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Ep. 6: Exam vs journal

I am really appreciate those who corrected my journal Ep.1,2,3,4, and 5.
Actually, I didn’t expect that I could receive corrections like this detailed one.
Those corrections and advices are valuable and significant.
Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can find it nowhere but here.

I am truly satisfied with the corrections for kanji stories.
This is very practical.
I am thinking I’m going to write “my favourite quotes” next.
It will not finish one episode. I have many nice quotes come up my mind. I can’t choose one.

But before that, I have quarterly exam on first week of February.
Usually I allocate one month for preparing for exam.
It looks I suddenly disappear from society.
I might reply in slow on WhatsApp or twitter or FB even sometimes not replying.
I might not going out with my friends. Some of them do come to my place for checking whether I am still alive or not. In order to avoid being rude not to respond and giving them unnecessary worries, I change my icon on my profile. That icon says “ Allison is super duper busy at exam.” Even that sometimes friends ask me to going out or visiting my place especially weekends. Eh? Didn’t they notice my icon? Are they wanting me that much? Or just they are being selfish? I put dry smile on my face and politely decline. Haha! I still love them but I don’t want to stop thinking or writing once I started my essay or assignments until my hands stop writing. If I stopped, my ideas or thoughts gone somewhere and I can never recall them.

I might not so active in January, but I’m still alive on this website.
I want to correct, the problem is correction has to be done at one time.
Once correction has started, it can’t send in the middle of that.
Anyway I’ll try best both journal and exam :)
Thanks for reading until the end.

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Eh?

Didn’t they notice my icon?

Thanks for reading until the end.

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I am really appreciate those who corrected my journals Ep.1, 2, 3, 4, and 5.

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Those corrections and advices given are invaluable and significantto me.

"Valuable and significant" means that they have great meaning to you. "Invaluable" is probably a better word, and it means to be of great use, indispensable.

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I am thinking I’m going to writeof writing about “my favourite quotes” next.

Or, you can also say: "I think I'm going to write about 'my favourite quotes' next."

"Thinking" means that you are still considering doing this topic. "Think" means that you have already decided on the topic and may or may not go through with that topic. Choose the one that fits your intention more.

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AreDo they enjoy my company that much?/Do they wanting to see me that much?

Usually, for a humorous line like this, people would say something like: "You must really enjoy my company, huh." To "enjoy someone's company" means to like being around someone.

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Once a correction has started, it can’t send in the middle of thatuncompleted.

If you aren't replying to comments, the corrections themselves can be saved in a draft actually.

I can’t choose one.

Eh?

Didn’t they notice my icon?

Are they wanting me that much?

Haha!

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Ep. 6: Exam vs jJournal

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Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can find ithem nowhere but here.

"Instructions" is plural so it requires a plural pronoun.

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But before that, however, I have quarterly exam ons the first week of February.

We avoid beginning a sentence with "but" or "however" in written English.

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I want to correct, t. The problem is correctionthat each edit has to be done at one time.

No, it doesn't. The website saves it for later correction.

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If I stopped, my ideasI lose my train orf thoughts gone somewhere and I can never recall themget it back.

"losing my train of thought" is a common phrase in english, it basically means losing your ideas or thoughts and forgetting what you were thinking about

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Ep. 6: Exam vs journal


Ep. 6: Exam vs jJournal Ep. 6: Exam vs Journal

Ep. 6: Exam vs jJournal Ep. 6: Exam vs Journal

I am really appreciate those who corrected my journal Ep.1,2,3,4, and 5.


I am really appreciate those who corrected my journals Ep.1,2,3,4, and 5. I am really appreciate those who corrected my journals Ep.1,2,3,4, and 5.

I am really appreciateive of those who corrected my journals, Ep.1,2,3,4, and -5. I am really appreciative of those who corrected my journals, Ep.1-5.

I am really appreciate those who corrected my journals Ep.1, 2, 3, 4, and 5. I really appreciate those who corrected my journals Ep.1, 2, 3, 4, and 5.

Actually, I didn’t expect that I could receive corrections like this detailed one.


