Nov. 29, 2022
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These past few days, the weather has gotten colder. Right now it's only 5 degrees Celsius.
Usually, I don't feel that cold if the temperature is above ten degrees Celsius, otherwise I feel very uncomfortable.
I am searching for information online to see cities where their lowest temperatures are above ten in the winter.
I guess life there would be very nice if I lived in those cities.
In China, I think only cities in south China can meet the demand. For example, cities in Guangdong, Hainan, Guangxi, Fujian and Yunnan provinces.
Hopefully, I can find the best one.
Usually, I don't feel that cold if the temperature is above ten degrees Celsius, otherwise I feel very uncomfortable.
The sentence is not clear, when do you feel uncomfortable
I am searching online for information online to see cities where their lowest temperatures are above ten in the winter.
I guess life there would be very nice if I lived in those cities.
These past few days, the weather has gotten colder.
Right now it's only 5 degrees Celsius.
Usually, I don't feel that cold if the temperature is above ten degrees Celsius, otherwise I feel very uncomfortable.
Your sentence is grammatically correct but a bit hard to understand because of the double negative: "don't feel" and "otherwise." Here's an alternative: Usually, temperatures above 10°C don't feel that cold to me, but anything lower makes me feel very uncomfortable.
I am searching for information online to seeabout cities where their lowest temperatures are above ten in the winter.
alternative: I am searching online for cities whose annual minimum temperatures are above 10°C.
I guess life (there) would be very nice if I lived in one of those cities.
alternative: I guess life in one of these cities would be very nice.
In / Within China, I think only cities [in south China can meet the demand| in the south] can meet this requirement.
For example, cities in Guangdong, Hainan, Guangxi, Fujian and Yunnan provinces.
Hopefully, I can find the best one.
Feedback
Are you looking for cities where the record low temperature is above 10°C (where a temperature below 10°C has never been recorded), or where the temperature doesn't fall below 10°C during an "average" winter?
Nov. 29, 2022
I mean I want to find a city where the coldest temperature in the winter will never be below 10 celsius. Thank you very much.
Nov. 29, 2022
Then I guess you'll want to look at the record low temperatures. :-) Personally, I would choose a city in southern Taiwan.
Nov. 30, 2022
As a person in mainland China, I am not allowed to live in Taiwan.
Nov. 30, 2022
Not now, but maybe in the future.
Entry
These past few days, the weather has gotten colder.
Right now it's only 5 degrees Celsius.
Usually, I don't feel that cold if the temperature is above ten degrees Celsius, otherwise I feel very uncomfortable.
I am searching for information online to see which cities where theirhave lowest temperatures are above ten during the winter.
I guess life there would be very nice if I lived in those cities.
In China, I think only cities in south China can meet the demandmy requirement.
For example, cities in Guangdong, Hainan, Guangxi, Fujian and Yunnan provinces.
Hopefully, I can find the best one.
Feedback
It's -3 Celsius where I live and I love it! We consider this warm because it gets much colder. At least at -3, it can still snow which it's doing right now.
Nice work and good luck!
These past few days, the weather has gotten colder.
Right now it's only 5 degrees Celsius.
Usually, I don't feel that cold ifas long as the temperature is above ten degrees Celsius, otherwise I feel very uncomfortable.
Your sentence is fine, but this is a little more natural.
I am currently searching for information online to seefind cities where their lowest temperatures are above ten in the winter.
I guess life therimagine life would be very nice if I lived in those cities.
In China, I think only cities in south China can meet the demandis criteria.
Your sentence is understandable, but "meet the demand" is usually used in the context of producing products eg. "The small amount of soda cans produced in 1996 could not meet the demands of the growing soda industry."
For example, cities in Guangdong, Hainan, Guangxi, Fujian and Yunnan provinces.
Hopefully, I can find the best one.
Feedback
Good job! I hate when the weather is below 10 degrees, too.
Nov. 29, 2022
Thank you very much.
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Usually, I don't feel that cold if the temperature is above ten degrees Celsius, otherwise I feel very uncomfortable.
Usually, I don't feel that cold if the temperature is above ten degrees Celsius, but when it isn't, I feel very uncomfortable.
I am searching for information online to selocate cities where their lowest temperatures are above ten in the winter.
I guess life there would be very nice if I lived in those cities.
Confusion of tenses(although acceptable, but still a suggested minor improvement)
Nov. 29, 2022
I guess life there would be very nice if I lived in those cities.
Here I want to use subjunctive mood.
Nov. 29, 2022
Here I want to use subjunctive mood.
How to make this sentence in a subjunctive mood? Thank you.
Nov. 29, 2022
"I guess life there would be very nice if I was living in those cities"
Nov. 29, 2022
Thank you very much.
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