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When I was in elementary school and middle school, why did I study hard? It seemed I had a weak body when I was a kid, and I had to do some farm work. One farm work that strongly impressed me was pulling stone mills. Every time I do that, I always feel dizzy and vomited, and those kinds of feelings are extremely horrible. So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die for not producing enough food to eat. At that time, the only thing I could do to avoid being a farmer was study hard to get a job assigned by the nation. If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have to. I could do a small business and work in a private enterprise for a living, and something like that, but in the early eighties, these kinds of livelihoods were all impossible. There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical and social. But anyway, I am satisfied with my current situation. It's hard to say whether it’s good or not. Maybe it’s just an ordinary life. But this is enough. The plain and light life is a happy life.

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When I was in elementary school and middle school, why did I study hard?

It seemed I had a weak body when I was a kid, and I had to do some farm work.

One thing about farm work that strongdeeply impressed me was pulling stone mills.

Every time I doid that, I always feelt dizzy and vomited, and those kinds of feelings are extremely horrible.

So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die forom not producing enough food to eat.

If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have toit wasn't necessary.

I assume you mean you didn't need to have good grades in school?

I could dorun a small business and, work ion a private enterprise for a living, andor something like that, but in the early eighties, these kinds of livelihoods were all impossible.

There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical and social limitations.

But anyway, I am satisfied with my current situation.

It's hard to say whether it’s good or not.

Maybe it’s just an ordinary life.

But this is enough.

The plain and light life is a happy life.

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Jack

Sept. 28, 2020

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Thank you for your correction, you help me a lot.

When I was a kid, It seemed Ito hadve a weak body when I was a kid, and I had to do some farm work.

One aspect/part of farm work that strongly impressed me was pulling stone mills.

aspect or part both work

Every time I do thaid it, I always feel dizzy and vomited, and those kinds of feelings are extremeit felt incredibly horrible.

More of preference, to me this sounds more natural

So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die forom not producing enough food to eat.

At that time, the only thing I could do to avoid being a farmer was to study hard to get a job assigned by the nation.

If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have to.

I could dorun a small business and work in a private enterprise for a living, and something like that, but. But, in the early eighties, these kinds of livelihoods were all impossible.

There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical, and social.

But anyway, I am satisfied with my current situation.

It's hard to say whether it’s good or not.

Maybe it’s just an ordinary life.

But tThis is enough.

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Jack

Sept. 28, 2020

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谢谢你的修改,谢谢你。

When I was in elementary school and middle school, why did I study hard?

alternatively: When I was in school, why did I study hard?

Every time I doid that, I always feelt dizzy and vomited, and tnauseous. Those kinds of feelings awere extremely horrible.

So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die for notnot be able to producinge enough food and would starve to death.

At that time, the only thing I could do to avoid being a farmer was studying hard to get a job assigned by the nation.

If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have tohe motivation for it.

I could do a small business and work in a private enterprise for a living, andor something like that, but in the early eighties, theseis kinds of livelihoods were allfe was impossible.

There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical and social.

But anyway, I am satisfied with my current situation.

It's hard to say whether it’s good or not.

Maybe it’s just an ordinary life.

But this is enough.

The plain and light life is a happy life.

Jack's avatar
Jack

Sept. 28, 2020

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谢谢你的修改,而且我认为修改得很好!

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When I was in elementary school and middle school, why did I study hard?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

When I was in elementary school and middle school, why did I study hard?

alternatively: When I was in school, why did I study hard?

It seemed I had a weak body when I was a kid, and I had to do some farm work.


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When I was a kid, It seemed Ito hadve a weak body when I was a kid, and I had to do some farm work.

One farm work that strongly impressed me was pulling stone mills.


One aspect/part of farm work that strongly impressed me was pulling stone mills.

aspect or part both work

One thing about farm work that strongdeeply impressed me was pulling stone mills.

Every time I do that, I always feel dizzy and vomited, and those kinds of feelings are extremely horrible.


Every time I doid that, I always feelt dizzy and vomited, and tnauseous. Those kinds of feelings awere extremely horrible.

Every time I do thaid it, I always feel dizzy and vomited, and those kinds of feelings are extremeit felt incredibly horrible.

More of preference, to me this sounds more natural

Every time I doid that, I always feelt dizzy and vomited, and those kinds of feelings are extremely horrible.

So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die for not producing enough food to eat.


So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die for notnot be able to producinge enough food and would starve to death.

So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die forom not producing enough food to eat.

So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die forom not producing enough food to eat.

At that time, the only thing I could do to avoid being a farmer was study hard to get a job assigned by the nation.


At that time, the only thing I could do to avoid being a farmer was studying hard to get a job assigned by the nation.

At that time, the only thing I could do to avoid being a farmer was to study hard to get a job assigned by the nation.

If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have to.


If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have tohe motivation for it.

If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have to.

If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have toit wasn't necessary.

I assume you mean you didn't need to have good grades in school?

I could do a small business and work in a private enterprise for a living, and something like that, but in the early eighties, these kinds of livelihoods were all impossible.


I could do a small business and work in a private enterprise for a living, andor something like that, but in the early eighties, theseis kinds of livelihoods were allfe was impossible.

I could dorun a small business and work in a private enterprise for a living, and something like that, but. But, in the early eighties, these kinds of livelihoods were all impossible.

I could dorun a small business and, work ion a private enterprise for a living, andor something like that, but in the early eighties, these kinds of livelihoods were all impossible.

There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical and social.


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There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical, and social.

There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical and social limitations.

But anyway, I am satisfied with my current situation.


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This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But anyway, I am satisfied with my current situation.

It's hard to say whether it’s good or not.


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Maybe it’s just an ordinary life.


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But this is enough.


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But tThis is enough.

The plain and light life is a happy life.


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