Actually, I didn’t expect that I could receive corrections likthat are this detailed one. Actually, I didn’t expect that I could receive corrections that are this detailed.

saying "this [adjective]" is a some what informal way of saying that something is unexpectedly something. an example could be "i didn't know this food would be this delicious". i made a half-guess on what you were trying to say, so if you weren't trying to say this, i apologize!

Actually, I didn’t expect that I cwould receive corrections like thiso detailed one. Actually, I didn’t expect that I would receive corrections so detailed.

subjunctive case

Actually, I didn’t expect that I cwould receive corrections like this detailed onesuch detailed corrections. Actually, I didn’t expect that I would receive such detailed corrections.

Those corrections and advices are valuable and significant.


Those corrections and advices are valuable and significant. Those corrections and advice are valuable and significant.

Those corrections and pieces of advices are valuable and significant. Those corrections and pieces of advice are valuable and significant.

Those corrections and advices given are invaluable and significantto me. Those corrections and advice given are invaluable to me.

"Valuable and significant" means that they have great meaning to you. "Invaluable" is probably a better word, and it means to be of great use, indispensable.

Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can find it nowhere but here.


Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can only find it nowhere but here. Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can only find it here.

Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can find ithem nowhere but here. Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can find them nowhere but here.

"Instructions" is plural so it requires a plural pronoun.

Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can find ithem nowhere but herelse. Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can find them nowhere else.

I am truly satisfied with the corrections for kanji stories.


I am truly satisfied with the corrections for my kanji stories. I am truly satisfied with the corrections for my kanji stories.

I am truly satisfied with the corrections for the kanji stories. I am truly satisfied with the corrections for the kanji stories.

This is very practical.


This isey are very practical. They are very practical.

You're still talking about the corrections which is plural so, again, it requires a plural pronoun.

I am thinking I’m going to write “my favourite quotes” next.


I am thinking I’m going to write about my favourite quotes next. I am thinking I’m going to write about my favourite quotes next.

I am thinking I’m going to write “about writing about my favourite quotes”ations next. I am thinking about writing about my favorite quotations next.

"Favorite" is how we spell it in the US.

I am thinking I’m going to writeof writing about “my favourite quotes” next. I am thinking of writing about “my favourite quotes” next.

Or, you can also say: "I think I'm going to write about 'my favourite quotes' next." "Thinking" means that you are still considering doing this topic. "Think" means that you have already decided on the topic and may or may not go through with that topic. Choose the one that fits your intention more.

It will not finish one episode.


It will not finishbe just one episode. It will not be just one episode.

It will not be finish one episodeed in one journal entry. It will not be finished in one journal entry.

Episodes are more for television programs.

It will not be finish one episodeed with just one episode as I have many nice quotes that come to mind. It will not be finished with just one episode as I have many nice quotes that come to mind.

Combining the next sentence with this one.

I have many nice quotes come up my mind.


I have many nice quotes come up mythat come to mind. I have many nice quotes that come to mind.

I have mMany nice quoteations come up myto mind. Many nice quotations come to mind.

I can’t choose one.


I can’t choose just one. I can’t choose just one.

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I can’t choose only one. I can’t choose only one.

"Only" emphsaizes the fact that you can't choose one.

But before that, I have quarterly exam on first week of February.


But before that, however, I have quarterly exam ons the first week of February. Before that, however, I have quarterly exams the first week of February.

We avoid beginning a sentence with "but" or "however" in written English.

But before that, I have a quarterly exam on the first week of February. But before that, I have a quarterly exam on the first week of February.

Or, if you have multiple: "But before that, I have quarterly exams on the first week of February."

Usually I allocate one month for preparing for exam.


Usually, I allocate one month forto preparinge for exams. Usually, I allocate one month to prepare for exams.

Usually, I allocate one month forto preparinge for exams. Usually, I allocate one month to prepare for exams.

Usually, I allocate one month forto preparing for exams. Usually, I allocate one month to preparing for exams.

Fixed the grammar here, but it seems off since you don't say when you allocate the time. So, it's better this way: "Usually, I allocate the month prior to an exam to prepare for it."

