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English wrıtıng second day

Today I will tell you about what. I woke up 10.30 in the morning. I had breakfast . I eat honey, cheese, eggs and buttered bread for breakfast.
After I practiced English 2-3 hours. Then I went out meet my friends. We went to drink coffee. Then I returned home. İt good a day.

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English wrıtıng second dayMy second day in writing in English

Today, I will tell you about what. I did.

I woke up 10.30 in the morning.

I had breakfast .

I eat honey, cheese, eggs and buttered bread for breakfast.

After that I practicsed English for 2-3 hours.

Then I went out meet my friends.

We went to drinkhave a coffee.

Then I returned home.

İt was a good a day.

English wrıtıng second dayMy Second Day of Writing in English

Today, I will tell you about whatmy day.

I woke up at 10.:30 in thethis morning.

I had breakfast .

For breakfast, I eate honey, cheese, eggs and buttered bread for breakfast.

Since you have already eaten breakfast, write this sentence in the past tense. By the way, this sounds like an amazing breakfast.

Afterward, I practiced English 2-3for two to three hours.

For numbers zero to nine, write these numbers out. For numbers starting from 10 and above, use the numerical form.

Then, I went out to meet my friends.

We went to drink coffee.

Then, I returned home.

İIt was a good a day.

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It sounds like you had an exciting day. Good job describing your day!

Today I will tell you about what I did.

I woke up at 10.:30 in the morning.

I eate honey, cheese, eggs and buttered bread for breakfast.

After that I practiced English for 2-3 hours.

İt was good a day.

Today I will tell you about what I did today.

I woke up 10.:30 in the morning.

I had breakfast .

I eat/ate honey, cheese, eggs and buttered bread for breakfast.

"Eat" here means that you eat this breakfast all the time, maybe every day. "Ate" means specifically that you had this breakfast today.

After that, I practiced English for 2-3 hours.

Then I went out to meet with my friends.

We went to drinkout for coffee.

Then I returned home.

İIt was a good a day.

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Great job

English wrıtıng second day


English wrıtıng second dayMy Second Day of Writing in English

English wrıtıng second dayMy second day in writing in English

Today I will tell you about what.


Today I will tell you about what I did today.

Today I will tell you about what I did.

Today, I will tell you about whatmy day.

Today, I will tell you about what. I did.

I woke up 10.30 in the morning.


I woke up 10.:30 in the morning.

I woke up at 10.:30 in the morning.

I woke up at 10.:30 in thethis morning.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I had breakfast .


I had breakfast .

I had breakfast .

I had breakfast .

I eat honey, cheese, eggs and buttered bread for breakfast.


I eat/ate honey, cheese, eggs and buttered bread for breakfast.

"Eat" here means that you eat this breakfast all the time, maybe every day. "Ate" means specifically that you had this breakfast today.

I eate honey, cheese, eggs and buttered bread for breakfast.

For breakfast, I eate honey, cheese, eggs and buttered bread for breakfast.

Since you have already eaten breakfast, write this sentence in the past tense. By the way, this sounds like an amazing breakfast.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

After I practiced English 2-3 hours.


After that, I practiced English for 2-3 hours.

After that I practiced English for 2-3 hours.

Afterward, I practiced English 2-3for two to three hours.

For numbers zero to nine, write these numbers out. For numbers starting from 10 and above, use the numerical form.

After that I practicsed English for 2-3 hours.

Then I went out meet my friends.


Then I went out to meet with my friends.

Then, I went out to meet my friends.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We went to drink coffee.


We went to drinkout for coffee.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

We went to drinkhave a coffee.

Then I returned home.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Then, I returned home.

This sentence has been marked as perfect!

İt good a day.


İIt was a good a day.

İt was good a day.

İIt was a good a day.

İt was a good a day.

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