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claudeberguison

March 30, 2025

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está correto isso

I'm Berg Silva. I work in IT. Essentially, IT deals with computers. now I've been married for 13 years and I'm studying to be a teacher in the college, that's all about me , speaking about my family, I come from a big family, actually, a very big family, I think that speak a lot.I'm Berg Silva. I work in IT. Essentially, IT deals with computers. now I've been married for 13 years and I'm studying to be a teacher in the college, that's all about me , speaking about my family, I come from a big family, actually, a very big family, I think that speak a lot.

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I'm Berg Silva.

I work in IT.

Essentially, IT deals with computers.

now I've been married for 13 years and I'm studying to be a teacher . I think the college, tat speak a lot. That's all about me , s. Speaking about my family, I come from a big family, a. Actually, a very big family, I think that speak a lot.I'm Berg Silva.

-You could say "I'm taking college courses to be a teacher" if you want to emphasize that you are studying at the college/university level.
-You don't actually need the sentence "That's all about me" even though there's nothing technically wrong with it.
-It flows a little bit better to move the sentence about your personality (speaking a lot) to the section where you are giving other information about yourself (your marriage and career plans).
-Another option for even better flow would be to switch your marriage information with your personality to go right before your sentence about family, since that is a nice transition between the two topics ("I think that I speak a lot and I'm studying to be a teacher. I've been married for 13 years. Speaking about my family...")

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This is a very nice introduction, great start!

nNow, I've been married for 13 years and I'm studying to be a teacher in the college, teacher. That's all about me , s. Speaking about my family, I come from a big family, actually, a very big family, actually. I think that speak a lot.I'm Berg Silva.

It would be better to say "I am studying to be a professor"

I work in IT.

I think you accidentally repeated yourself.

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Great job! It's a good a thing that you speak a lot. Maybe it will help you with your language learning.

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claudeberguison

March 30, 2025

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thanks a million dude.

está correto isso


I'm Berg Silva.


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I work in IT.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Essentially, IT deals with computers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

now I've been married for 13 years and I'm studying to be a teacher in the college, that's all about me , speaking about my family, I come from a big family, actually, a very big family, I think that speak a lot.I'm Berg Silva.


nNow, I've been married for 13 years and I'm studying to be a teacher in the college, teacher. That's all about me , s. Speaking about my family, I come from a big family, actually, a very big family, actually. I think that speak a lot.I'm Berg Silva.

It would be better to say "I am studying to be a professor"

now I've been married for 13 years and I'm studying to be a teacher . I think the college, tat speak a lot. That's all about me , s. Speaking about my family, I come from a big family, a. Actually, a very big family, I think that speak a lot.I'm Berg Silva.

-You could say "I'm taking college courses to be a teacher" if you want to emphasize that you are studying at the college/university level. -You don't actually need the sentence "That's all about me" even though there's nothing technically wrong with it. -It flows a little bit better to move the sentence about your personality (speaking a lot) to the section where you are giving other information about yourself (your marriage and career plans). -Another option for even better flow would be to switch your marriage information with your personality to go right before your sentence about family, since that is a nice transition between the two topics ("I think that I speak a lot and I'm studying to be a teacher. I've been married for 13 years. Speaking about my family...")

I work in IT.


I work in IT.

I think you accidentally repeated yourself.

Essentially, IT deals with computers.


now I've been married for 13 years and I'm studying to be a teacher in the college, that's all about me , speaking about my family, I come from a big family, actually, a very big family, I think that speak a lot.


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