Ep. 6: Exam vs jJournal

I am really appreciate those who corrected my journals Ep.1, 2, 3, 4, and 5.

Actually, I didn’t expect that I cwould receive corrections like this detailed onesuch detailed corrections.

Those corrections and advices given are invaluable and significantto me.

"Valuable and significant" means that they have great meaning to you. "Invaluable" is probably a better word, and it means to be of great use, indispensable.

Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can find ithem nowhere but herelse.

I am truly satisfied with the corrections for the kanji stories.

I am thinking I’m going to writeof writing about “my favourite quotes” next.

Or, you can also say: "I think I'm going to write about 'my favourite quotes' next."

"Thinking" means that you are still considering doing this topic. "Think" means that you have already decided on the topic and may or may not go through with that topic. Choose the one that fits your intention more.

It will not be finish one episodeed with just one episode as I have many nice quotes that come to mind.

Combining the next sentence with this one.

I can’t choose only one.

"Only" emphsaizes the fact that you can't choose one.

But before that, I have a quarterly exam on the first week of February.

Or, if you have multiple: "But before that, I have quarterly exams on the first week of February."

Usually, I allocate one month forto preparing for exams.

Fixed the grammar here, but it seems off since you don't say when you allocate the time. So, it's better this way: "Usually, I allocate the month prior to an exam to prepare for it."

It looks as if I suddenly disappear from society.

I might reply in slowly on WhatsApp or t, Twitter or FB even, sometimes not even replying at all.

I might not going out with my friends.

S..., though some of them do come to my place forover to checking whether I aor not I'm still alive or not.

You can connect the previous sentence to this one using "though." "Come over" is a way to say "come to my place."

In order to avoid being rude by not to responding and giving them unnecessarily worriesying them, I change my icon on my profilprofile picture.

That icon says: “ Allison is super duper busy atwith exams.” EBut even that sometimes frienden, my friends will sometimes ask me to going out or visiting my place, especially on the weekends.

I saw in the other comment that people say to avoid "but" and "however" in the beginning of sentences. I was told that in elementary school as well. I think you should try to stick with it too. Just a thing to keep in mind though, this is not a strict rule. You follow it when you learn the language, but you learn when you can break it. It is perfectly fine to use "but" and "however" in the beginning of sentences. It has a different nuance and style than when used as a conjunction. You just have to learn when it is best to use those conjunctions as sentence starters. I just don't want you to be like me, convinced into thinking that it is not acceptable to use "but," "however" and any other conjunctions this way when that is just not true at all.

AreDo they enjoy my company that much?/Do they wanting to see me that much?

Usually, for a humorous line like this, people would say something like: "You must really enjoy my company, huh." To "enjoy someone's company" means to like being around someone.

Or justperhaps they are just being selfish?

I put a dry smile on my face and politely decline.

Or: "Putting a dry smile on my face, I politely decline."

I still love them, but I don’t want to stop thinking or writing once I started my essay or assignments until my hands stop writing., I don't want to stop working until everything is completed

I just rephrase dthings here so it's less awkward.

But yeah, same here. Once I set myself to an assignment, I try my best to not cut it halfway. I always end up doing work for many hours straight, but it works out in the end I guess.

If I stopped, my ideas or thoughts gone somewhere and I can never recall them.

Refer to the other commenter about "train of though." I like what was said there, haha.

I might not be so active in January, but I’mll still alive on this website.

"I will" instead of "I am" since January is still in the future at the time of writing.

I want to correct,do more corrections, but the problem is that corrections hasve to be done atll in one timego.

Once a correction has started, it can’t send in the middle of thatuncompleted.

If you aren't replying to comments, the corrections themselves can be saved in a draft actually.

Anyway, I’ll try best bothto work on these journals and exam(the exam)/exams. :)

Ep. 6: Exam vs jJournal

I am really appreciateive of those who corrected my journals, Ep.1,2,3,4, and -5.

Actually, I didn’t expect that I cwould receive corrections like thiso detailed one.

subjunctive case

Those corrections and pieces of advices are valuable and significant.

Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can find ithem nowhere but here.

"Instructions" is plural so it requires a plural pronoun.

I am truly satisfied with the corrections for my kanji stories.

This isey are very practical.

You're still talking about the corrections which is plural so, again, it requires a plural pronoun.

I am thinking I’m going to write “about writing about my favourite quotes”ations next.

"Favorite" is how we spell it in the US.

It will not be finish one episodeed in one journal entry.

Episodes are more for television programs.

I have mMany nice quoteations come up myto mind.

But before that, however, I have quarterly exam ons the first week of February.

We avoid beginning a sentence with "but" or "however" in written English.

Usually, I allocate one month forto preparinge for exams.

It looks as if I suddenly disappear from society.

I might reply in slow oly in WhatsApp or tTwitter or FB evenand sometimes notI don't even replying.

I might not going out with my friends.

A verb which follows a helper verb like "might" always takes the infinitive form.

Some of them do come to my place forvisit me to checking whether I am still alive or not.

In order to avoid being rude by not to responding and givworrying them unnecessary worriesily, I change my icon on my profile.

頭がいいですね。

That icon says “ , "Allison is super duper busy atbecause of exam.”s." Even thatwhen I do that friends still sometimes friends ask me to going out or visiting (my place) especially on weekends.

If a verb follows "to," it always is in the infinitive form.

Or justare they arejust being selfish?

I put a dry smile on my face and politely decline.

I still love them but I don’t want to stop thinking or writing once I started my essay or assignments until my hands stop writingthey're done.

If I stopped, my ideas or thoughts gone somewhere else and I can never recalllaim them.

I might not be so active in January, but I’m still alctive on this website.

I want to correct, t. The problem is correctionthat each edit has to be done at one time.

No, it doesn't. The website saves it for later correction.

Once correction has started, itI've started to correct, I can’'t send it in the middle of thatcorrecting.

Anyway, I’ll try my best on both the journal and exams. :)

Thanks for reading until the end.

I am really appreciate those who corrected my journals Ep.1,2,3,4, and 5.

Actually, I didn’t expect that I could receive corrections likthat are this detailed one.

saying "this [adjective]" is a some what informal way of saying that something is unexpectedly something. an example could be "i didn't know this food would be this delicious". i made a half-guess on what you were trying to say, so if you weren't trying to say this, i apologize!

Those corrections and advices are valuable and significant.

Since those are individually tailored instructions, I can only find it nowhere but here.

I am thinking I’m going to write “about my favourite quotes” next.

It will not finishbe just one episode.

I have many nice quotes come up mythat come to mind.

I can’t choose just one.

Usually, I allocate one month forto preparinge for exams.

I might reply in slowly on WhatsApp or t, Twitter or FB even, sometimes not replying at all.

I might not going out with my friends.

Some of them doactually come to my place forto checking whether if I am still alive or not.

In order to avoid being rude by not to responding and giving them unnecessary worries, I change my icon on my profile.

That icon says “ Allison is super duper busy at exam.” Even thaten, sometimes friends ask me to going out, or visiting my placecome around to visit, especially on weekends.

Are they wantmissing me that much?

I still love them but I don’t want to stop thinking or writing once I started my essay or assignments until my hands stop writing.

If I stopped, my ideasI lose my train orf thoughts gone somewhere and I can never recall themget it back.

"losing my train of thought" is a common phrase in english, it basically means losing your ideas or thoughts and forgetting what you were thinking about

I might not so active in January, but I’m still alive on this website.

Anyway I’ll try best at both my journals and exams :)