March 26, 2025
It's my hw I am writing a letter responding to Harlan Coben's argument.
To the editor, in the undercover parent, the novelist Harlan Coben writes that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea. Coben provides us two examples to justify her argument but I would disagree with her since her examples are refutable and too extreme. First, Coben writes about a young boy who was conversing with a pedophile using smartphone and a girl who committed suicide due to cyberbullying. The two cases are not only rare but also majority of children are neither cyberbullied nor conversing pedophile. Moreover, I would say that smartphone is not a cause of problems that the boy and the girl were suffering. There are others ways to chat with pedophile without smartphone and if the girl were born when there were no smartphones, she would get bullied in real world instead of cyber world. Smartphone is just a means and spyware will not solve the problem completely since there are other ways to do misbehavior. If spyware can protect children completely from dangers, I would install it but it cannot protect our children and infringes children’s privacy. Therefore, I go against Coben’s idea that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea.
To the editor, in the undercover parent, the novelist Harlan Coben writes that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea.
Coben provides us two examples to justify heris argument but I would disagree with herim since heris examples are both refutable and too extreme.
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Moreover, I would say that smartphone itself is not a root cause of problems that the boy and the girl were sufferingthe issues.
There are others ways to chat with a pedophile without a smartphone and if the girl were borhad been when there were no smartphones, she would gethave been bullied in the real world instead of the cyber world.
Even without smartphones, predators could contact children through other means, and bullying would simply shift from digital to physical spaces.( Just a suggestion sentence)
Smartphone is just a means and spyware will not solve the problem completely since there are other ways to do misbehaviore.
If spyware can protect children completely from dangers, I would install it but it cannot protect our children and infringes on children’s privacy.
Therefore, I go againstdisagree with Coben’s idea that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea.
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It's my hw I am writing a letter responding to Harlan Coben's argument. |
To the editor, in the undercover parent, the novelist Harlan Coben writes that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea. To the editor, in the undercover parent, the novelist Harlan Coben writes that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea. |
Coben provides us two examples to justify her argument but I would disagree with her since her examples are refutable and too extreme. Coben provides us two examples to justify h Coben is male |
First, Coben writes about a young boy who was conversing with a pedophile using smartphone and a girl who committed suicide due to cyberbullying. First, Coben |
The two cases are not only rare but also majority of children are neither cyberbullied nor conversing pedophile. The two cases are not only rare but also misleading- the majority of children |
Moreover, I would say that smartphone is not a cause of problems that the boy and the girl were suffering. Moreover, I would say that smartphone itself is not a root cause of |
There are others ways to chat with pedophile without smartphone and if the girl were born when there were no smartphones, she would get bullied in real world instead of cyber world. There are other Even without smartphones, predators could contact children through other means, and bullying would simply shift from digital to physical spaces.( Just a suggestion sentence) |
Smartphone is just a means and spyware will not solve the problem completely since there are other ways to do misbehavior. Smartphone is just a means and spyware will not solve the problem completely since there are other ways to |
If spyware can protect children completely from dangers, I would install it but it cannot protect our children and infringes children’s privacy. If spyware can protect children completely from dangers, I would install it but it cannot protect our children and infringes on children’s privacy. |
Therefore, I go against Coben’s idea that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea. Therefore, I |
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