ESSAY FORssay for CAE (C1)

The purpose of this essay is to discuss about which is the best options for the students after they leave school.

It is usually said that there are two main options to consider, and surely these are the most common: continue to study or finding a job.

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Chooseing between these is a crucial decision, because it determines their future and students needs to be seriously aware of it.

verb agreement

If their family agrees to financially support them, they could evaluate the opportunity tof going to university.

For them, it means spending 4four years or more at Ua university, and spending their time to learning, researching and studying.

It is undeniable that increasingly numbers of people attending university, and so this makes the context also very competitive one also.

On the other hand, if there is noty do not have thei financial support ofrom their families, they should probably consider the other option: finding a job, entering in the labour market and getting their financial independenciese and freedonm.

This is a better option also for those who are not really interestinged in studying.

Since this choisce is related to both external and personal factors, and these are which differents from peoplerson to peoplerson, it is not possibile to decide which is the best option for everyone.

Taking everything into consideration, it is generally agreed that there is not one answer for all, bu and that it must be only an individual's decision.

What options are open to students after they leaveing school?

"after they leave" is not incorrect but it's better to use the gerund

The purpose of this essay is to discuss about which is the best options for the students after they leave school.graduation

You don't use "about" with "discuss"

It is usually said that there are two main options to consider, and surely these are the most common: continueing to study or finding a job.

Chooseing between these is a crucial decision, because it determines their future and students needs to be seriously aware of it.

If their family agrees to financially support them, they could evaluate the opportunity to go to university.

For them, it means spending 4 years or more at University, and uspending theiris time to learn, research and study.

Try to avoid repeating the same word :)

It is undeniable that increasingly numbers of people attending university, and this make the context alsore applying for university, which can make this process very competitive one.

On the other hand, if there is not theiy don't have financial support ofrom their familiesy, they should probably consider the other option: finding a job, entering in the labour market, finding a job and gettaining their financial independenciese and freedonm.

Try to place the different steps in chronological order for ease of reading

This is a better option also for who are not really interesting in studyingpursuing advanced degrees.

This is a way to avoid repeating "study"

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Taking everything into consideration, it is generally agreed that there is not one answer for all, but it must be onlycorrect answer, but rather an individual decision.

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If their family agrees to financially support them, they could evaluate the opportunity to go to university.

For them, it means spending 4 years or more at Ua university, andwhich implies spending their time to learning, researching and studying.

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On the other hand, if there is not thei financial support ofrom their families, they should probably consider the other option: finding a job, which means entering in the labour market and gettearning their financial independenciese and freedonm.

This is a better option also forfor those who are not really interesting in studying.

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