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Worn-Out Routine
Today, I am totally worn out and I'd like to share the evening routine I stick to in such cases. Firsly, I turn off my phone. It's full of distractions one is especially susceptible to under such circumstances. Then, I make myself a hot drink and talk to someone. It can be a family member, language exchange partner, or an acquaintance on Discord. My beverage of choice is warm milk with honey, by the way.
Approximately two hours before bedtime, I take a scalding shower or bath and then peruse something on my e-reader. Once in a while, I might watch a movie with my family instead.
Before going to bed, I always clear my head by making a small diary entry. This little habit is a great way to finish your day!
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It can be a family member, language exchange partner, or an acquaintance on Discord.
Worn-Out Routine
Today, I am totally worn out and I'd like to share the evening routine I stick to in such cases.
Firsly, I turn off my phone.
It's full of distractions one isI'm especially susceptible to under such circumstances.
This sentence is grammatically correct but sounds a little old fashioned.
Then, I make myself a hot drink and talk to someone.
It can be a family member, language exchange partner, or an acquaintance on Discord.
My beverage of choice is warm milk with honey, by the way.
Approximately two hours before bedtime, I take a scalding shower or bath and then peruseread something on my e-reader.
"peruse" also sounds a little old fashioned.
Once in a while, I might watch a movie with my family instead.
Before going to bed, I always clear my head by making a small diary entry.
This little habit is a great way to finish your day!
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This was all correct and great advice. In my mind the usage of "peruse" and "one" sound overly formal and a little old fashioned, but this could also be valid choice for the writer.
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My bad, I missed the spelling of "Firstly". Firstly is the correct spelling.
Worn-Out Routine
Today, I am totally worn out and, so I'd like to share the evening routine I stick to in such cases.
More natural to express causation
Firslyt, I turn off my phone.
It's full of distractions one is especially susceptible to under such circumstances.
Grammatically fine, but a little awkward. Another way to say this might be:
"It's full of distractions, especially when you're already exhausted."
Then, I make myself a hot drink and talk to, with my beverage of choice being warm milk with honey. As I'm enjoying my drink, I chat with someone.
Better to combine the sentences that are related to each other. Also, "chat" sounds more casual than "talk."
ItThis can be a family member, a language exchange partner, or an acquaintance on Discord.
More connected to the previous sentence
My beverage of choice is warm milk with honey, by the way.
See above
Approximately two hours before bedtime, I take a scalding hot shower or bath and, then perusefind something to read on my e-reader.
I don't usually hear "scalding" on its own. Similarly, I don't hear "peruse" that often. (Might be a dialect thing?)
OBut every once in a while, I might watch a movie with my family instead.
More of a style thing, feels more connected to the previous sentence
Before going to bed, I always clear my head by makwriting a smallhort diary entry.
Not wrong, but "writing" and "short" feels more appropriate when talking about a diary.
This little habit is a great way to finish your day!
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It's full of distractions one is especially susceptible to under such circumstances. It's full of distractions one is especially susceptible to under such circumstances. Grammatically fine, but a little awkward. Another way to say this might be: "It's full of distractions, especially when you're already exhausted." It's full of distractions This sentence is grammatically correct but sounds a little old fashioned. It's full of distractions |
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Then, I make myself a hot drink and talk to someone. Then, I make myself a hot drink Better to combine the sentences that are related to each other. Also, "chat" sounds more casual than "talk." This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It can be a family member, language exchange partner, or an acquaintance on Discord.
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My beverage of choice is warm milk with honey, by the way.
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Approximately two hours before bedtime, I take a scalding shower or bath and then peruse something on my e-reader. Approximately two hours before bedtime, I take a scalding hot shower or bath I don't usually hear "scalding" on its own. Similarly, I don't hear "peruse" that often. (Might be a dialect thing?) Approximately two hours before bedtime, I take a scalding shower or bath and then "peruse" also sounds a little old fashioned. |
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Once in a while, I might watch a movie with my family instead.
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Before going to bed, I always clear my head by making a small diary entry. Before going to bed, I always clear my head by Not wrong, but "writing" and "short" feels more appropriate when talking about a diary. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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This little habit is a great way to finish your day! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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