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Big City or Small Town: Which is Better?
This is a very interesting question, and people have different opinions about it. Personally, I think living in a big city is better, especially for young people who want to study, work, and grow themselves.
In a big city, there are better schools, universities, and job opportunities. It is also easier to grow professionally and socially. For example, I am studying in a big city, and I have already made friends from other countries and taken part in international events. It would be hard to find these experiences in a small town.
Moreover, cities have better healthcare, public transport, and entertainment. You can enjoy many activities like art, sports, or culture. There are also more modern services like fast internet, which makes life easier.
However, I know small towns have their own advantages. They are usually quieter, cleaner, and less stressful. People can enjoy a peaceful life there. If someone prefers a slow lifestyle, a small town can be better.
In conclusion, the best place depends on a person’s goals and personality. But for me, living in a big city is more exciting and gives more opportunities than a small town.

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Essay

Big City or Small Town: Which is Better?

This is a very interesting question, and people have different opinions about it.

Personally, I think living in a big city is better, especially for young people who want to study, work, and grow themselves.

In a big city, there are better schools, universities, and job opportunities.

It is also easier to grow professionally and socially.

For example, I am studying in a big city, and I have already made friends from other countries and taken part in international events.

It would be hard to find these experiences in a small town.

Moreover, cities have better healthcare, public transport, and entertainment.

There are also more modern services like fast internet, which makes life easier.

However, I know small towns have their own advantages.

They are usually quieter, cleaner, and less stressful.

People can enjoy a peaceful life there.

If someone prefers a slow lifestyle, a small town can be better.

In conclusion, the best place depends on a person’s goals and personality.

But for me, living in a big city is more exciting and gives more opportunities than a small town.

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The other correction has removed the oxford commas within the lists - personally I prefer to keep those in. The oxford comma is the comma used before the conjunction in a list of three or more items (eg: the final comma in "healthcare, public transport, and entertainment"). Whether or not you use it is a matter of personal preference. I think it is worth keeping as it adds additional clarity.

Personally I prefer living in the city since I can walk to a lot of places instead of having to drive

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Big City or Small Town: Which is Better?

Normally you don’t capitalise every word in the title

This is a very interesting question, and people have different opinions about it.

Personally, I think living in a big city is better, especially for young people who want to study, work, and grow themselves.

In a big city, there are better schools, universities, and job opportunities.

It is also easier to grow professionally and socially.

For example, I am studying in a big city, and I have already made friends with students from other countries and taken part in international events.

It would be hard to find these experiences in a small town.

Moreover, cities have better healthcare, public transport, and entertainment.

You can enjoy many activities like art, sports, or culture.

There are also more modern services like fast internet, which makes life easier.

However, I know small towns have their own advantages.

They are usually quieter, cleaner, and less stressful.

People can enjoy a peaceful life there.

If someone prefers a slowmore leisurely lifestyle, a small town can be better.

In conclusion, the best place depends on a person’s goals and personality.

But for me, living in a big city is more exciting and gives more opportunities than a small town.

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Well written!

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Big City or Small Town: Which is Better?


Big City or Small Town: Which is Better?

Normally you don’t capitalise every word in the title

Big City or Small Town: Which is Better?

This is a very interesting question, and people have different opinions about it.


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This is a very interesting question, and people have different opinions about it.

Personally, I think living in a big city is better, especially for young people who want to study, work, and grow themselves.


Personally, I think living in a big city is better, especially for young people who want to study, work, and grow themselves.

Personally, I think living in a big city is better, especially for young people who want to study, work, and grow themselves.

In a big city, there are better schools, universities, and job opportunities.


In a big city, there are better schools, universities, and job opportunities.

In a big city, there are better schools, universities, and job opportunities.

It is also easier to grow professionally and socially.


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For example, I am studying in a big city, and I have already made friends from other countries and taken part in international events.


For example, I am studying in a big city, and I have already made friends with students from other countries and taken part in international events.

For example, I am studying in a big city, and I have already made friends from other countries and taken part in international events.

It would be hard to find these experiences in a small town.


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Moreover, cities have better healthcare, public transport, and entertainment.


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You can enjoy many activities like art, sports, or culture.


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There are also more modern services like fast internet, which makes life easier.


There are also more modern services like fast internet, which makes life easier.

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However, I know small towns have their own advantages.


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They are usually quieter, cleaner, and less stressful.


They are usually quieter, cleaner, and less stressful.

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People can enjoy a peaceful life there.


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If someone prefers a slow lifestyle, a small town can be better.


If someone prefers a slowmore leisurely lifestyle, a small town can be better.

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In conclusion, the best place depends on a person’s goals and personality.


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But for me, living in a big city is more exciting and gives more opportunities than a small town.


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