March 26, 2022
Write paragraphs to answer the question: about life goals
For some people, making a lot of money is an important goal. Others think that their free time is more important than wealth.
Which is more important to you? Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.
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Life goals has been a topic issue throughout the centuries, even the millennia, in philosophy, owing to everyone has ever made to himself this question before along life. Obviously, there is not just one target to achieve, such as a professional vocation, and these will depend on your preferences and what existence means to you.
In my humble opinion, there is nowhere near anything so important as spending time with your closest environment, this is family, best friends and, if so a partner. Therefore, other aims, like earning a lot of money in a wealthy job position or living for a profession, are not among my priorities, especially due to the fact that it is impossible to have a full-time dedication in a job, both you work for economic reasons or passion
There is an endless supply of examples of job often considered as vocations: scientists, musicians, social workers, ... Most them suppose a huge load of work and little time to spare, for that reason, you are just able to properly socialise at weekends. It is true that these sorts of job fascinates to those who work on it and let you live unforgettable moments, nevertheless, it is not often said how much hard training is behind, or how many people have bet so many years to fall short of their expectations when they finally get the job of their dreams.
In regard to working for making a lot of money, it is just an ego matter. For example, business people as brokers or traders are usually very competitive and lack of empathy, so their only live's satisfaction in to be ahead of every one, rather than being rich.
All in all, there is nothing so important for me as enjoying my free time with my closest relatives and my friends, in spite of discussions and problems usually related to it.
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Essay: "About life goals"
For some people, making a lot of money is an important goal.
Others think that their free time is more important than wealth.
Which is more important to you?
Explain, giving specific reasons for your choice.
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(How could I improve it? Does everything sound natural? )
(ANSWER)
Life goals hasve been a topic issue throughout the centuries, even the millennia, in philosophy, owing to everyone has ever made to himself this question before along lifn important topic for philosophers throughout the centuries and millennia. (Sorry, I don't understand the rest of the sentence.)
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In my humble opinion, there is nowhere near anything aso important as spending time with your closest environment, this is familythe people closest to you, such as your family members, best friends, and, if so a part partner (if you have oner).
"Environment" sounds weird if used for people.
Therefore, other aimlife goals, like earning a lot of money in a wealthy job position or living for a profession, are not among my priorities, especially due to the fact that itthrough a successful career, are not among my personal priorities. (I have trouble understanding the rest, but here are some ideas:) "I think ist impossible to have a full-time dedication in a job, both you work for economic reasons ors hard to combine having a career and being there for your family." or "Usually the jobs that pay high salaries are not the kind of jobs one chooses based on passion."
There is an endless supply of examples of job oftenare many jobs that can be considered as vocations: scientists, musicians, social workers, ...
A vocation is a very individual matter, so I think it is wrong to say some jobs are a vocation and others are not. What do you think?
Most of them suppose a huge load of work and little time to spare, fdemand a high workload and leave little free time. For that reason, you are justwill only be able to properly socialise atduring weekends.
It is true that these sorts of jobs fascinates to those who work on it and let you livchose them and let them experience unforgettable moments,; nevertheless, it i's not often saidtalked about how much hard training is behind,work goes into them or how many people have bet sospent many years only for the reality to fall short of their expectations when they finally get the job of their dreams.
I would highly advise to write shorter, simpler sentences. They will make more sense to the reader. And English is a language where people value a simpler writing style anyways.
InWith regards to working for making a lot of money, it is just an ego matter(in my opinion) it's simply a matter of ego.
Not sure if that's your goal, but you are stating a lot of things as if they were facts, even when they are only opinions.
For example, business people as brokers or traders, like stock brokers, are usually very competitive and lack of empathy, so their only live's. They feel satisfaction in to befrom being ahead of every one, else rather than from being rich.
Wow, harsh opinion.
All in allIn the end, there is nothing aso important forto me as enjoying my free time with my closest relatives and my friends, in spite of discussions and problems usually related to it.
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Life goals has been a topic issue throughout the centuries, even the millennia, in philosophy, owing to everyone has ever made to himself this question before along life. Life goals ha |
Obviously, there is not just one target to achieve, such as a professional vocation, and these will depend on your preferences and what existence means to you. Obviously |
In my humble opinion, there is nowhere near anything so important as spending time with your closest environment, this is family, best friends and, if so a partner. In my humble opinion "Environment" sounds weird if used for people. |
Therefore, other aims, like earning a lot of money in a wealthy job position or living for a profession, are not among my priorities, especially due to the fact that it is impossible to have a full-time dedication in a job, both you work for economic reasons or passion Therefore |
There is an endless supply of examples of job often considered as vocations: scientists, musicians, social workers, ... There A vocation is a very individual matter, so I think it is wrong to say some jobs are a vocation and others are not. What do you think? |
Most them suppose a huge load of work and little time to spare, for that reason, you are just able to properly socialise at weekends. Most of them |
It is true that these sorts of job fascinates to those who work on it and let you live unforgettable moments, nevertheless, it is not often said how much hard training is behind, or how many people have bet so many years to fall short of their expectations when they finally get the job of their dreams. It is true that these sorts of jobs fascinate I would highly advise to write shorter, simpler sentences. They will make more sense to the reader. And English is a language where people value a simpler writing style anyways. |
In regard to working for making a lot of money, it is just an ego matter.
Not sure if that's your goal, but you are stating a lot of things as if they were facts, even when they are only opinions. |
For example, business people as brokers or traders are usually very competitive and lack of empathy, so their only live's satisfaction in to be ahead of every one, rather than being rich. For example, business people Wow, harsh opinion. |
All in all, there is nothing so important for me as enjoying my free time with my closest relatives and my friends, in spite of discussions and problems usually related to it.
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