Sept. 28, 2020
When I was in elementary school and middle school, why did I study hard? It seemed I had a weak body when I was a kid, and I had to do some farm work. One farm work that strongly impressed me was pulling stone mills. Every time I do that, I always feel dizzy and vomited, and those kinds of feelings are extremely horrible. So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die for not producing enough food to eat. At that time, the only thing I could do to avoid being a farmer was study hard to get a job assigned by the nation. If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have to. I could do a small business and work in a private enterprise for a living, and something like that, but in the early eighties, these kinds of livelihoods were all impossible. There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical and social. But anyway, I am satisfied with my current situation. It's hard to say whether it’s good or not. Maybe it’s just an ordinary life. But this is enough. The plain and light life is a happy life.
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When I was in elementary school and middle school, why did I study hard?
It seemed I had a weak body when I was a kid, and I had to do some farm work.
One thing about farm work that strongdeeply impressed me was pulling stone mills.
Every time I doid that, I always feelt dizzy and vomited, and those kinds of feelings are extremely horrible.
So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die forom not producing enough food to eat.
If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have toit wasn't necessary.
I assume you mean you didn't need to have good grades in school?
I could dorun a small business and, work ion a private enterprise for a living, andor something like that, but in the early eighties, these kinds of livelihoods were all impossible.
There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical and social limitations.
But anyway, I am satisfied with my current situation.
It's hard to say whether it’s good or not.
Maybe it’s just an ordinary life.
But this is enough.
The plain and light life is a happy life.
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Every time I do thaid it, I always feel dizzy and vomited, and those kinds of feelings are extremeit felt incredibly horrible.
More of preference, to me this sounds more natural
So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die forom not producing enough food to eat.
At that time, the only thing I could do to avoid being a farmer was to study hard to get a job assigned by the nation.
If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have to.
I could dorun a small business and work in a private enterprise for a living, and something like that, but. But, in the early eighties, these kinds of livelihoods were all impossible.
There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical, and social.
But anyway, I am satisfied with my current situation.
It's hard to say whether it’s good or not.
Maybe it’s just an ordinary life.
But tThis is enough.
When I was in elementary school and middle school, why did I study hard?
alternatively: When I was in school, why did I study hard?
Every time I doid that, I always feelt dizzy and vomited, and tnauseous. Those kinds of feelings awere extremely horrible.
So I thought I wasn’t qualified to be a farmer, and if I became a farmer, I would die for notnot be able to producinge enough food and would starve to death.
At that time, the only thing I could do to avoid being a farmer was studying hard to get a job assigned by the nation.
If I was growing up in the nineties, I probably would not have a good grade in school, because I didn’t really have tohe motivation for it.
I could do a small business and work in a private enterprise for a living, andor something like that, but in the early eighties, theseis kinds of livelihoods were allfe was impossible.
There are many limitations in a person’s life, including personal, historical and social.
But anyway, I am satisfied with my current situation.
It's hard to say whether it’s good or not.
Maybe it’s just an ordinary life.
But this is enough.
The plain and light life is a happy life.
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