May 24, 2025
I saw a video about this topic on TED talk. The idea certainly sounds like something too unrealistic to believe and you would think it should not be that easy to achieve, but the presenter, Ray Kurzweil, showed some convincing graphs for those skeptics. The fact that artificial intelligence had been evolving at an accerated pace for decades, especially in recent years.
I work in health care industry, and they have been pushing out messages like “We will never give up achieving better well-being for every people all over the world”, or “We will never disappoint patients who are waining for the solutions”.
But in reality, I was not personally ready to answer the desire to live forever, as something an individual can ever request. I am not sure healthcare industry itself has some clear view on this.
Does that make sense if someone say m, “it is a natural and fundamental for a human being to wish he/she could live forever. You can see that in those historical examples”? It might be controversial in the further future generally, but for those a few people who have super political power or an extra-huge financial advantages, it would not take so long to face this options.
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これに関する動画を、TEDで観た。この概念を知らなかったので、新鮮であった。確かに、一見すると突拍子もない話に聞こえるし、そんなに簡単なはずがないと思うだろうが、まさにそこに応えるようにRay Kurzweilは幾つかのグラフを提示して説明した。AIは数十年にわたり加速度的な進歩を続けていて、この数年は、ことに顕著だ。
私はヘルスケア業界に勤めていて、彼らはよく「より良いWell-being達成を決して諦めない」とか「新規治療を待っている患者さんを決して失望させません」といったメッセージを発信している。
しかし実際のところ個人的には、人間が求め得る欲望の一つとしての、「永遠に生きたい」という願いに応える準備はまだできていない。ヘルスケア業界そのものが、その点に対してなんらかの明確な見解を持っているのかどうかも知らない。
もしも誰かが、「永遠の命というのは、人間の自然で根源的な願望ですよね?歴史上にもたくさん例があるではないですか」と言ったらそれに納得できるだろうか?これは一般的にはずっと先の未来に議論を呼ぶ問題となるだろうが、強大な政治的権力や有り余る富を持つ少数の人々にとっては、この選択に直面するまで、そう長くはかからないだろう。
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Great job!
I agree that it is a natural thing for humans to want to live forever. There are times where I think to myself, "It'd be amazing to live forever so that I can see future technological marvels." Throughout history, people have sought for elixirs or a fountain of eternal youth. Immortality is essentially an impossible request to grant and has its downsides as well.
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Good work. A topic that raises many questions.
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