Dec. 17, 2025
Enjoy Current Life
Yesterday, I watched a vlog on Little Red Book. The vlogger shared her daily life in university. She recorded what she did, what she bought, and the cost of each item. I admired her for the cozy life when I was watching the vlog. After I finished watching the vlog, I thought about it carefully. I realized that when I was a university student, I also had the same lifestyle, but at that time, I didn't feel so cozy. Now, I just stepped into another phase of life. Maybe several years later, I will miss the life I'm living today. It has both painful things and wonderful things in each period of life. So, we just need to enjoy our current life.
Enjoy Your Current Life
Yesterday, I watched a vlog on Little Red Book.
If you're writing for an English-speaking audience, maybe describe or specify what kind of platform Little Red Book is? Or use the English term 'RedNote'? Maybe I'm just not cultured, but I had to look it up. Depends on your audience!
The vlogger shared her daily life in university.
She recorded what she did, what she bought, and the cost of each item.
I admired her for the cozy life whenas I was watching the vlog.
You could also say "I admired her for her cozy life".
"When" isn't wrong, but you would use "as" to indicate that as you were watching the video, you were admiring the cozy lifestyle. You could also use the word "while".
After I finished watching the vlog, I thought about it carefully.
I realized that when I was a university student, I also had the same lifestyle, but at that time, I didn't feel so cozy.
1. "also" and "same" imply the same thing-- that you share lifestyles-- so you can just use one. You could also say "I also had that lifestyle".
2. There's already a lot of commas in this sentence, and it's quite long. You don't need the comma in this second part.
When you have a lot of pauses or commas, it can come off as a run-on sentence. I might restructure this sentence this way as well: "I realized that I had the same lifestyle when I was a university student, but at the time I didn't feel so cozy."
Now, I have just stepped into another phase of life.
Maybe several years later, I will miss the life I'm living today.
It has both painful things and wonderful things in each period of life.
So, we just need to enjoy our current life.
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Really nice reflection! You connected something you were watching to the way you think about life now very eloquently.
And I agree about enjoying the moment! Thinking about your future self makes you want to enjoy the present more :D
Dec. 18, 2025
Thanks for your meticulous comments and agreement!
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Yesterday, I watched a vlog on Little Red Book. Yesterday, I watched a vlog on Little Red Book. If you're writing for an English-speaking audience, maybe describe or specify what kind of platform Little Red Book is? Or use the English term 'RedNote'? Maybe I'm just not cultured, but I had to look it up. Depends on your audience! |
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The vlogger shared her daily life in university. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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She recorded what she did, what she bought, and the cost of each item. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I admired her for the cozy life when I was watching the vlog. I admired her You could also say "I admired her for her cozy life". "When" isn't wrong, but you would use "as" to indicate that as you were watching the video, you were admiring the cozy lifestyle. You could also use the word "while". |
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After I finished watching the vlog, I thought about it carefully. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I realized that when I was a university student, I also had the same lifestyle, but at that time, I didn't feel so cozy. I realized that when I was a university student, I 1. "also" and "same" imply the same thing-- that you share lifestyles-- so you can just use one. You could also say "I also had that lifestyle". 2. There's already a lot of commas in this sentence, and it's quite long. You don't need the comma in this second part. When you have a lot of pauses or commas, it can come off as a run-on sentence. I might restructure this sentence this way as well: "I realized that I had the same lifestyle when I was a university student, but at the time I didn't feel so cozy." |
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Now, I just stepped into another phase of life. Now, I have just stepped into another phase of life. |
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Maybe several years later, I will miss the life I'm living today. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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It has both painful things and wonderful things in each period of life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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So, we just need to enjoy our current life. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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