ESSAY CASE 1

WaysHow adults can influence how younger people behave

From the point of view of parents and teachers, (providing an appropriate education for young people it is ) (is) (often a strong challenge).

Don't use "it" ... the entire sentence is the subject

Since they are not really aware of the consequences of their action or choises, orienting and help them to take their responsibility, firsT step to became adults tomorrow.

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..(guiding them and helping them to take responsibility) is the first step to becoming adults in the future

Talking about the way adults can influence younger people behave, giving an examble is a very relevant one because they try to behave adults they admire.

example
One way adults influence young people is by example. This is relevant because young people try to follow the behavior of adults they admire.

Sometimes it should works, but as long as teens refuse rules, they also could refuse advices especially if the come from parents or teachers.

sometimes it works, but if teens refuse to obey rules, they also can refuse to take advice, especially if it comes from parents and teachers.

As far as I amy concerned, no one would dispute the fact that giving advice - when there is a strong and trustlying relationship - can be a good solution but it could be also seen by teens as quiteteens can also see it as invasive.

In contrast, providing an example of right behaviour does not require to others to change anything.

For this reason, providing an example of righcorrect behaviour, whithout the intentions of apparently requires to change anythingdemanding the teen follow the example, is considered more effective in athe long term period.

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As far as I amy concerned, no one would dispute the fact that giving advice - when there is a strong and trustlying relationship - can be a good solution, but it could be also seen by teens as quite invasive.

In contrast, providing an example of the right behaviour does not require to others to change anything.

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