Oct. 17, 2022
Essay introduction
Essay topic: Not everyone will succeed in life on their first try. However, they should not give up.
In real life, most people don't meet their or society's expectations. In my opinion, most people think they cannot do anything after they see successful people. So many people won't even try the slightest bit, but some resilient people will try until they succeed. Then how do we succeed in life?
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Essay introduction
Essay topic: Not everyone will succeed in life on their first try.
However, they should not give up.
In real life, most people don't meet their or society's, or even their own, expectations.
In my opinion, most people think they cannot do anything afterfeel powerless when they see successful people.
So many people won't even try the slightest bit, but some resilient people will try until they succeed.
Then how do weHow can each of us be the sort of resilient person who will succeed in life?
Your original was correct, but for an essay this is more natural, since it follows the idea you just mentioned.
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Essay introduction This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Essay topic: Not everyone will succeed in life on their first try. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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However, they should not give up. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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In real life, most people don't meet their or society's expectations. In real life, most people don't meet |
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In my opinion, most people think they cannot do anything after they see successful people. In my opinion, most people |
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So many people won't even try the slightest bit, but some resilient people will try until they succeed. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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Then how do we succeed in life?
Your original was correct, but for an essay this is more natural, since it follows the idea you just mentioned. |
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