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Feb. 11, 2021

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Environmental Problems

Our world is constantly changing. People have created new inventions with each passing day, changing the existence of humanity to a simpler, better, and more favorable for themselves. However, there is something, that most of us do not want to take control of and alter is environmental pollution which happens because of people's effects. Thousands of marine inhabitants are dying because of water pollution because someone decides to dump waste in rivers or seas. Debris goes on trickle to water, reaches the vortex in the ocean, and stays there, accumulates, and forming a gyre. Animals eat this rubbish, thinking that is food, and dying in the outcome. The same occurs and in the land. Persons throw out garbage in certain places, which are called landfills, where waste is accrued and stored without sorting out, recycling, and destroying, because of that appear highly toxic harmful stew is called leachate. It harms not only soil and its inhabitants but also rivers, lakes, seas, and oceans, poisoning them with pollutants.
Anyway, to my way of thinking, the most important environmental problem is plastic. Plastics are a wide range of synthetic or semi-synthetic materials, that use polymers as the main ingredient. The plasticity during production makes it possible for plastic to be molded, extruded, or pressed into solid objects of various shapes, making it an adaptable material for many different uses. On the one hand, it has some advantages one of which is using plastic people have made many species of comfortable items, which we use every day. Also, this material is cheap, which makes these things less expensive. Nevertheless, there are disadvantages, which in addition are much more than pluses. First, plastic is one of the most non-biodegradable materials (degradable for about thousands of years) because of its composition which includes oil and gas that chemically binding their molecules together. Second, plastic is the most common material produced by humanity because of its multifunctionality and usability. Therefore, people most frequently use plastic objects, hence, and throw out they mostly. Third, most of the users do not dump plastic waste in certain places, especially has created for that, which called recycle containers. If we throw away plastic in these containers, then the content goes to the refinery, a place, where plastic is recycled, and after, it may be used again. Although these places exist, only some of the people use them. These are the most significant issues with plastic, as a result of which arise environmental pollutions, which I mentioned above.
From my standpoint, all environmental troubles appear because of people and their mindless attitude to nature. Many of them just live without thinking about their harming the surrounding world. The little wrapper, dumping on the land, do terrible damage to the earth. Nevertheless, the bottle, throwing out on the recycle container can help handle widespread pollution, which can soon destroy all life.


Наш мир постоянно меняется. Люди с каждым днем создают новые изобретения, изменяя существование человечества на более простое, лучшее и более благоприятное для себя. Однако есть кое-что, что большинство из нас не хочет брать под контроль и изменять, - это загрязнение окружающей среды, которое происходит из-за воздействия людей. Тысячи морских обитателей умирают из-за загрязнения воды, потому что кто-то решает сбрасывать отходы в реки или моря. Мусор течет в воду, достигает водоворота в океане и остается там, накапливаясь и образуя кучу мусора. Животные едят этот мусор, думая, что это еда, и в результате умирают. То же самое и на суше. Люди выбрасывают мусор в определенных местах, которые называются свалками, где отходы накапливаются и хранятся без сортировки, переработки и уничтожения, из-за чего появляются высокотоксичные вредные вещества, называемые сточные воды. Он вредит не только почве и ее обитателям, но и рекам, озерам, морям и океанам, отравляя их загрязнителями.
В любом случае, на мой взгляд, самая важная экологическая проблема - это пластик. Пластмассы - это широкий спектр синтетических или полусинтетических материалов, в которых в качестве основного ингредиента используются полимеры. Пластичность во время производства делает возможным формование, экструзию или прессование пластика в твердые предметы различной формы, что делает его пригодным материалом для множества различных применений. С одной стороны, у этого есть некоторые преимущества, одно из которых состоит в том, что из пластика люди создают множество видов удобных вещей, которые мы используем каждый день. Кроме того, этот материал дешев, что удешевляет эти вещи. Тем не менее есть недостатки, которых вдобавок гораздо больше, чем плюсов. Во-первых, пластик - один из наиболее не поддающихся биологическому разложению материалов (разлагается в течение примерно тысячи лет) из-за его состава, который включает нефть и газ, которые химически связывают свои молекулы вместе. Во-вторых, пластик - самый распространенный материал, производимый человечеством, из-за его многофункциональности и удобства использования. Поэтому люди чаще всего используют пластиковые предметы, а значит, и выбрасывают их чаще всего. В-третьих, большинство пользователей не сбрасывают пластмассовые отходы в определенные места, в специально созданных для них контейнеры. Если мы выбрасываем пластик в эти контейнеры, то содержимое отправляется на нефтеперерабатывающие заводы, в места, где пластик перерабатывается, а затем его можно использовать снова. Хотя эти места и существуют, ими пользуются лишь некоторые люди. Это наиболее важные проблемы с пластиком, в результате которых возникают загрязнения окружающей среды, о которых я упоминал выше.
С моей точки зрения, все экологические проблемы возникают из-за людей и их бездумного отношения к природе. Многие из них просто живут, не задумываясь о нанесении вреда окружающему миру. Маленькая обертка, свалившаяся на землю, наносит земле ужасный урон. Тем не менее, выброс бутылки в контейнер для вторичного использования может помочь справиться с широко распространенным загрязнением, которое вскоре может уничтожить все живое.

