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peanutdream

Oct. 7, 2020

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Enola Holmes

It is a incredible movie, I have my critics though. I think the personage Sherlock Holmes has not the personality of the original Sherlock Holmes. The argumentation that is showed in the movie, about the women and how they are horrible controlled is awesome, I love that points and don't feel is just a militant point.

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It is an incredible movie, I have my criticisms though.

I think the personagelity of Sherlock Holmes hais not the same personality ofas the original Sherlock Holmes.

The argumentation that istheme showed in the movie, about the women and how they are horribley controlled, is awesome,. I love that poinose aspects and don't feel is just athink they are simply a theme about militant point.s.

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peanutdream

Oct. 7, 2020

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Thanks!

Enola Holmes

It is a incredible movie, but I have my critics thoughism.

I think the personage Sherlock Holmes has notin the movie does not have the personality of the original Sherlock Holmes.

“Has not” is grammatical but less common, unless you are trying to imitate an older or more elevated style.
“Personage” is a bit of a false friend: it is not really used to refer to specific characters.

The argumentation that isplot showedn in the movie, about the women and how they are horribley controlled is awesome,. I love that pointose themes and don't feel is just a militantlike they are just used to make a political point.

“Militant” is a false friend: in English, it refers to members of paramilitary groups, not to activists.

peanutdream's avatar
peanutdream

Oct. 7, 2020

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thanks!

Enola Holmes


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It is a incredible movie, I have my critics though.


It is a incredible movie, but I have my critics thoughism.

It is an incredible movie, I have my criticisms though.

I think the personage Sherlock Holmes has not the personality of the original Sherlock Holmes.


I think the personage Sherlock Holmes has notin the movie does not have the personality of the original Sherlock Holmes.

“Has not” is grammatical but less common, unless you are trying to imitate an older or more elevated style. “Personage” is a bit of a false friend: it is not really used to refer to specific characters.

I think the personagelity of Sherlock Holmes hais not the same personality ofas the original Sherlock Holmes.

The argumentation that is showed in the movie, about the women and how they are horrible controlled is awesome, I love that points and don't feel is just a militant point.


The argumentation that isplot showedn in the movie, about the women and how they are horribley controlled is awesome,. I love that pointose themes and don't feel is just a militantlike they are just used to make a political point.

“Militant” is a false friend: in English, it refers to members of paramilitary groups, not to activists.

The argumentation that istheme showed in the movie, about the women and how they are horribley controlled, is awesome,. I love that poinose aspects and don't feel is just athink they are simply a theme about militant point.s.

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