Aug. 21, 2022
English Club
Yesterday, I took part in an English club to brush up my English skills and know other learners' level as well. If I find my skills are poorer than others, it would make me feel embarrassed and stimulate my motivation. It also works if it was the opposite situation since I would be confident in myself.
Most attendees appeared to be in their 30s or 40s. They had studied abroad in their university days or working holiday. They told me that they forgot words and phrases due to the lack of opportunities to speak in English. Fortunately, I have sufficient opportunities to communicate with native speakers at work and still in my 20s. Even though my English skills were same as theirs, I could be more fluent if I study hard since today.
English Club
Yesterday, I took part in an English club to brush up on my English skills and knowto assess the levels of the other learners' level as well.
If I find my skills are poorerworse than otheirs, itI would make me feel embarrassed and stimulate my motivationmotivated to improve.
It also works if it wasere the opposite situation since then I would befeel confident in myself abilities.
Most attendees appeared to be in their 30s or 40s.
They had studied abroad during their university days or working holiday.
They told me that they forgot words and phrases due to the lack of opportunities to speak in English.
Fortunately, I have sufficient opportunities to communicate with native speakers at work and I'm still in my 20s.
Even though my English skills were the same as theirs, I could be more fluent if I studyied hard sincefrom today forward.
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Even though my English skills were the same as theirs, I could be more fluent if I studied hard from now on.
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English Club
Yesterday, I took part in an English club to brush up my English skills and get to know other learners' level as well.
If I find my skills are poorerworse than others, it would make me feel embarrassed and stimulate my motivation.
It would also works if it was the opposite situation happened since I would be more confident in myself.
That makes it sound more natural
Most attendees appeared to be in their 30s or 40s.
They had studied abroad in their university days or working holiday.
They told me that they forgot words and phrases due to the lack of opportunities to speak in English.
Fortunately, I have sufficient opportunities to communicate with native speakers at work and (I am) still in my 20s.
Even though my English skills were the same as theirs, I could be more fluent if I study hard, sincetarting today.
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Good job.
I hope you become more fluent in English, writing is a great way to start :)
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