Aug. 6, 2023
Yesterday, me and my parents went to visit my maternal grandparents and uncles in law. We went there for celebrating Father's Day. Usually, we'll go to a restaurant; this time we chose to take foods away and have them at home. We ordered some pizzas and fried chickens from KFC, but I'm not that into fried food so I didn't eat much. It's been a long time last time I saw them. There's a cousin of mine; he is a 6th grader and he's almost 6 feet tall. I'm very jealous because I can never get that height. And he is playing basketball for his school team, I'll definitely use him a lot on the court if I'm the coach since the height he got. Anyway, it was really nice to see them, I hope all of them are able to stay healthy and having a happy life.
昨天我和我的家人去拜訪外公外婆以及舅舅們。這次去是為了慶祝父親節。通常我們會去餐廳吃飯,但這次我們選擇把食物帶回家裡吃。我們叫了一些披薩和肯德基的炸雞,我因為不太喜歡炸物就沒有吃很多。我真的很久沒看到他們了。我有一個表弟,他今年才六年級但是已經快要180公分高了。我非常羨慕因為我永遠不可能長那麼高。他也在學校裡打校隊籃球,如果我是教練一定會因為她的身高而經常讓他上場。這次看到他們我很高興,希望他們能夠過得健康而且幸福。
English Diary 08/07/23
Yesterday, me and my parents and I went to visit my maternal grandparents and uncles -in -law.
We went there forto celebratinge Father's Day.
Usually, we'll go to a restaurant; this time we chose to take foods away and have themget takeaway and eat at home.
We ordered some pizzas and fried chickens from KFC, but I'm not that into fried food, so I didn't eat much.
It's been a long time last time I saw them.
There's aOne cousin of mine; he is a 6sixth grader and he's almost 6 feet tall.
I'm very jealous because I can never getrow that heighttall.
Andlso, he is playing basketball for his school team,. I'll would definitely use him a lot on the court if I'm were the coach since the height he gotis so tall.
Anyway, it was really nice to see them,. I hope all of them are able to stay healthy and having ae happy lifeves.
English Diary 08/07/23
In the US, this date would be written “8/7/23” without the zeros.
Yesterday, me and my parents and I went to visit my maternal grandparents and uncles in law.
舅舅 is “maternal uncle.” “Uncle-in-law” would be the uncle of your spouse, or the uncle of your sibling’s spouse, but we don’t really use the term “uncle-in-law.”
We went there forto celebratinge Father's Day.
Usually, we'll go to a restaurant; this time we chose to take foods away and have ithem at home.
We ordered some pizzas and KFC fried chickens from KFC, but I'm not that into fried food so I didn't eat much.
I changed it to “KFC fried chicken” to make it clear that the pizzas weren’t from KFC.
It's been a long time since the last time I saw them.
More natural: it’s been a long time since I last saw them.
There's a cousin of mine; he who is a 6th grader and he'is almost 6 feet tall.
I'm very jealous because I can never get that height / I will never grow that tall.
And he is playing basketball for his school team,. I'lld definitely use him a lot on the court if I'm were the coach , [since he’s that tall | with the height he’s got].
Anyway, it was really nice to see them,. I hope all of them are able to stay healthy and keep having a happy life / happy lives.
more natural: stay healthy and happy.
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Yesterday, me and my parents and I went to visit my maternal grandparents and uncles in law.
English natives get this wrong all the time don't worry
We went there forto celebratinge Father's Day.
Usually, we'll go to a restaurant; but this time we chose to take the foods away and have them at home.
We ordered some pizzas and fried chickens from KFC, but. I'm not that into fried food so I didn't eat much.
It's been a long time since the last time I saw them.
There'sI have a cousin of mine; hewho is a 6th grader and he's almost 6 feet tall.
I'm very jealous because I canwill never getbe that heighttall.
And he is playings basketball for his school team, I'll. I would definitely use him a lot on the court if I'm was the coach since the height he gotis so tall.
Anyway, it was really nice to see them,. I hope that all of them are able to stay healthy and havinge a happy life.
English Diary 08/07/23 English Diary 08/07/23 In the US, this date would be written “8/7/23” without the zeros. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
Yesterday, me and my parents went to visit my maternal grandparents and uncles in law. Yesterday, English natives get this wrong all the time don't worry Yesterday, 舅舅 is “maternal uncle.” “Uncle-in-law” would be the uncle of your spouse, or the uncle of your sibling’s spouse, but we don’t really use the term “uncle-in-law.” Yesterday, |
We went there for celebrating Father's Day. We went there We went there We went there |
Usually, we'll go to a restaurant; this time we chose to take foods away and have them at home. Usually, we'll go to a restaurant Usually, we Usually, we |
We ordered some pizzas and fried chickens from KFC, but I'm not that into fried food so I didn't eat much. We ordered some pizza We ordered some pizzas and KFC fried chicken I changed it to “KFC fried chicken” to make it clear that the pizzas weren’t from KFC. We ordered some pizzas and fried chicken |
It's been a long time last time I saw them. It's been a long time since the last time I saw them. It's been a long time since the last time I saw them. More natural: it’s been a long time since I last saw them. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
There's a cousin of mine; he is a 6th grader and he's almost 6 feet tall.
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I'm very jealous because I can never get that height. I'm very jealous because I I'm very jealous because I can never get that height / I will never grow that tall. I'm very jealous because I can never g |
And he is playing basketball for his school team, I'll definitely use him a lot on the court if I'm the coach since the height he got. And he And he is playing basketball for his school team A |
Anyway, it was really nice to see them, I hope all of them are able to stay healthy and having a happy life. Anyway, it was really nice to see them Anyway, it was really nice to see them more natural: stay healthy and happy. Anyway, it was really nice to see them |
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