little by little.

I’ve been told that if you get stuck with your English studies, you should try learning another language.

I don’t remember who told me. lol

Feedback

good work! spanish could be a refreshing change of pace.

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LeahLeah

today

11

Thank you for correcting me.
Studying spanish could be a change of pace or in my case, stressful.😭
I’ll keep doing my best.

Even though I'm still learning English… 😑


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Even though I'm still learning English…,


Even though I'm still learning English,

'...' and ',' are both fine there, they both signal a pause in speech (the nuance is that ... is a longer kind of pause)---the only thing to avoid is having both of them there at the same time.

Even though I'm still learning English,

An ellipsis is generally only used at the end of a sentence. It can sometimes be used in the middle for the effect of making it look like you're pausing, but it is never used with another piece of punctuation.

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Even though I'm still learning English, I want to study Spanish too.

I want to try to study Spanish too.


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I want to try to study Spanish too.

It would be better to make this one sentence.

But!!!!!


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But!!!!!

This isn't strictly grammatical but it does feel natural for a more casual piece of writing so I won't write any correction

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But!!!!!

However I'm struggling to create English sentences and I can’t also speak English.


However, I'm struggling to not only create English sentences and I can’but also speak English.

"not only..." helps when you're introducing more than one negative thing at the same time, the "not only" signals to the listener there's something else to hear from you.

However I'm struggling to create English sentences and also I can’t also speak English.

The position of "also" here is a little hard to explain but if you say you "can't also do something" then it gives the impression that you can't do that something at the same time as something else. For example: "If I'm running, I can't also sing." - this tells the reader that the writer cannot both sing and run at the same time. They might be able to sing if they're not running, but they can't do both together.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

However, I'm struggling to create English sentences and I can’t alsoalso can't speak English.

I’ll do my best.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I’ll do my best.

This is grammatical, but in English this feels like the sort of thing you'd say at the end, rather than in the middle of your writing.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I’ll do my best.

So I downloaded an app and gave it a shot.


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This app starts with simple sentences, not words like "morning" or "water", so I’m not sure which word is which part of speech unless I check.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

This app starts with simple sentences, not words like "morning" or "water"," so I’m not sure which word is which part of speech unless I check.

First of all, I’m going to memorize there phrases and I’ll keep studying it little by little.


First of all, I’m going to memorize theire phrases and I’ll keep studying ithem little by little.

First of all, I’m going to memorize there phrases and I’ll keep studying it little by little.

It's possible you wanted to say "their" instead of "there". These are commonly mixed up. I'd say here "the" feels the most natural, however. You've referred to the phrases in the previous sentence, so it's clear which ones you mean.

First of all, I’m going to memorize theire phrases and I’ll keep studying it little by little.

First of all, I’m going to memorize there phrases and I’ll keep studying it little by little.

I’ve been told that if you get stuck with your English studies, you should try learning another language.


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I don’t remember who told me. lol


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