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Environmental Problems

Our world is constantly changing.

People have created new inventions with each passing day, changing the existence of humanity to abe simpler, better, and more favorable for themselves.

However, there is something, that most of us do not want to take control of and alter and that is environmental pollution which happens because of people's effectactions.

Thousands of marine inhabitantcreatures are dying because of water pollution because someone decides to dump waste in rivers or seas.

'Marine inhabitants' isn't common usage. Though a native speaker would understand what you meant.

Debris goes on to trickle into water, reaches the vortex in the ocean, and stays there, accumulates, and formings a gyre.

Animals eat this rubbish, thinking that it is food, and dying in theas an outcome.

The same occurs and ion the land.

'On land' without the 'the' would sound natural too.

Personsople throw out garbage in certain places, which are called landfills, where waste is accrued and stored without sorting outbeing sorted, recyclinged, and destroyinged, because of that appear highly toxic harmful stew is called leachate appears.

It harms not only soil and its inhabitants but also rivers, lakes, seas, and oceans, poisoning them with pollutants.

Anyway, to my way ofmy thinking is, the most important environmental problem is plastic.

Plastics are a wide range of synthetic or semi-synthetic materials, that use polymers as the main ingredient.

The plasticity during production makes it possible for plastic to be molded, extruded, or pressed into solid objects of various shapes, making it an adaptable material for many different uses.

On the one hand, it has some advantages, one of which is by using plastic people have made many specitypes of comfortable items, which we use every day.

Also, this material is cheap, which makes these things less expensive.

Nevertheless, there are disadvantages, which in addition are much more than plusoutweigh the advantages.

This is a bit confusing, but otherwise fine. The correction is a more efficient and clearer way of saying it.

First, plastic is one of the most non-biodegradable materials (degradable fonly after abroutnd thousands of years) because of its composition which includes oil and gas that chemically binding their molecules together.

Second, plastic is the most common material produced by humanity because of its multifunctionality and usability.

Therefore, people most frequently use plastic objects, and hence, and throw out they mostlythey mostly throw them out.

Third, most of the users do not dump plastic waste in certain places, especially haspecific places created for that, which are called recycleing containers.

If we throw away plastic in these containers, then the contents goes to the refinery, a place, where plastic is recycled, and after, it may be used again.

Although these places exist, only some of the people use them.

'Some of the people' can be used for a specific group of people. But for people in general it would be 'some people.'

These are the most significant issues with plastic, as a result of which arise environmental pollution rises, which I mentioned above.

'as a result environmental issues arise' would also work.

From my standpoint, all environmental troubles appear because of people and their mindless attitude to nature.

Many of them just live without thinking about their harming of the surrounding world.

alternately: 'about how they're harming the surrounding world.'

The little wrapper, dumpinged on the land, do terrible damage to the earth.

'Littered' instead of 'dumped' would also work really well here. Dumped is more often used with large amounts of things so it sounds a little of being used with a 'little wrapper.'

Nevertheless, the bottle, throwing out onrowing a bottle out into the recycleing container can help handle widespread pollution, which can soon destroy all life.

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'Rubbish' is British English and 'garbage' is American English. Both are right but I'd recommend choosing one and being consistent.

Just a tip: you can say 'recycling' on its own if you want instead of repeating 'recycling container' (although recycling container is fine). So for example: 'throwing a bottle into the recycling'. Of even: 'recycling a bottle.'

Overall well done, this was a very interesting post!

Environmental Problems


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Our world is constantly changing.


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People have created new inventions with each passing day, changing the existence of humanity to a simpler, better, and more favorable for themselves.


People have created new inventions with each passing day, changing the existence of humanity to abe simpler, better, and more favorable for themselves.

