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It's my hw I am writing a letter responding to Harlan Coben's argument.

To the editor, in the undercover parent, the novelist Harlan Coben writes that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea. Coben provides us two examples to justify her argument but I would disagree with her since her examples are refutable and too extreme. First, Coben writes about a young boy who was conversing with a pedophile using smartphone and a girl who committed suicide due to cyberbullying. The two cases are not only rare but also majority of children are neither cyberbullied nor conversing pedophile. Moreover, I would say that smartphone is not a cause of problems that the boy and the girl were suffering. There are others ways to chat with pedophile without smartphone and if the girl were born when there were no smartphones, she would get bullied in real world instead of cyber world. Smartphone is just a means and spyware will not solve the problem completely since there are other ways to do misbehavior. If spyware can protect children completely from dangers, I would install it but it cannot protect our children and infringes children’s privacy. Therefore, I go against Coben’s idea that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea.

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March 26, 2025

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essay homework..


It's my hw I am writing a letter responding to Harlan Coben's argument.


To the editor, in the undercover parent, the novelist Harlan Coben writes that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea.


To the editor, in the undercover parent, the novelist Harlan Coben writes that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea. To the editor, in the undercover parent, the novelist Harlan Coben writes that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea.

Coben provides us two examples to justify her argument but I would disagree with her since her examples are refutable and too extreme.


Coben provides us two examples to justify heris argument but I would disagree with herim since heris examples are both refutable and too extreme. Coben provides us two examples to justify his argument but I would disagree with him since his examples are both refutable and too extreme.

Coben is male

First, Coben writes about a young boy who was conversing with a pedophile using smartphone and a girl who committed suicide due to cyberbullying.


First, Coben wrcites about case where a young boy who was conversingcommunicated with a pedophile using smartphoonline and a girl who committed suicide due to cyberbullying. First, Coben cites a case where a young boy who communicated with a pedophile online and a girl who committed suicide due to cyberbullying.

The two cases are not only rare but also majority of children are neither cyberbullied nor conversing pedophile.


The two cases are not only rare but also misleading- the majority of children awere neithver cyberbullied nor conversingencountered pedophile.s online The two cases are not only rare but also misleading- the majority of children were never cyberbullied or encountered pedophiles online

Moreover, I would say that smartphone is not a cause of problems that the boy and the girl were suffering.


Moreover, I would say that smartphone itself is not a root cause of problems that the boy and the girl were sufferingthe issues. Moreover, I would say that smartphone itself is not a root cause of the issues.

There are others ways to chat with pedophile without smartphone and if the girl were born when there were no smartphones, she would get bullied in real world instead of cyber world.


There are others ways to chat with a pedophile without a smartphone and if the girl were borhad been when there were no smartphones, she would gethave been bullied in the real world instead of the cyber world. There are other ways to chat with a pedophile without a smartphone and if the girl had been when there were no smartphones, she would have been bullied in the real world instead of the cyber world.

Even without smartphones, predators could contact children through other means, and bullying would simply shift from digital to physical spaces.( Just a suggestion sentence)

Smartphone is just a means and spyware will not solve the problem completely since there are other ways to do misbehavior.


Smartphone is just a means and spyware will not solve the problem completely since there are other ways to do misbehaviore. Smartphone is just a means and spyware will not solve the problem completely since there are other ways to misbehave.

If spyware can protect children completely from dangers, I would install it but it cannot protect our children and infringes children’s privacy.


If spyware can protect children completely from dangers, I would install it but it cannot protect our children and infringes on children’s privacy. If spyware can protect children completely from dangers, I would install it but it cannot protect our children and infringes on children’s privacy.

Therefore, I go against Coben’s idea that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea.


Therefore, I go againstdisagree with Coben’s idea that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea. Therefore, I disagree with Coben’s idea that putting spyware on a child’s smartphone is a good idea.

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