It looks I suddenly disappear from society.


It looks as if I suddenly disappear from society. It looks as if I suddenly disappear from society.

It looks as if I suddenly disappear from society. It looks as if I suddenly disappear from society.

I might reply in slow on WhatsApp or twitter or FB even sometimes not replying.


I might reply in slowly on WhatsApp or t, Twitter or FB even, sometimes not replying at all. I might reply slowly on WhatsApp, Twitter or FB, sometimes not replying at all.

I might reply in slow oly in WhatsApp or tTwitter or FB evenand sometimes notI don't even replying. I might reply slowly in WhatsApp or Twitter or FB and sometimes I don't even reply.

I might reply in slowly on WhatsApp or t, Twitter or FB even, sometimes not even replying at all. I might reply slowly on WhatsApp, Twitter or FB, sometimes not even replying at all.

I might not going out with my friends.


I might not going out with my friends. I might not go out with my friends.

I might not going out with my friends. I might not go out with my friends.

A verb which follows a helper verb like "might" always takes the infinitive form.

I might not going out with my friends. I might not go out with my friends.

Some of them do come to my place for checking whether I am still alive or not.


Some of them doactually come to my place forto checking whether if I am still alive or not. Some of them actually come to my place to check if I am still alive or not.

Some of them do come to my place forvisit me to checking whether I am still alive or not. Some of them do visit me to check whether I am still alive or not.

S..., though some of them do come to my place forover to checking whether I aor not I'm still alive or not. ..., though some of them do come over to check whether or not I'm still alive.

You can connect the previous sentence to this one using "though." "Come over" is a way to say "come to my place."

In order to avoid being rude not to respond and giving them unnecessary worries, I change my icon on my profile.


In order to avoid being rude by not to responding and giving them unnecessary worries, I change my icon on my profile. In order to avoid being rude by not responding and giving them unnecessary worries, I change my icon on my profile.

In order to avoid being rude by not to responding and givworrying them unnecessary worriesily, I change my icon on my profile. In order to avoid being rude by not responding and worrying them unnecessarily, I change my icon on my profile.

頭がいいですね。

In order to avoid being rude by not to responding and giving them unnecessarily worriesying them, I change my icon on my profilprofile picture. In order to avoid being rude by not responding and uncessarily worrying them, I change profile picture.

That icon says “ Allison is super duper busy at exam.” Even that sometimes friends ask me to going out or visiting my place especially weekends.


That icon says “ Allison is super duper busy at exam.” Even thaten, sometimes friends ask me to going out, or visiting my placecome around to visit, especially on weekends. That icon says “ Allison is super duper busy at exam.” Even then, sometimes friends ask me to go out, or come around to visit, especially on weekends.

That icon says, "Allison is super duper busy atbecause of exam.”s." Even thatwhen I do that friends still sometimes friends ask me to going out or visiting (my place) especially on weekends. That icon says, "Allison is super duper busy because of exams." Even when I do that friends still sometimes ask me to go out or visit (my place) especially on weekends.

If a verb follows "to," it always is in the infinitive form.

That icon says: Allison is super duper busy atwith exams.” EBut even that sometimes frienden, my friends will sometimes ask me to going out or visiting my place, especially on the weekends. That icon says:Allison is super duper busy with exams.” But even then, my friends will sometimes ask me to go out or visit my place, especially on the weekends.

I saw in the other comment that people say to avoid "but" and "however" in the beginning of sentences. I was told that in elementary school as well. I think you should try to stick with it too. Just a thing to keep in mind though, this is not a strict rule. You follow it when you learn the language, but you learn when you can break it. It is perfectly fine to use "but" and "however" in the beginning of sentences. It has a different nuance and style than when used as a conjunction. You just have to learn when it is best to use those conjunctions as sentence starters. I just don't want you to be like me, convinced into thinking that it is not acceptable to use "but," "however" and any other conjunctions this way when that is just not true at all.

Eh?


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Didn’t they notice my icon?


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Are they wanting me that much?


