Dec. 21, 2021
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The sun was already set, but I could still see the west sky and the clouds in the sky. The sky at that moment looked very special, especially its color. It gave people a different feeling, so I couldn't help but take these photos to want to share with you. Do you think it's special and gives us a dreamy feeling?
The sun was already set, but I could still see the western sky and the clouds in the sky.
I deleted the "in the sky" part because it's already implied that the clouds are in the sky and you've said sky before then. It got repetitive.
The sky at that moment looked very special, especially its color.
It gave people a different feeling, so I couldn't help but take these photos tohat I wanted to share with you.
Do you think it's special and gives us a dreamy feeling?
It could be "Do you think it's special and gives off a dreamy feeling?"
Dec. 21, 2021
Thank you very much. All the corrections are really helpful.
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The sun was already set, but I could still see the west sky and the clouds in the sky. The sun was already set, but I could still see the western sky and the clouds I deleted the "in the sky" part because it's already implied that the clouds are in the sky and you've said sky before then. It got repetitive. |
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The sky at that moment looked very special, especially its color. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It gave people a different feeling, so I couldn't help but take these photos to want to share with you. It gave people a different feeling, so I couldn't help but take these photos t |
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Do you think it's special and gives us a dreamy feeling? Do you think it's special and gives us a dreamy feeling? It could be "Do you think it's special and gives off a dreamy feeling?" |
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