Essay 1

ElmasCapito

Aug. 5, 2025

In order to prepare myself for the TOEFL test, I'll write one essay of any new or trend topic, and the next day I'll communicate about my life, which I think is going to become more monotonous. However, the reading of today is going to be about the telecommunications reforms that have been approved recently. Even though, there's a lot of polemic relentless to the new laws, I will take two arguments from the negative and positive posture.
Firstly, the article I read posits that with the new reform, all phone calls will be charged at a local rate, decreasing costs per call. However, an article from the Universidad Nacional Autonoma de México (UNAM) directly challenges this assertion. Specifically, it argues that the use of phone calls needs a real-time location of each person in the country, that fact increases the mass surveillance by the government, undermining the article's initial claim.
Even though it, the article points out that the telecommunication reform obligates television and audio services to re-transmit the highest programs free of charge. Conversely, the UNAM disputes this viewpoint. It contends that neither television nor internet are enable to submit news as they wish due to the government decides what information and reports are available for the general public. And if they decide is not a proper note for the "national interests", the text will never be seen.
In summary, the UNAM finds out the problems of these "reforms" and goes against these odd laws that are on the limit of security and authoritarianism. I would like to say that Mexican people will see the critical problem that is coming before it is to late.

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Essay 1

In order to prepare myself for the TOEFL test, I'll write one essay of any new or trend topic, and the next day I'll communicate about my life, which I think is going to become more monotonous.

However, the reading of today is going to be about the telecommunications reforms that have been approved recently.

Even though, there's a lot of polemic relentless to the new laws, I will take two arguments from the negative and positive posture.

Firstly, the article I read exposites that with the new reform, all phone calls will be charged at a local rate, decreasing costs per call.

Specifically, it argues that the use of phone calls needs a real-time location of each person in the country, that fact increases the mass surveillance by the government, undermining the article's initial claim.

Even though it, the article points out that the telecommunication reform obligates television and audio services to re-transmit the highest programs free of charge.

Conversely, the UNAM disputes this viewpoint.

It contends that neither television nor internet are enable to submit news as they wish due to the government decides what information and reports are available for the general public.

And if they decide is not a proper note for the "national interests", the text will never be seen.

In summary, the UNAM finds out the problems of these "reforms" and goes against these odd laws that are on the limit of security and authoritarianism.

I would like to say that Mexican people will see the critical problem that is coming before it is to late.

Essay 1