March 20, 2022
Essay "about university life". (C1 CAE Writing)
Write paragraphs to answer the question: about university life
Some university students move away and live on their own while they are attending school, but others live at home with their family while they are students.
Which do you think is a better choice? Give reasons to explain your answer.
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(Note: Does everything sounds natural? How would you improve it?)
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The huge number of universities nowadays make it possible to study close enough to your family as to be able to choose between: independece but responsibilities or, depend on your parents completely but having enough time to get one of the highest scores in your class.
As it can be seen, both options have advantages and disadvantages that rely on your preferences in this intense moment of your life. If you decide to moving on to another city, it implies looking for an affortable house for rent, often getting started on cooking, ironing,..., as well as, to find a part-time job. These responsibilities are extremely useful for youths to become adults, due to students will have to put up with so many obligations, but little time to be focused in studies (even less to spare).
Neverthelsess, creating a good and realistic daily routime will make you capable of coming though this hardly way. For all explained above, in my opinion that is the best and most useful option for taking advantage of university's life.
On the other hand, there are some students that prefer living at the expense of their parents. In this sense, they do not notice as many changes as they experienced at secondary school, apart from,
a higher level in subjects and better parties, which not contribute so much to become a grown-up person. It is also true that you would be in better circumstances to compete against your classmates and be awarded with so many scholarships. However, this alternative is not usually chosen by students in order to get a better academic record.
In conclusion, students should deal with duties beyond their academic responsibilities in order to achieve a more complete experience in this important stage.
Essay "about "university life". (C1 CAE Writing)
Write paragraphs to answer the question: about university life
Some university students move away and live on their own while they are attending school, but others live at home with their family while they are students.
Which do you think is a better choice?
Give reasons to explain your answer.
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(Note: Does everything sounds natural? How would you improve it? )
(ANSWER)
The huge number of universities nowadays make it possible for students to study close enough to youtheir family, as to bhey are able to choose between: independence butwhich comes with responsibilities, or, full depend on your parents completelyence on their parents but having enough time to get one of the highest scores in youtheir class.
As it can be seen, both options have advantages and disadvantages that rely on yourwhich depend on the students' preferences in this intense moment of youtheir life.
If you decide to moving one to another city, it implieentails looking for an affortdable house forto rent, and often gettingthe need to get started on cooking, ironing,.. etc., as well as, to finding a part-time job.
These responsibilities are extremely useful for youths to become adults, due to the fact that students will have to put up with so many obligations, but. However, they will have little time to be focused in on their studies (even less to spare).
Neverthelsess, creating a good and realistic daily routimne will make you capable of coming though this chardly wayllenge.
For all the reasons explained above, in my opinion, that is the best and most useful option forchoice to takinge advantage of university's life.
On the other hand, there are some students thatwho prefer living at the expense of their parents.
In this sense, they do not notice as many changes as they experienced atin secondary schools, apart from,
a higher level in subjects and better parties, which do not contribute aso much for them to become a grown-upmature person.
It is also true that you would be in better circumstances to compete against your classmates and be awarded with so many scholarships.
However, this alternative is not usually not chosen by students in order to get a better academic record.
In conclusion, students should deal with their duties beyond their academic responsibilities in order to achieve a more complete experience in this important stage.
March 26, 2022
Thank you so much Cecilia for all your corrections. Let me know if you need help with Spanish.
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The huge number of universities nowadays make it possible to study close enough to your family as to be able to choose between: independece but responsibilities or, depend on your parents completely but having enough time to get one of the highest scores in your class. The huge number of universities nowadays make it possible for students to study close enough to |
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As it can be seen, both options have advantages and disadvantages that rely on your preferences in this intense moment of your life. As it can be seen, both options have advantages and disadvantages |
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If you decide to moving on to another city, it implies looking for an affortable house for rent, often getting started on cooking, ironing,..., as well as, to find a part-time job. If you decide to mov |
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These responsibilities are extremely useful for youths to become adults, due to students will have to put up with so many obligations, but little time to be focused in studies (even less to spare). These responsibilities are extremely useful for youths to become adults, due to the fact that students will have to put up with so many obligations |
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Neverthelsess, creating a good and realistic daily routime will make you capable of coming though this hardly way. Neverthel |
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For all explained above, in my opinion that is the best and most useful option for taking advantage of university's life. For all the reasons explained above, in my opinion, that is the best and most useful |
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On the other hand, there are some students that prefer living at the expense of their parents. On the other hand, there are some students |
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In this sense, they do not notice as many changes as they experienced at secondary school, apart from, In this sense, they do not notice as many changes as they experienced |
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a higher level in subjects and better parties, which not contribute so much to become a grown-up person. a higher level in subjects and better parties, which do not contribute as |
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It is also true that you would be in better circumstances to compete against your classmates and be awarded with so many scholarships. It is also true that you would be in better circumstances to compete against your classmates and be awarded with |
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However, this alternative is not usually chosen by students in order to get a better academic record. However, this alternative is |
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In conclusion, students should deal with duties beyond their academic responsibilities in order to achieve a more complete experience in this important stage. In conclusion, students should deal with their duties beyond their academic responsibilities in order to achieve a more complete experience in this important stage. |
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