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Epic

As for the epic, Beowulf is a classic hero, a manly man, brave and courageous. Indeed, when news about a monster attacking a far off kingdom reaches Beowulf’s ears, he instead of chickening out decides to take a step forward, and thereupon he sets off with a bunch of warriors to fight the creature. Always with the sole goal in mind of gaining glory and prestige, as he admits when he presents himself in front of the king.

The fight against Grendel is a massacre, but Beowulf never doubts his ability. Until that eventually, his security pays off, and finally, in close combat between the two, Beowulf gives Grendel the final blow. Mortally wounded Grendel flees the bloodshed, to finally die in his mother’s arms, who infuriated takes the place of her son and goes on to terrorize the Danes to quench her bloodthirst.

At this point the poem and the movie take different turns, and to be honest I may be merging both in this account. For example, in the movie, the monster was the king’s son but I’m not sure if the poem follows this narrative line. It's the same with the monster’s mother, which in the movie is a very seductive gilded reptile, but in the poem, the author follows a more classical line and the monster is depicted just as a terrifying entity without any trace of inner life. To sum up, a fantastic tale with a great soundtrack.

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Indeed, when news about a monster attacking a far off kingdom reaches Beowulf’s ears, he instead of chickening out, he decides to take a step forward, and thereupon heand and sets off with a bunch of warriors to fight the creature.

Mortally wounded, Grendel flees the bloodshed, to finally die in his mother’s arms, who. Grendel's mother, infuriated, takes the place of her son and goes on to terrorize the Danes to quench her bloodthirst.

It's the same with the monster’s mother, which in the movie is a very seductive gilded reptile, but in the poem, the author follows a more classical line and the monster is depicted just as a terrifying entity without any trace of inner life.

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sefirat

July 17, 2020

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Thanks so much =D

As for the epic, Beowulf is a classic hero,: a manly man, who is brave and courageous.

Since "brave" and "courageous" are adjectives used to describe what a "manly man" is, I used the relative pronouns "who is".

Indeed, when news about a monster attacking a far off kingdom reaches Beowulf’s ears, he, instead of chickening out, he decides to take a step forward, and, thereupon, he sets off with a bunch of warriors to fight the creature.

Always with the sole goal in mind of gaining glory and prestige, as he admits when he presents himself in front of the kings he admits when he presents himself in front of the king, he was always motivated by the sole goal of gaining glory and prestige.

The fight against Grendel is a massacre, but Beowulf never doubts his ability.

Until that eventually, his securityHis confidence pays off, and, finally, in close combat between the two, Beowulf gives Grendel the final blow.

MThe mortally wounded Grendel flees the bloodshed, toscene and finally dies in his mother’s arms, who i. Infuriated, Grendel's mother takes the place of her son and goes on to terrorize the Danes to quench her bloodthirst.

At this point, the poem and the movie take different turns, and, to be honest, I may be merging both in this accounthave the stories mixed up.

For example, in the movie, the monster was the king’s son but I’m not sure if the poem follows this narrative line.

The word "line" is not needed.

It's the same with the monster’s mother, whicho, in the movie, is a very seductively, gilded reptile, but in the poem, the author follows a more classical line and the monster is depicted just as a terrifying entity without any trace of inner life.

To sum up, it is a fantastic tale with a great soundtrack.

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Excellent! This is very interesting.

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sefirat

July 17, 2020

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Mil gracias, Te recomiendo la película. Te dejo el soundtrack que es genial! https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yQdxPxJW68M

Epic


As for the epic, Beowulf is a classic hero, a manly man, brave and courageous.


As for the epic, Beowulf is a classic hero,: a manly man, who is brave and courageous.

Since "brave" and "courageous" are adjectives used to describe what a "manly man" is, I used the relative pronouns "who is".

Indeed, when news about a monster attacking a far off kingdom reaches Beowulf’s ears, he instead of chickening out decides to take a step forward, and thereupon he sets off with a bunch of warriors to fight the creature.


Indeed, when news about a monster attacking a far off kingdom reaches Beowulf’s ears, he, instead of chickening out, he decides to take a step forward, and, thereupon, he sets off with a bunch of warriors to fight the creature.

Indeed, when news about a monster attacking a far off kingdom reaches Beowulf’s ears, he instead of chickening out, he decides to take a step forward, and thereupon heand and sets off with a bunch of warriors to fight the creature.

Always with the sole goal in mind of gaining glory and prestige, as he admits when he presents himself in front of the king.


Always with the sole goal in mind of gaining glory and prestige, as he admits when he presents himself in front of the kings he admits when he presents himself in front of the king, he was always motivated by the sole goal of gaining glory and prestige.

The fight against Grendel is a massacre, but Beowulf never doubts his ability.


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Until that eventually, his security pays off, and finally, in close combat between the two, Beowulf gives Grendel the final blow.


Until that eventually, his securityHis confidence pays off, and, finally, in close combat between the two, Beowulf gives Grendel the final blow.

Mortally wounded Grendel flees the bloodshed, to finally die in his mother’s arms, who infuriated takes the place of her son and goes on to terrorize the Danes to quench her bloodthirst.


MThe mortally wounded Grendel flees the bloodshed, toscene and finally dies in his mother’s arms, who i. Infuriated, Grendel's mother takes the place of her son and goes on to terrorize the Danes to quench her bloodthirst.

Mortally wounded, Grendel flees the bloodshed, to finally die in his mother’s arms, who. Grendel's mother, infuriated, takes the place of her son and goes on to terrorize the Danes to quench her bloodthirst.

At this point the poem and the movie take different turns, and to be honest I may be merging both in this account.


At this point, the poem and the movie take different turns, and, to be honest, I may be merging both in this accounthave the stories mixed up.

For example, in the movie, the monster was the king’s son but I’m not sure if the poem follows this narrative line.


For example, in the movie, the monster was the king’s son but I’m not sure if the poem follows this narrative line.

The word "line" is not needed.

It's the same with the monster’s mother, which in the movie is a very seductive gilded reptile, but in the poem, the author follows a more classical line and the monster is depicted just as a terrifying entity without any trace of inner life.


It's the same with the monster’s mother, whicho, in the movie, is a very seductively, gilded reptile, but in the poem, the author follows a more classical line and the monster is depicted just as a terrifying entity without any trace of inner life.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

To sum up, a fantastic tale with a great soundtrack.


To sum up, it is a fantastic tale with a great soundtrack.

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