Are they wantmissing me that much? Are they missing me that much?

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AreDo they enjoy my company that much?/Do they wanting to see me that much? Do they enjoy my company that much?/Do they want to see me that much?

Usually, for a humorous line like this, people would say something like: "You must really enjoy my company, huh." To "enjoy someone's company" means to like being around someone.

Or just they are being selfish?


Or justare they arejust being selfish? Or are they just being selfish?

Or justperhaps they are just being selfish? Or perhaps they are just being selfish?

I put dry smile on my face and politely decline.


I put a dry smile on my face and politely decline. I put a dry smile on my face and politely decline.

I put a dry smile on my face and politely decline. I put a dry smile on my face and politely decline.

Or: "Putting a dry smile on my face, I politely decline."

Haha!


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I still love them but I don’t want to stop thinking or writing once I started my essay or assignments until my hands stop writing.


I still love them but I don’t want to stop thinking or writing once I started my essay or assignments until my hands stop writing. I still love them but I don’t want to stop thinking or writing once I started my essay or assignments.

I still love them but I don’t want to stop thinking or writing once I started my essay or assignments until my hands stop writingthey're done. I still love them but I don’t want to stop thinking or writing once I start my essay or assignments until they're done.

I still love them, but I don’t want to stop thinking or writing once I started my essay or assignments until my hands stop writing., I don't want to stop working until everything is completed I still love them, but once I start my assignments, I don't want to stop working until everything is completed

I just rephrase dthings here so it's less awkward. But yeah, same here. Once I set myself to an assignment, I try my best to not cut it halfway. I always end up doing work for many hours straight, but it works out in the end I guess.

If I stopped, my ideas or thoughts gone somewhere and I can never recall them.


If I stopped, my ideasI lose my train orf thoughts gone somewhere and I can never recall themget it back. If I stopped, I lose my train of thought and can never get it back.

"losing my train of thought" is a common phrase in english, it basically means losing your ideas or thoughts and forgetting what you were thinking about

If I stopped, my ideas or thoughts gone somewhere else and I can never recalllaim them. If I stop, my ideas or thoughts go somewhere else and I can never reclaim them.

If I stopped, my ideas or thoughts gone somewhere and I can never recall them. If I stopped, my ideas or thoughts gone somewhere and I can never recall them.

Refer to the other commenter about "train of though." I like what was said there, haha.

I might not so active in January, but I’m still alive on this website.


I might not so active in January, but I’m still alive on this website. I might not so active in January, but I’m still alive.

I might not be so active in January, but I’m still alctive on this website. I might not be so active in January, but I’m still active on this website.

I might not be so active in January, but I’mll still alive on this website. I might not be so active in January, but I’ll still alive on this website.

"I will" instead of "I am" since January is still in the future at the time of writing.

I want to correct, the problem is correction has to be done at one time.


I want to correct, t. The problem is correctionthat each edit has to be done at one time. I want to correct. The problem is that each edit has to be done at one time.

No, it doesn't. The website saves it for later correction.

I want to correct,do more corrections, but the problem is that corrections hasve to be done atll in one timego. I want to do more corrections, but the problem is that corrections have to be done all in one go.

Once correction has started, it can’t send in the middle of that.


Once correction has started, itI've started to correct, I can't send it in the middle of thatcorrecting. Once I've started to correct, I can't send it in the middle of correcting.

Once a correction has started, it can’t send in the middle of thatuncompleted. Once a correction has started, it can’t end uncompleted.

If you aren't replying to comments, the corrections themselves can be saved in a draft actually.

Anyway I’ll try best both journal and exam :)


Anyway I’ll try best at both my journals and exams :) Anyway I’ll try best at both my journals and exams :)

Anyway, I’ll try my best on both the journal and exams. :) Anyway, I’ll try my best on both the journal and exams. :)

Anyway, I’ll try best bothto work on these journals and exam(the exam)/exams. :) Anyway, I’ll try best to work on these journals and (the exam)/exams. :)

Thanks for reading until the end.


Thanks for reading until the end. Thanks for reading.

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