However, there is something, that most of us do not want to take control of and alter is environmental pollution which happens because of people's effects.


However, there is something, that most of us do not want to take control of and alter and that is environmental pollution which happens because of people's effectactions.

Thousands of marine inhabitants are dying because of water pollution because someone decides to dump waste in rivers or seas.


Thousands of marine inhabitantcreatures are dying because of water pollution because someone decides to dump waste in rivers or seas.

'Marine inhabitants' isn't common usage. Though a native speaker would understand what you meant.

Debris goes on trickle to water, reaches the vortex in the ocean, and stays there, accumulates, and forming a gyre.


Debris goes on to trickle into water, reaches the vortex in the ocean, and stays there, accumulates, and formings a gyre.

Animals eat this rubbish, thinking that is food, and dying in the outcome.


Animals eat this rubbish, thinking that it is food, and dying in theas an outcome.

The same occurs and in the land.


The same occurs and ion the land.

'On land' without the 'the' would sound natural too.

Persons throw out garbage in certain places, which are called landfills, where waste is accrued and stored without sorting out, recycling, and destroying, because of that appear highly toxic harmful stew is called leachate.


Personsople throw out garbage in certain places, which are called landfills, where waste is accrued and stored without sorting outbeing sorted, recyclinged, and destroyinged, because of that appear highly toxic harmful stew is called leachate appears.

It harms not only soil and its inhabitants but also rivers, lakes, seas, and oceans, poisoning them with pollutants.


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Anyway, to my way of thinking, the most important environmental problem is plastic.


Anyway, to my way ofmy thinking is, the most important environmental problem is plastic.

Plastics are a wide range of synthetic or semi-synthetic materials, that use polymers as the main ingredient.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

The plasticity during production makes it possible for plastic to be molded, extruded, or pressed into solid objects of various shapes, making it an adaptable material for many different uses.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

On the one hand, it has some advantages one of which is using plastic people have made many species of comfortable items, which we use every day.


On the one hand, it has some advantages, one of which is by using plastic people have made many specitypes of comfortable items, which we use every day.

Also, this material is cheap, which makes these things less expensive.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Nevertheless, there are disadvantages, which in addition are much more than pluses.


Nevertheless, there are disadvantages, which in addition are much more than plusoutweigh the advantages.

This is a bit confusing, but otherwise fine. The correction is a more efficient and clearer way of saying it.

First, plastic is one of the most non-biodegradable materials (degradable for about thousands of years) because of its composition which includes oil and gas that chemically binding their molecules together.


First, plastic is one of the most non-biodegradable materials (degradable fonly after abroutnd thousands of years) because of its composition which includes oil and gas that chemically binding their molecules together.

Second, plastic is the most common material produced by humanity because of its multifunctionality and usability.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Therefore, people most frequently use plastic objects, hence, and throw out they mostly.


Therefore, people most frequently use plastic objects, and hence, and throw out they mostlythey mostly throw them out.

Third, most of the users do not dump plastic waste in certain places, especially has created for that, which called recycle containers.


Third, most of the users do not dump plastic waste in certain places, especially haspecific places created for that, which are called recycleing containers.

If we throw away plastic in these containers, then the content goes to the refinery, a place, where plastic is recycled, and after, it may be used again.


If we throw away plastic in these containers, then the contents goes to the refinery, a place, where plastic is recycled, and after, it may be used again.

Although these places exist, only some of the people use them.


Although these places exist, only some of the people use them.

'Some of the people' can be used for a specific group of people. But for people in general it would be 'some people.'

These are the most significant issues with plastic, as a result of which arise environmental pollutions, which I mentioned above.


These are the most significant issues with plastic, as a result of which arise environmental pollution rises, which I mentioned above.

'as a result environmental issues arise' would also work.

From my standpoint, all environmental troubles appear because of people and their mindless attitude to nature.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Many of them just live without thinking about their harming the surrounding world.


Many of them just live without thinking about their harming of the surrounding world.

alternately: 'about how they're harming the surrounding world.'

The little wrapper, dumping on the land, do terrible damage to the earth.


The little wrapper, dumpinged on the land, do terrible damage to the earth.

'Littered' instead of 'dumped' would also work really well here. Dumped is more often used with large amounts of things so it sounds a little of being used with a 'little wrapper.'

Nevertheless, the bottle, throwing out on the recycle container can help handle widespread pollution, which can soon destroy all life.


Nevertheless, the bottle, throwing out onrowing a bottle out into the recycleing container can help handle widespread pollution, which can soon destroy all life.

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