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carolinafuentealba

Dec. 2, 2020

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The big changing

I had been living a simple and planned life everytime, had two children, had a boyfriend, a house, a work, little problems, but in one moment everything had changed I need to moved at other country.
I was thinkin, planning and taking the control When Covid came.
The big changing didin't be to move a other country, It was to understand that I don't have the total control of my life.
Now I study english everyday,make exercise on my livingroom, work from home and I see the sun from my window and I wait, wait for my fly.

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carolinafuentealba

Dec. 2, 2020

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The big changing


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I had been living a simple and planned life everytime, had two children, had a boyfriend, a house, a work, little problems, but in one moment everything had changed I need to moved at other country.


I had been living a simple and planned life everytime,. I had two children, had a boyfriend, a house, a work, littlejob, and few problems, but in one moment everything chad changenged and I needed to moved at to another country. I had been living a simple and planned life. I had two children, a boyfriend, a house, a job, and few problems, but in one moment everything changed and I needed to move to another country.

I was thinkin, planning and taking the control When Covid came.


I was thinking, planning and taking the control Wwhen Covid came. I was thinking, planning and taking control when Covid came.

The big changing didin't be to move a other country, It was to understand that I don't have the total control of my life.


The big changing didin't be toe wasn't the move a to another country, Iit was tohe understanding that I don't have the total control ofver my life. The big change wasn't the move to another country, it was the understanding that I don't have total control over my life.

I think this is what you're trying to say here. "control over" is the phrase

Now I study english everyday,make exercise on my livingroom, work from home and I see the sun from my window and I wait, wait for my fly.


Now I study eEnglish every day,make exercise oin my living room, and work from home and. I see the sun from my window and I wait, wait for myuntil I can fly. Now I study English every day, exercise in my living room, and work from home. I see the sun from my window and I wait, wait until I can fly.

English is a proper noun so the first letter is capitalized. Everyday vs every day: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/everyday-every-day/ I'm not sure what you wanted to say with "wait for my fly" but if you explain it a little more I can try to help think of another way to say it.

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