March 9, 2025
English composition practice "Concert"
Thank you for your reply. I went to the concert with my friend, Ray. My favourite pianist was performing in it. I had a good time while I had been eating sweets. Then, we went to the nearby bar.
Thank you for your reply.
I went to the concert with my friend, Ray.
My favourite pianist was performing in it.
I had a good time while I had beenwas eating sweets.
You could also say: "I enjoyed eating sweets while listening to the concert."
Then, we went to the nearby bar.
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Great work! Glad you had a good time at the concert! What type of concert was it? What type of music did they play? Do you often go to concerts like this?
March 10, 2025
Thank you very much. This is a topick in English book.
However, I like listening pop music and classic music.
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English composition practice "Concert" |
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Thank you for your reply. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I went to the concert with my friend, Ray. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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My favourite pianist was performing in it. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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I had a good time while I had been eating sweets. I had a good time while I You could also say: "I enjoyed eating sweets while listening to the concert." |
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Then, we went to the nearby bar. This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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