Thank Yyou.

Santiago dreamed for a second time withof a hideden treasure in the pyramids.

I have had to learn that in Spanish, the phrase translates to "dreaming with," but in English, it is "dreaming of," más como "soñar de"

It's curious that he had this dream while he slept in a ruined church, accompanyied ofby his sheep.

often, adding on to a word ending in -y makes the letter change to an -i

"by" is the correct term here, although I struggle to explain why, other than it is heard spoken like this

Isn't it symbolic that a revelation so important revelation happened in a broken place, apparently without a value?

Again, I struggle to explain the rules of English grammar, but the above would sound natural

OR this might be even more natural-sounding

Isn't it symbolic that such/so important a revelation happened in a broken, worthless place?

Like if, exactly when everything looks deteriorated or in ruins, arrive a signal comes that tells you: there is still something for you beyond this place.

OR

"there comes a signal that tells you"

And like Santiago, sometimes we need to listen the same message twice to believe oin it.

DoHave you also had had dreams or intuitions that repeat, like if the life is insisting on something?

most of the time, the article is dropped before a general idea noun

1. "la muerte" is just "death"
2. "el arte" is just "art"

etcétera

My goal isn't to be perfect,. I only want to be understandable.

Santiago dreamed for a second time with aFor the second time, Santiago dreamed of hideden treasure within the pyramids.

Fixed the sentences construction.

It's curious thatfunny considering he had this dream while he sleptsleeping in a ruined church, accompanyied ofby his sheep.

Fixed some grammar points.

Isn't it symbolic that a sosuch an important revelation happened in a broke place, apparentsuch an unruly place, seemingly without a value?

Unless made clear before I the reader probably wouldn't consider this a "revelation".

This (this story/passage?) made me think howabout the many times I had've had clarity in the middle of chaos.

Like if, exactly when everything looks deteriorated or in ruins, arriveyou get a signal that tells you: there i's still something for you beyond this place.

And like Santiago, sometimes we need to listenhear the same message twice to believe on it.

DoHave you also had had dreams or intuitions that repeat, like if the as if your life is insisting on something?

I am going to write this using informalmperfect English.

If you are writing about yourself and the word after it has an ''ing'' afterwards (going, walking, etc) always say ''I am'' or 'I'm''

Santiago dreamed for a second time with a hideden treasure in the pyramids.

''Hide'' is something you would do if you want to keep a object out of sight. (I will hide the milk in the fridge)

Hidden is the object that is already been placed out of sight. (The treasure is hidden)

It's curious that he had this dream while he slept in a ruined church, accompanyied of his sheep.

''accompanied'' Grammar mistake

Isn' it not symbolic that a so important revelation happened in a broke place, apparently without a value?

''Isn't'' can be written as ''Is it not..''

No need to put ''a'' before ''value''

This made me think how many times I had had clarity in middle of chaos.

You wrote the same word, ''had'', twice.

LikeWhat if, exactly when everything looks deteriorated or in ruins, arriveThere is a signal that tells you: there is still something for you beyond this place.

''What if'' is better than ''Like if'' since you are giving the reader a question to think about.

''A arrival signal that tells you'' does not make sense, arrival is used for a object or a person. Instead, write ''There is a signal'' since you are stating that the signal is there as well.

And like Santiago, sometimes we need to listen the same message twice to believe on it.

No need for ''on'' before ''it''

Do you also had had dreams or intuitions that repeat, like if the life is insisting on something?

Wrote ''had'' twice.

''Like if'' can be used here, since you are going into detail about the question that you gave to the reader.

Santiago dreamed for a second time withof a hideden treasure in the pyramids.

It's curious that he had this dream while he slept in a ruined church, accompanyied ofby his sheep.

Isn't symbolic that a sosuch an important revelation happened in a broken place, apparently without awithout any apparent value?

This made me think about how many times I had had clarity in the middle of chaos.

Like if,It is exactly when everything looks to be deteriorated or in ruins, arrivewill a signal thatarrive to tell you: there is still something for you beyond this place.

And like Santiago, sometimes we need to listen to the same message twice to believe on it.

DoHave you also had had dreams or intuitions that repeat, like if theas if life is insisting on something?